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1、期末作文讲评看法建议08-09上期末作文 假设你叫李明,是英国中学生约翰的笔友.请 根据他的来信内容写一封回信.针对他的问 题，谈谈你的看法,同时提出一些建议,告诉 他应该做什么,不应该做什么? Dear Liming, How is everything? As you know， I like eating hamburgers and drinking Coke. But my parents have stopped giving me pocket money. They dont allow me to have that kind of things any more only
2、because Im getting a little heavier and getting tired easily. So I feel unhappy and I dont want to talk with them at home. Im now even thinking of asking for some money from my grandparents without telling them. What should I do? Im looking forward to your advice. Yours, John Dear John, Nice to hear
3、 from you. Now I know your trouble. I think your parents are right. They love you and what they did is good for you. Its important for us to keep fit, so you shouldnt eat much junk food. Youd better eat more vegetables and fruit. You should drink water instead of Coke. Besides, why dont you do some
4、sports every day. Its good for your health, too. On the other hand, you shouldnt ask for money fromWriting together your grandparents. In my opinion, its a good idea to talk with your parents about it. If you dont spend money on junk food, your parents will keep giving you some pocket money. I hope
5、you can solve the problem soon. Yours, Li MingRelated Practice 1 假如你是李明,你的美国笔友发给你一份邮件 。请针对他的问题， 结合自己的经历, 做做 他的思想工作。告诉他你起先是如何做的， 后来有了什么变化，在给他提一些建议。 Dear Li Ming, Ive got some serious problems. All the subjects have made me very tired. Ive failed so many exams that I really want to give up my study. W
6、hat shall I do? Please help me. Tom Dear Tom, Nice to hear from you. Now I know your problems. Dont worry. I had the same problems last year. I was weak in English and I almost gave up English learning. But I kept on learning hard and doing homework more carefully than before. Now I can follow teach
7、ers and catch up with other students. I have made great progress .Ok, Let me give you some advice. First, dont give up your study. If you listen carefully in class, you are sure to get good grades soon. Second, you can ask your teachers and friends for help when you meet problems. In a word, believe
8、 in yourself and work harder, you can solve the problems soon. (范文1 领学生课上完成) Dear Tim, I also have the same kind of problems as you. At first, I used to be afraid of them. Whenever I was in trouble, I would ask somebody else for help immediately or give up without making any effort. But that made th
9、ings worse instead of better. Now I have made up my mind to fight against any difficulties. I wont give up until I have tried everything I can do. Im sure where there is a will there is a way. In this way I can not only do well in my study but also become a man. I think youd better make a list of al
10、l the problems you have come across and number them according to how easy they are to deal with. Then begin with the easiest one and try to work them out one by one. Anyway, doing is always better than talking. Li Ming （提供范文）Related Practice 2 07年（大纲卷） 根据中文提示和英文书信内容，写一封意 思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于50词的回信。 假如你叫李玲，是
11、英国中学生露茜的笔友 ，你收到了她的电子邮件。请根据她来信 的内容写一封回信。针对她的困惑，谈谈 你的看法，同时提出一些建议，告诉她应 该做什么，不应该做什么。Dear Li Ling,These days Tom Cruise, the film star, always comes into my mind. I think of him night and day. I just sit in my room and watch videos of his films again and again. Ive written hundreds of letters to him and
12、sent e-mails to his fan club, but all I get back are only photos with his names on them. I dream that some day Ill meet him and that hell feel the same way about me. I dont want to learn my lessons any more, and Ill have final exams next month.Im thinking of running away to Hollywood（好莱坞）to meet him
13、. Can you help me with the problem?Yours,Lucy Hi Lucy, Nice to hear from you. Everyone has his favorite stars and theres nothing wrong with that. I understand you. But I dont think what you do is right since you are a student. Youd better read more interesting books and have more sports in your free
14、 time. Stop writing to him and watching his films. You may also tell your problem to your parents and teachers. Im sure theyll help you. Running away to Hollywood is a wrong idea. Work hard on your lessons and get ready for the exams. Your future is in your hands. Yours, Li Ling提供范文2007中考课标卷作文 你校美籍学
15、生和刚来到北京。想了解 北京的基本情况，感到很孤独。他们 在校园网论坛上各法了一个帖子。假 设你是李华，看到他们的帖子，请写 一个回帖。首先作自我介绍，然后提 出建议，并说一说你将如何帮助他或 她。 请从下面表格中选一个题目。ABTo TomTo MaryAbout yourselfLi Hua, Class 2,Grade 3, be born in Beijing, knowLi Hua, Class 2,Grade 3, like meeting people, friendly Suggestionsbuy a map, on the Internet, watch TV, visitMake friends, talk with, read books, listen to How to help her/him Hi!Tom, Im Li Hua from Class 2, Grade 3. I was born in Beijing. I know Beijing very well. So I think I can give you some good suggestions. Why not buy a map of Beijing or a guide book? Or
