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1、1UnitUnit 2 2 TheThe UnitedUnited KingdomKingdom短文改错的行文逻辑纠错技巧短文改错的行文逻辑纠错技巧方法指导方法指导在短文改错的行文逻辑上,我们应该注意以下三种情况:1)谨记两种句式:并列句(并列连词),复合句(从属连词)。2)关注六种关系:转折关系,选择关系,递进(顺承)关系,并列关系,因果关系,同位关系。3)注意一种变化:意义的曲折变化。如肯定与否定的变化,方位与时空的转移等。典例引领典例引领 (2017 课标全国)假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有 10 处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉
2、及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(),并在其下面写出该加的词。删除:把多余的词用斜线()划掉。修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;2.只允许修改 10 处,多者(从第 11 处起)不计分。When I look at this picture of myself, I realize of how fast time flies. I had grown not only physically, and also mentally in the past few years. About one month af
3、ter this photo was took, I entered my second year of high school and become a new member of the school music club. Around me in picture are the things they were very important in my life at that time:car magazines and musical instruments. I enjoyed studying difference 2kinds of cars and planes, play
4、ing pop music, and collecting the late music albums. This picture often brings back to me many happy memories of your high school days.方法运用方法运用答案答案1.第一句:去掉第二个 of 考查动词。realize 表示“意识到”是及物动词,后接 how 引导的宾语从句,故介词 of 多余,应删除。2.第二句:hadhave 考查动词的时态。时间状语 in the past few years 提示该句应使用现在完成时,故将 had 改为 have。3.第二句:
5、andbut 考查固定搭配。not only.but also.意为“不但而且”。4.第三句:tooktaken 考查动词的语态。take 的过去式和过去分词分别为 took 和 taken,此处应用过去分词 taken。5.第三句:becomebecame 考查动词的时态。根据时间状语 About one month after this photo was taken 可知,此句应使用一般过去时,且句中 and 连接两个并列谓语,前后时态应保持一致,故将become 改为 became。6.第四句:在 picture 前加 the/this 考查冠词或限定词。此处特指上文提到的照片,故应在
6、 picture前加定冠词 the 或限定词 this。7.第四句:theythat/which 考查定语从句。关系代词 that 或 which 引导定语从句修饰先行词 the things,且在从句中作主语。8.第五句:differencedifferent 考查形容词。different kinds of 不同种类的。9.第五句:latelatest 考查形容词。根据句意可知,此处表示“最新的音乐专辑”,故应将 late 改为 latest(最新的,最近的);late 作形容词,意为“迟的,晚的”,不符合句意。10.第六句:yourmy 考查物主代词。全文以第一人称叙事,故此处 your 应改为 my。
