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1、用心感悟， 扮靓语言作文讲座Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.言之无文，行而不远义虽深，理虽当， 词不工者不成文.Evaluation only.Evaluation onl
2、y. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.方法三：讲究句式方法一:锤炼词语方法二:巧化古诗方法四：巧用修辞 Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NE
3、T 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.合理选用形象的文字合理选用形象的文字要用新鲜的词语替换陈词滥调；要用具有修饰性的词语；方法一:锤炼词语Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profil
4、e 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.练习一 (一)用动词填空：歌声委婉宁静，似溪流缓缓地（ ）干枯的心田。它就这样反复地唱着， 歌声（ ）在屋子里，（ ）着我 的心灵，是怎样的一种力量让我泪流满 面？流淌在,徜徉,洗涤Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .
5、NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.( (二二) )、根据下列句子的格式、修辞和境界，填入合适的、根据下列句子的格式、修辞和境界，填入合适的 语句：语句：悬崖上的树，风来摇过，雷来轰过，悬崖上的树，风来摇过，雷来轰过， ， ；紫岚抚过，彩虹拥过，；紫岚抚过，彩虹拥过， ， 。你。你泰然自若，宠辱不惊，看花
6、开花落，望云卷云舒。泰然自若，宠辱不惊，看花开花落，望云卷云舒。雪来压过雪来压过霜来欺过霜来欺过练习练习( (二二) )明月亲过明月亲过流霞吻过流霞吻过Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pt
7、y Ltd.(1)(1)化用古典诗词为文化用古典诗词为文 章增色章增色方法二:巧用古诗词Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.例题: 书是我的精神支柱，它重塑了我书是我的精神支柱
8、，它重塑了我 的灵魂。孔子的灵魂。孔子、王勃王勃、范仲淹范仲淹、鲁迅使我鲁迅使我 懂得了懂得了许多许多做人做人的道理的道理。每读完一本书，我就完成了一次生命的每读完一本书，我就完成了一次生命的 感悟。感悟。 Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.C
9、opyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.书是我的精神支柱，它重塑了我的灵魂。孔 子说“三人行必有我师焉”，使我懂得了谦虚 的必要；王勃说“海内存知己，天涯若比邻” ，使我懂得了友情的可贵；范仲淹说“先天下 之忧而忧，后天下之乐而乐”，使我懂得了做 人的责任；鲁迅说“不在沉默中爆发，就在沉 默中灭亡”，使我懂得了做人应具备的反抗精 神。每读完一本书，我就完成了一次生命的感悟 。 Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.
10、Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.骨气骨气片段练习：Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.
11、0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.参考下列诗句1.富贵不能淫,威武不能屈,贫 贱不能移. 2.安能摧眉折事权贵,使我不得开心颜?3.人的身躯怎能从狗的洞子爬出(叶挺)4.粉骨碎身浑不怕,要留清白在人间Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client P
12、rofile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.骨气就是孟子骨气就是孟子“ “富贵不能淫，贫贱不能移富贵不能淫，贫贱不能移” ” 的忠贞不渝；骨气就是李白的忠贞不渝；骨气就是李白“ “安能摧眉折腰事权安能摧眉折腰事权 贵，使我不得开心颜贵，使我不得开心颜” ”的傲岸不羁；骨气就是于的傲岸不羁；骨气就是于 谦谦“ “粉身碎骨浑不怕，要留青白在人间粉身碎骨浑不怕，要留青白在人间” ”的刚强的刚强 不屈；骨气就是叶挺不屈；骨气就是叶挺“ “人的身躯怎能从狗的洞子人的身躯怎能从狗
13、的洞子 爬出爬出” ”的凛然不惧。的凛然不惧。Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.夜来幽梦忽还乡。水汪汪，夜来幽梦忽还乡。水汪汪， 捕鱼忙。四寂无声，惟有馨风捕鱼忙。四寂无声，
14、惟有馨风 凉。料得年年思家时，明月夜凉。料得年年思家时，明月夜 ，芦苇浜。，芦苇浜。（2 2）仿用：一些好的诗歌，不能直）仿用：一些好的诗歌，不能直 接引用时，可以根据其形式进行巧接引用时，可以根据其形式进行巧 妙的仿写妙的仿写 Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspos
15、e Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.十年生死两茫茫,不思量,自难忘.千里孤坟,无处话 凄凉.纵使相逢应不识,尘满面,鬓如霜. 夜来幽梦忽还乡,小轩窗,正梳妆.相顾无言,惟有泪 千行.料得年年肠断处,明月夜,短松冈. 苏轼Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Cop
16、yright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.一行白鹭上青天；一行白鹭上青天； 沉舟侧畔沉舟侧畔千帆过千帆过； 芳草萋萋鹦鹉洲；芳草萋萋鹦鹉洲； 化作春泥更护花化作春泥更护花； 天生我材必有用；天生我材必有用；乐观乐观片段练习Evaluation only.Evaluation only. Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0.Created with Aspose.Slides for .NET 3.5 Client Profile 5.2.0.0. Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty Ltd.Copyright 2004-2011 Aspose Pty L
