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1、智 课 网 托 福 备 考 资 料紧扣托福写作主题，保证段落统一性-智课教育旗下智课教育本文是智课教育小编为大家带来的关于托福写作段落统一性的介绍 。考生在表达自己观点时，要时时检验自己的表达是不是还契合主题， 有没有跑题，这是托福写作中的得分点，也是扣分点。 在托福写作中，段落的统一性是一个考察点。一个段落必须有一个 中心即主题思想，该中心由主题句特别是其中的题旨来表达。整个段落 必须紧扣这个托福写作主题，这就是段落的统一性。 智课教育小编通过例子来为大家详细介绍保证段落统一性的一些方 法。 一个段落内的各个句子必须从属于一个中心，任何游离于中心思想 之外的句子都是不可取的。请看下例：Joe
2、 and I decided to take the long trip wed always wanted across the country. We were like young kids buying our camper and stocking it with all the necessities of life. Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie. We started out in early spring from Minneapolis and headed west across the northern part of the cou
3、ntry. We both enjoyed those people we met at the trailer park. Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner. To our surprise, we found that we liked the warm southern regions very much, and so we decided to stay here in New Mexico. 本段的主题句是段首句，controlling idea(中心思想)是take the long trip across the cou
4、ntry。文中出现两个irrelevant sentences，一个是Bella bakes the best rhubarb pie，这一段是讲的是Joe and I ，中间出现一个Bella是不合适的。还有，Joe received a watch at his retirement dinner这一句更是与主题句不相关。考生在四级统考的作 文卷上常常因为造出irrelevant sentences(不相关语句)而丢分，值得引起注意。 再看一个例子：My name is Roseanna, and I like to keep physically fit. I used to weigh
5、 two hundred pounds, but I joined the YMCA for an exercise class and diet program. In one year I lost eighty pounds. I feel much better and never want to have that much weight on my five-feet frame again. I bought two new suitcases last week. Everyday I practice jogging three miles, swimming fifteen
6、 laps, lifting twenty-pound weights and playing tennis for one hour. My mother was a premature baby. 本段的controlling idea 是like to deep physically fit，但段中有两个irrelevant sentences，一个是I bought two new suitcases last week，另一个是My mother was a premature baby。 从上面两个例子可以看出，native speakers同样会造出来irrelevant sentences。卷面上如果这种句子多 了，造成偏题或离题，那问题就更严重了。 以上就是智课教育小编为大家带来的关于托福写作段落统一性的介 绍。考生在表达自己观点时，要时时检验自己的表达是不是还契合主题 ，有没有跑题，这是托福写作中的得分点，也是扣分点，一定要注意。 预祝大家托福考试取得好成绩!
