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1、篇章的组织篇章的组织 根据提纲的要求，选择恰当的段落组段成篇。例如：根据提纲的要求，选择恰当的段落组段成篇。例如： 1DIRECTIONS: A. Study the following cartoon carefully and write an essay in no less than 150 words. B. Your essay must be written clearly on the ANSWER SHEET II. C. Your essay should meet the requirements below: 1. Write out the messages conv
2、eyed by the cartoon. 2. Give your comments SAMPLE As is shown in the cartoon, the hen that has just laid an egg is shouting, with her head raised high, “I ensure that my egg brings no corners and that it consists of such three parts as eggshell, egg white and yolk.“ What Ive mentioned above is the s
3、urface messages conveyed by the cartoon. It seems from the hens proud look that she is expected to make a promise for the egg she lays. It fact, it is clear that the hen promises what turns out to be her own duty. There are some possible reasons for this common social phenomenon. For one thing, the
4、social competition is becoming so fierce that all trades tend to produce ads to make themselves better known to the public. For another, theyre not prepared to face the challenge and as a result, they can do little except declare their own duty as something praiseworthy. In my opinion, every trade s
5、hould try every means to improve its competitive forces instead of boasting like the hen in the cartoon. Therefore, I draw my conclusion that just as a hen shouldnt promise for her egg, so no trade in the society should boast themselves for something within their duty and that they should work hard
6、to provide more benefits for the society. In a word, try not to be like the boasting hen in our life! 根据提纲的要求，选择恰当的段落组段成篇。例如：根据提纲的要求，选择恰当的段落组段成篇。例如： 谋篇分析谋篇分析 根据提纲中的信息 1. Write out the messages conveyed by the cartoon. 本文开头需要两个段落，即描述漫画段，引出暗含主题段。 根据提纲中的信息 2. Give your comments 本篇文章下文要体现出作者对该现象的评论，即持有该
7、观点的原因和最后得出的结论。 2 2DIRECTIONS: A. Study the following graphs carefully and write an essay in at least 150 words.B. Your essay must be written neatly on ANSWER SHEET . C. Your essay should cover these three points:l. effect of the countrys growing human population on its wildlife2. possible reason for
8、 the effect3. your suggestion for wildlife protection SAMPLE As is shown from the first graph, the USA witnessed a rapid growth of population during the period of time from the year of 1800 to 1990. From the second graph, we can find out that there was a quicker and quicker rise in the number of spe
9、cies of wildlife no longer existing in the USA from 1600 to 1900, reaching 60 in all. It is obvious that the countrys population explosion exerted a great effect on its wildlife and resulted in the sharp decline in their number. What caused the effect? Therere at least two possible reasons provided
10、here. In the first place, with the growth of population, there is more and more living space for humans and, therefore, less and less for wildlife. Secondly, the large human population causes serious environmental pollution so that it is hard for wildlife to live in a clean and favorable surrounding
11、. As a result, some rare animals become endangered and extinct. (Here may be some other factors contributing to the declining tendency, but I think what has been mentioned above is generally acceptable.) As far as I am concerned, my suggestions as to how to protect wildlife in the USA are as follows
12、. First of all, the government should propagandize（宣传）（宣传）/make efforts to arouse public awareness of the importance of wildlife protection. In the second place, the government should take effective measures to control the birthrate and prevent the environment from being polluted. Finally, excessive
13、 killing of animals should be banned by law. This is my point of view and I am sure my idea is both reasonable and workable. 谋篇分析谋篇分析 根据提纲中的信息 l. effect of the countrys growing human population on its wildlife 本文开头需要两个段落，即描述漫画段，引出问题产生影响段。 根据提纲中的信息 2. possible reason for the effect 本篇文章下文要体现出作者对该现象的评
14、论，即持有该观点的原因。 根据提纲中的信息 3. your suggestion for wildlife protection 本篇文章结尾处体现出作者对该现象的评论，即改变这种现象的具体建议。 根据提纲的要求，选择恰当的段落组段成篇。例如：根据提纲的要求，选择恰当的段落组段成篇。例如： 3DIRECTIONS: A. Study the following two pictures carefully and write and essay of at least 150 words. B. Your essay must be written neatly on ANSWER SHEET
15、 2. C. Your essay should meet the requirements below:1. Describe the pictures.2. Deduce the purpose of the drawer of the pictures.3. Suggest counter-measures. SAMPLE As can be seen from the two pictures showing a brief history of world commercial fishing, few cases of commercial fishing occurred in
16、1900 and so lovely fishes of various kinds swam freely in the water. Things, however, were becoming much worse in the year of 1995. Countless fishing ships sailed along the water and, as a result, few fishes were seen swimming. It is clear that because of excessive commercial fishing, the ecological system had been thrown out of balance. What is the purpose of the drawer of the pictur
