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1、新浪微博：侃哥Kevin；微信公众号：kevinenglishclass（Kevin英语课堂） ? ? ? ? ? ? ? ?2013.9.1 托福独立作文范文托福独立作文范文+解析解析 侃哥侃哥 Kevin 题：题：A or DA: Only movies that can teach us something about real life are worth watching. 题型：绝对题题型：绝对题 观点：让步观点：让步 角度：具象拆分角度：具象拆分 开头：话题引入开头：话题引入+双方双方/对方观点呈现对方观点呈现+我方观点我方观点 With remarkable progress
2、of peoples living standard, watching movies seems to be a dispensable part of peoples lives, as movies not only entertain the viewers but also enlighten them. Some people claim that only movies that can teach us something about real life are worth watching. However, I regard this assertion as arbitr
3、ary and unilateral, because there are at least 2 other kinds of movie that are also worth watching: comedy and scary movie. And my reasons and examples are given below. 中间段中间段 1：喜剧片让人哈哈一乐，放松心情。 （主题句：喜剧片让人哈哈一乐，放松心情。 （主题句+说理论证句说理论证句+细节扩细节扩 展）展） Comedies are worth watching, for they give us a real good
4、 way to relax ourselves. It is because the only goal that the comedies try to achieve is to make people laugh and laughing is in fact proven by science to be one of best medicines to alleviate pressure, pain or depression. I still can remember when I was preparing for the college entrance examinatio
5、n-a make-or-break exam that even 新浪微博：侃哥Kevin；微信公众号：kevinenglishclass（Kevin英语课堂） determines ones future-the most enjoyable thing was to watch a Jim Carrey movie after a whole days hard work. Through those hilarious plots and exaggerating acting of Jim Carrey, my intense minds suddenly got relaxed. 中
6、间段中间段 2：恐怖片让人能在安全的环境下体验恐惧的：恐怖片让人能在安全的环境下体验恐惧的刺激。 （主题句刺激。 （主题句+说理说理 论证句论证句+细节扩展）细节扩展） Another kind of movies, scary movie, is also worth watching because it allows people to experience the excitement of horror under a safe circumstance. In most cases, people are pursuing happiness while avoiding risk
7、s, but human beings nature of curiosity sometimes makes us want to experience those fearful feelings that we hate to have in real life. Though this kind of mind may be paradoxical, but it does exist sometimes. For example, almost every scary-movie lover enjoys the moment when they breathed a sigh of
8、 relief at the end of the movie. Vicariously sharing the experience of others can be a kind of happiness. 让步段：先承认教我们道理的电影也是值得一看的，但是（打压）不能因让步段：先承认教我们道理的电影也是值得一看的，但是（打压）不能因 此就说他们是唯一值得看的电影。此就说他们是唯一值得看的电影。 Admittedly, people really benefit a lot from movies that can teach us something about real life. F
9、or instance, some movies teach us how to deal with relationship between family members, some teach us how to realize ones American dreams by defeating difficulties one after another, and some great movies show us what is true love. Nevertheless, no matter how useful and meaningful these movie can be
10、, it is still inappropriate to assert that they are the only ones worth watching. 结尾：重申观点，归纳理由结尾：重申观点，归纳理由/重申观点重申观点 In conclusion, it is absurd to believe that it is only worth watching movie that can teach us something about real life. As another 2 important movie genres, comedy and scary movie are
11、 equally important to our lives and should be given due respect. 新浪微博：搜“侃哥Kevin” 微信公众平台：kevinenglishclass（Kevin英语课堂） 人人网：搜“谢侃” - 2013.9.8 托福独立写作范文托福独立写作范文+解析解析 侃哥侃哥 Kevin A or DA: Governments should focus its budgets more on environmental protection than on economic development. 题型：呼吁题题型：呼吁题 论点：一边倒（
12、同意）论点：一边倒（同意） 论证角度：利弊分析论证角度：利弊分析 新浪微博：侃哥Kevin；微信公众号：kevinenglishclass（Kevin英语课堂） 开头：同意政府应该把财政预算更多地放在环保上。 （话题引入开头：同意政府应该把财政预算更多地放在环保上。 （话题引入+双方双方/某某 方观点呈现方观点呈现+我方观点及过渡句）我方观点及过渡句） The past several decades have witnessed that the worlds economy is booming. Modern skyscrapers, convenient communications,
13、 fast transportations make it easier and cozier for people to live in this planet. However, people are beginning to realize that the great achievements today seem to be at the price of destroying the nature. They claim that governments should focus its budgets more on environment than on economic de
14、velopment. As for me, I am a big fan of environmental protection and I am wholeheartedly in agreement with this claim. Here are some reasons and examples to support my view. 中间段中间段 1：环境保护关系到每一个人的健康问题。 （主题句：环境保护关系到每一个人的健康问题。 （主题句+说理论说理论证证+细节细节 例子）例子） First, the environmental protection is closely bound up with the health of every single person in this world. If the environment is polluted, the basic elements people need to survive must be affected, and thus disastrous results may occur. Recently I have read an appalling fact from newspapers
