《公开课-书面表达》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《公开课-书面表达（33页珍藏版）》请在金锄头文库上搜索。
1、Teaching aim:Guide the students in improving their English writing.by Huang YanqinWhich composition feels more attractive, why?漂亮规范的书写 是写作得分的亮点Factor 1：作文的卷面和书写Which sentence do you think attracts the teachers?1. I want to thank others, because I am grateful to them who help me.2. On top of this qua
2、lity, we can convey our kindness and love to whoever deserves respect.Factor 2：文中所采用的语言材料人靠衣装，文靠词装A. 词汇的选择灵活新颖，出奇制胜；B. 句型结构运用灵活多变;A. Examples 1_替换because of 2. _替换think of 3_替换should 4. _替换spend 5_替换 be helpful/useful 6_替换talk about/of, mentiondevotebe supposed todue tocontribute tocome up with/occu
3、rrefer to 1. I dont know about others, but I used to have to work even at weekends doing endless homework and attending classes as well. (NMET 2008) 2. It would mean a great deal to me to listen to the tape and learn what is covered in the talk. ( 2009 全国卷 ) B. 改变句型结构,与众不同practice1.He got excited wh
4、en he heard the news._ the news, he got excited.2.The girl went home, because she was hungry and thirsty._, the girl went home.HearingHungry and thirsty3. Radio broadcasts didnt begin until 1920.It was_.4.He never speaks about his own family.Never_.not until 1920 that radio broadcasts begandoes he s
5、peak about his own family如何将下列”对英语教材使用看法”的句子更好地连接起来 ，显得更有文采，得到高分呢？（2012 辽宁卷）1.I think these topics are very popular with us students. 2.There are many beautiful and colorful pictures. It can help us understand English better. 3.Some of the texts have too many new words and expressions which are hard
6、 for us. Id like to suggest changing them into easier ones. Sample:These topics, I think, are very popular with us students. Whats more, there are many beautiful and colorful pictures, which can help us understand English better. However, some of the texts have too many new words and expressions whi
7、ch are hard for us. Therefore, Id like to suggest changing them into easier ones. Factor 3：行文的流畅上下贯通、一气呵成正确而巧妙地使用好连接词、插入语等and,then,also,besides,morever,whats more furthermore,in addition,more than that.1.表递进.表转折 .表因果.表目的.表归纳but,however,although,though,in spite of,despite after all,on the contrary,on
8、 the other hand. because,since,therefore,so,hence,thus,consequently as a result/consequence,on account of.in order that,so that,for the purpose of.in general,in brief,in short,in conclusion, in a word,on the whole.William Shakespeare（2008 湖南卷）I like him because his comedies and tragedies bring me in
9、to a fantastic world; I love him because his poems let me enjoy the beauty of the English language; I admire him because his keen sights set me thinking and teach me how to lead a meaningful life! Factor 4：作者表达的思想和情感小结：1. 作文的卷面 -整洁、规范2. 文章的语言 -丰富、多变3. 行文的表达 -流畅、连贯4. 文章的思想 -独到、新颖How can we achieve th
10、isHow can we achieve this？TipsTips：5, 4, 3, 2, 15 ：Five steps 1) Review the topic (审) 2) List the points （列） 3) Make the sentences （写） 4) Polish up the essay （润） 5) Check the errors （查）4 ：Four advanced words & phrases （at least）3：Three special sentence structures （eg. 复合句、it句型、非谓语、 with独立结构、强调句、倒装句）
11、典题在线 （2011 江苏卷） 1 Realizing her mom must be very tired after a days work ,the little girl helps to remove the bag from her shoulder . 2 But, totally engaged in my own study, I seldom pay attention to what mother needs and feels, and always think studying well is the only thing I could do in return.
12、2 ：Beginning & endingattractive beginningimpressive ending典题在线 Beginning： For most people, its almost impossible to operate a computer without a mouse, let alone surf the Internet. （2009 江苏卷） Ending：Obviously, it is high time that we took some measures to solve this problem.1 ：One proverb or idiom 充
13、满智慧而贴切的谚语或习语会 使你的作文锦上添花。典题在线 1 The story tells us that if you want to get something, you must work hard for it. Remember, no pains, no gains! (2005 广东卷) 2 A proverb says, ”Dont judge a book by its cover.” But in my opinion, appearance does matter in many ways. Practice makes perfect ! 书面表达 2012年10月1
14、1日中国作家莫言获得2012年诺贝 尔文学奖, 这大大刺激了国人的读书热情。但最近 的一份调查却发现中国年人均阅读量不足一本书 ，并且主体阅读群是学生。这也引发了我们对这 一问题更深层次的思考。 请你就此现象分析一下国人读书量偏少、不普及 的原因(至少2点)；阐述读书的益处（至少2点） ；并就如何提高人们阅读的意识、培养人们的阅 读兴趣提出一些切实可行的建议（至少2点）。 要求：要点充足，行文流畅。 内容充实，适当发挥。 词数150左右，开头已给出， 不计入总词数。 Recently, the Chinese writer Mo Yan was awarded the Nobel Prize in Literature, which thrills the whole nation and arouses peoples interest of reading. However, a recent survey shows that the per capita amount of reading among Chinese is less than one book. This causes our deep reflection. _ _ _ _ _ _
