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1、12010 高考作文讲评学案高考作文讲评学案 Part 1 Analysis of the homework 开头：（开头：（ 已给出）已给出） 第一幅图第一幅图 1.On Saturday, I searched for the train ticket about Beidaihe. My grandparents around me and asked the weather and the hotel. and then I went to buy the tickets for them. 2.I searched the informations about Beidaihe on
2、 the Internet including the train tick, hotel and whether. 3.On Saturday morning, I got up very early. After breakfast, I surfed the Internet with my grandparents. We wanted to search for some information about the train ticket, the hotel and the weather in Beidaihe. ( 王天元) 第二幅图第二幅图 1.Then I helped
3、them to buy two train tickets. 2.On the next day, I went to train ticket office on my own to buy two tickets. There were a lot of people buy the tickets to Beidaihe. 3.But there were so many people, I spend nearly 3 hours to buy it hardly. 4.After doing that, I went to the train station in order to
4、buy the next days tickets. There was so many people that I had to spend lots of time waiting, but luckily I succeeded to buy two tickets. （邱昊阳） 第三幅图第三幅图 1.I helped their prepared the cloth and the map about Beidaihe and two sunglasses. My grandma gave me a bottle of water and leted me have a rest. 2
5、.Due to the sunshine in Beidaihe was really strong, I prepared two sunglasses for them. 3.As soon as I got home, I helped my grandparents to prepare the useful things which must be taken with them. Including clothes, shoes, umbrella and the map of Beidaihe. The most important thing were sunny glasse
6、d because the sunshine was too heavily. （ 肖强） 4.I helped them prepare their luggage, such as sunglasses, umbrella. I also took a map of Beidaihe so that they could know how to get to the hotel which we booked, also they could go to some interesting places. ( 孙晓晴 ) 第四幅图第四幅图 1.The next morning, I sent
7、 them to the station and said goodbye to them. They sat in the train with smile and grateful. 2. we said “goodbye” to each other through the window. And then, the train set out. 3.The next day, they started their trip to Beidaihe. I said goodbye to them in the station with the hope that they could h
8、ave a good time there.（ 郭宇） 结尾结尾 1.My grandparents were proud of me because I did so many things for them. I was proud of myself , too. （ 陈莹） 2.I am very excited to prepare their trip to Beidaihe. It helps me develop my abilities. I am not a child any more and I should do more things for my grandpar
9、ents. I love them. （ 王贺） Part 2 参考样文参考样文 Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. On Saturday morning, together with my grandparents, I searched the Internet for the train schedule, the weather in Beidaihe, and some hotel information. In the afternoon, I went to the tra
10、in station and managed to buy two tickets for my grandparents although there was a long queue. After dinner, I packed into the suitcase the things my grandparents need, such as clothes, glasses, an umbrella, and a map. The next morning, I went to the station to see them off. Waving goodbye to them o
11、n the platform, I felt happy for them and wished them a safe journey. 2010 年年 高分作文高分作文21.It was a really busy weekend. When my grandparents decided to pay a visit to Beidaihe, I was searching for information on the Internet as quickly as possible. I had to ensure some information including the train
12、 tickets, hotels and weather that my grandparents questioned me. After that, I went to the station to buy two tickets from Beijing to Beidaihe. It wasnt too long before I went back home. I also had to check the thing that my grandparents should take. While my grandfather was finding things, my grand
13、ma and I packed the bag. After the clothes, shoes was put in bag. My grandma reminded me of the unbrellar to avoid the rainy. When the most important thing map was found. Everything was in place. Early in the next morning, my grandparents were tooking the train. They were very happy to the thing I h
14、ad prepared for them. Seeing the train left, I felt very proud of myself. （159 words） 得分：17 分 点评：完全完成了试题规定的任务，达到了预期的写作目的。覆盖了所有的内容要点，并 有细节支撑。运用的句式和词汇能满足任务的要求；语法和用词基本准确，少许错误为尽 可能表达丰富内容所致；所写内容连贯。2.Last weekend, I helped my grandparents prepare their trip to Beidaihe. In order to have a full preparation
15、 for the trip, I searched the Internet to get some useful information. Sitting before the computer, we had so many questions to ask. My grandparents paid attention to the hotels and the weather, while I was concerned about the train tickets. After collecting the information, I succeed in buying two
16、tickets to the destination on my own. Luckily, I got the final two at the place where the tickets were sold. Besides helping my grandmother to prepare the things for the trip. I also took a map of Beidaihe so as to plan a specific and enjoyable path of the journey. And I remind her of taking umbrellas and sunglasses in case the weather would be changeable. Two days later, my grandparents set out to the place which they admired. When they settled
