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1、LYG Haizhou Senior High SchoolChenJuanAttention please! 2011江苏苏高考说说明高考英语语 书书面表达示例2-看图图作文： 看图图作文的 “图图”不局限于某一类类型的 图图，如漫画、广告，也包括其他图图片 、照片、图图表等情景材料。考生们们可 根据图图示的寓意、内容或情节线节线 索， 自己组织组织 文字，进进行描述、叙述、比 较较或表达思想观观。作文应应覆盖提示的 要点，但应应避免仅仅根据提示文字作简简 单单翻译译。 Different forms of picturesWriting based on cartoonsAre you f
2、amiliar with this cartoon?What abilities should we have?1. 读图3. 谋篇2.解意.读图：Topics of cartoonsTopics of cartoonsEnvironmental/ Natural problemsSocial phenomenonAttitudes towards life.解意(theme)-to the point 注意: 文字说明部分往往含有重要信息(clues)， 切记要认真阅读！1. 辨明褒贬，找准角度 (angle) . 联系生活，明晰主旨 (theme)下面的漫画反映了一种社会现象 ，请你根据对
3、 这幅漫画的理解，用英语写一篇 短文，描述一下他们的不同境遇，并就如何解决 此问题发表你的看法。Example1._角度 comparison 主旨 education inequality The comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern China.角度 criticize主旨The students as well as their parents only focus on their academic achievements, neglecting psychological qual
4、ity and moral standards.Example2Judge the themes of the following cartoons as quickly as possible.Come on! Choose me!213456People lack communication.Picture1Protect animals. No buying, no killing.Picture2People cant afford heavy medical fees. Picture 3Picture 4One false move may lose the game. Look
5、before you leap.Money cant buy everything. Health is the best wealth.Picutre5下图是某人寿保险公司的一则经 典广告招画，这则广告想要告诉我们什么？if unexpected cant foresee protect ourselves buy insurancePicture6The advertisement above shows us that there are always some unexpected “ifs” in our life, but not all of us can foresee the
6、m clearly. So buying insurance for life is likely the best way to protect ourselves from a deadly “if”.Conclusion: When it comes to attitudes towards life, using proper sayings makes sense.谋谋篇 -organizationStep1. Descriptionstep2. AnalysisStep3. Solutions发现问题发现问题解决问题问题分析问题问题Step 1 Description （人称/时态
7、） To what degree should we describethe cartoon?OrganizationExamplea country boy crying long for education a city boy enjoy all the benefits of educationAs is vividly shown in the picture, As can be seen in the picture, In the picture, there are The picture shows a common phenomenon. Sentence structu
8、res:_, a country boy is crying helpless in the darkness, longing eagerly for school education, in contrast, the city boy on the right is enjoying all the benefits.As is vividly shown in the picture,Step2 Analysis(联系实际分析)( facts / reasons/results)Sentence structures 1.What are the reasons for this ph
9、enomenon?2.It seems very ridiculous thatHowever, this kind of story is performed everywhere.3.The picture shows thatIt is the exact reflection of4.The picture indicates that we/Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that5.This is a ironic (讽刺的) cartoon which describes vividly a kind of common phenomeno
10、n amongClues：描述一下他们 的不同境遇，并就如 何解决此问题发表你 的看法。Indicate: education inequality Facts: drop out of school suffer from low standards of comparatively better opportunities Results: lower enrollment rates worsen the problemExampleThe comparison indicates the phenomenon of education inequality in modern Chin
11、a. (facts) School-age country children are often dropping out of school due to poverty. Even those who managed to stay in school are still suffering from the low standards of educational facilities and academic quantities. Comparatively, city children have much better opportunities to receive good e
12、ducation. (results) Thus, school in the countryside generally have much lower enrollment rates than those in the city, which in turn worsens the problem of educational inequality.As far as Im concerned/In my opinion, From my point of view,Only in this way can./Only if, can weStep 3 Solutions (opinio
13、ns /suggestions)It is high time we took some measures to put an end to this phenomenon./Immediate measures should be taken to The government should make laws to The media should appeal for We should raise peoples awareness of Everyone should make great efforts to从大到小 从意识到行动The government The media b
14、e aware of Only if social justice harmonioussocietyExampleTo solve this problem , the government should spend more money on the improvement of education in rural areas. Meanwhile, the media can appeal for the public donations for rural education. Moreover, all people in the community should be aware
15、 of the seriousness of the problem and do whatever to help. Only if we do these can we have more social justice and thus make our society more harmonious Practice 目前医疗费不断攀升，有人因付不起昂贵的医疗费 而只好忍受疾病的折磨。人们强烈呼吁政府应当建立有 效的医疗保障体制。请根据下面图画，以“Health Care”为题写一篇短文，简要说明图画中所表达的内容 ，重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。 _ _Clues: 简要说明图画中所表达的内容， 重点阐述这种现象所带来的后果和你的观点。StepsContentsDescriptionAnalysisSolutionsan old man suffer from go to hospital medical bill cant afford another attach Results: 1.in debt 2.bear the pain 3.wait for death1.reduce medical expenses 2.build up medical insurance
