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1、智 课 网 雅 思 备 考 资 料一起探讨雅思科技类作文之科技改变人类交流的方式-智课教育出国考试科技类雅思大作文在雅思写作考试中常常出现，考生要多多积累此 类素材并加以练习。今天，考生们就和智课教育小编一起探讨雅思科技 类作文之科技改变人类 交流 的方式吧，说说你的看法，共同进步。 雅思作文题目： Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationsh
2、ips people make? Has this become a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. (剑8 test2 task2) 范文： (1) Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology. (2) Yes, the technol
3、ogy has changed the peoples interaction in very enhanced manner.(3) Earlier people use to wait and try to find easy way to contact their friends or relatives leaving far. In past there was no quick technology to contact or to establish any communication between one person to another person. The Draw
4、back with past communication systems was that it were very slow and were time taking process such as telegrams, letter etc. People used to afraid to write their personal feedbacks or things to their love ones due to insecure medium of communication. When it comes to professional level, the privacy a
5、nd accuracy should be maintain but, to that time there were no secure communications. (4) Now the things have changed around, people from far distance contact their loves one in an easy and quick ways whichimproves the Interaction level between two person. Quality the level of the Interaction people
6、 to people, has improved because the people are equipped with high-tec technology which enhances the communication. There are many many medium which are available now such as Internet, Calling Cards etc. (5) The technology has provided the mobility faster which help people to talk or to interact at
7、any time anywhere in the world. (6) People can contact their friend or relatives any time they want. It has become so easier and friendly to be in touch with your friends, relatives even with the unknown people. 一、话题类型： 科技类 二、题目类型： 观点类 三、题目简要内容： 科技改变人们交流方式; how? 积极还是消极的发展趋势? 四、素材积累：时代在发展，科技的进步无疑给人们的
8、生活带来了很大的影响。考 生在论述此题时要做具体说明，科技会给人际交往带来影响，但要指出 什么样的科技会带来什么样的影响，以及影响是利大于弊还是弊大于利 ，要有一个明确的观点。 文中的词汇或是句式存在一些错误，考生在备考时要多注意。 enhanced 加强的，增大的 use to do sth. 过去常常做某事 medium of communication 交流媒介;通讯手段 When it comes to sth. 当提到， 就而论 be equipped with 配备有，装有 be in touch with 接触;联系 五、论据积累：文章对题中两个问题虽然都进行了陈述，但第一个问题
9、在人们之间 真正的关系如何发生了改变方面没有进行充分论述展。不过文章观点较 明确，即影响是正面的，并且有一些相关的观点加以支持。总体上有连 续性，有效运用一些时间标志词等，比如，in the past，now等等 。 六、结构分析： 写作思路： 此题有两个问题。论证时要对两个问题都进行充分拓展，不能忽略 任何一个。 段落结构上，可以分为四段： 第一段交代背景，引入话题; 第二段从多角度分析技术如何对人们之间的交往产生影响，可以采 用举例等论证手法; 第三段和第四段分析技术带来的变化是正面的还是负面的，最好正 反两方面的影响都有所涉及并指出利大于弊或者弊大于利; 第五段进行总结。 具体分析： 第
10、一段： Nowadays the way people interact with each other has changed because of technology.第一段照抄题目，在雅思写作考试中照抄部分要从总字数中扣除。 所以本篇文章字数不够，考生会失分。 第二段： 第二段用一句简单的话提出自己的观点： Yes, the technology has changed the peoples interaction in very enhanced manner. enhanced 加强的，增大的; in very enhanced manner 应改为in an enhanced
11、manner-以增强的方式 ; 第三段： 第三段指出人与人之间的交往在过去存在的问题，即速度慢，而且 不够安全。Earlier people use to wait and try to find easy way to contact their friends or relatives leaving far. In past there was no quick technology to contact or to establish any communication between one person to another person. The Drawback with pa
12、st communication systems was that it were very slow and were time taking process such as telegrams, letter etc. People used to afraid to write their personal feedbacks or things to their love ones due to insecure medium of communication. When it comes to professional level, the privacy and accuracy
13、should be maintain but, to that time there were no secure communications. use to do sth. 过去常常做某事 ;文中use to 应改为used to; leaving far 应改为living far; In past 应改为In the past，意为“在过去”; between one person to another person 应改为between one person to another; it were very slow and were time taking 应改为it was ve
14、ry slow and were time taking; People used to afraid to write 应改为People used to be afraid to write;establish any communication 应改为establish communication -实现交流; medium of communication 交流媒介;通讯手段; When it comes to sth. 当提到.， 就.而论; should be maintain 应改为should be maintained(被动语态); 第四段： 第四段提到互联网和电话等技术的出
15、现改进了人们之间的交往，有 着正面的影响。 Now the things have changed around, people from far distance contact their loves one in an easy and quick ways which improves the Interaction level between two person. Quality the level of the Interaction people to people, has improved because the people are equipped with high-
16、tec technology whichenhances the communication. There are many many medium which are available now such as Internet, Calling Cards etc. two person 应为two people; be equipped with 配备有.，装有.; high-tec technology 应改为high-tech或者是high technology; 第五段和第六段： 第五段和第六段具体说明技术更便捷地促进了人们之间的交流。 The technology has provided the mobility faster which help people to talk or to interact at any time anywhere in the world. People can contact their friend or relatives any time they want. It has become so
