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1、广州市真光中学英语科资料1Paragraph Writing on Giving SolutionsWhat is this lesson mainly about Paragraph structure: The way in which different parts of a paragraph are organized. Internal logic within solutions: The way of thinking, or demonstrating solutions. About structureTask 1: Which paragraph is better or
2、ganized? Why? Task 2: Pay attention to the sentence function Topic sentence: Development sentences: Concluding sentence: . About the internal logic within solutions Task 3: Read the following paragraphs on the same topic, and see how they are developed with different logic. Topic:日常生活的安全措施 （2011 年广东
3、省高考名校联考） (A) Internal logic: from awareness to actions In our daily life, taking proper precautions(预防措施) is of vital importance to live a safe and happy life. First and foremost, we should raise our awareness of self- protection and arm ourselves with the relevant knowledge. Whats more, we are supp
4、osed to remember to turn off the gas before going out. Furthermore, when going out by bike, we should go along the right side and should not ride at a high speed. All in all, life is so fragile that we cant lay too much emphasis on it.(B) Internal logic: from personal to social aspect In our daily l
5、ife, taking proper precautions(预防措施) is of vital importance to live a safe and happy life. First and foremost, everyone should arm himself with the knowledge of self-protection. None of us is allowed to use electrical appliances(电器) Topic： 如何用实际行动保护环境(B) In my view, practical actions, rather than em
6、pty slogans, are more likely to make a positive difference in environmental protection. First and foremost, everyone should improve his awareness of protecting our earth, shouldering the responsibility. Besides, we are supposed to contribute our share by starting out small, like planting tress and m
7、aking sufficient use of every precious drop of water. Only when we make joint efforts can we have a brighter world to live in.Topic： 如何用实际行动保护环 境(A) First and foremost, everyone should improve his awareness of protecting our earth, shouldering the responsibility. Besides, we are supposed to contribu
8、te our share by starting out small, like planting tress and making sufficient use of every precious drop of water. 广州市真光中学英语科资料2or light candles in the dormitories or classrooms without permission. When it comes to community(社区) safety, the government should take some effective measures to educate t
9、he poor in self-protection knowledge and medical care for free. It is also suggested that the government should give away a fire extinguisher(灭火器) for each family. All in all, life is so fragile that we cant lay too much emphasis on it.Task 4: Match the internal logic with corresponding paragraphs.
10、Underline the topic sentences and concluding sentences. The internal logic: From awareness to actions From personal to social aspect(A)如何减少交通事故 (2009 年惠州第三次调研) It is of great significance to make efforts to prevent any traffic accident from happening. Everyone should pay more attention to road safet
11、y and develop a sense of responsibility, bearing the basic traffic rules in mind. Besides, drivers, if drunk or emotionally upset, should avoid getting on road. Accordingly, governments should take effective measures to establish a sound system(健全的体制) to reduce automobile accidents, and those who di
12、sobey(违反) the regulations(规章制度) should be severely punished. In short, we should let people realize being careful means respecting lives. The internal logic within solutions is (B) 如何用实际行动保护环境（2013 年 11 月区调研） From my perspective, practical actions, rather than empty slogans, are more likely to make
13、a positive difference in environmental protection. Everyone should improve his awareness of protecting our earth, shouldering the responsibility. Besides, we are supposed to contribute our share by starting out small, like planting tress and making sufficient use of every precious drop of water. Onl
14、y when we make joint efforts can we have a brighter world to live in. The internal logic within solutions is . Discuss and produceTask 5: Discuss the topic in pairs. Develop your own paragraph in a logical way. Pay attention to the structure.Topic: 如何节约用水 The internal logic within solutions in your
15、passage is 广州市真光中学英语科资料3. Peer assessmentTask 6: Swap the composition, and judge it from the following dimensions.CriteriaGreat FailedTopic sentenceConcluding sentence Internal logic within solutionsTransitional words(过渡词). Development assignmentTask 7: Choose one of the topics below. Try to write paragraphs with different logic. Pay attention to the structure. Topics：1. 如何防止视力下降
