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1、智 课 网 G R E 备 考 资 料名师解析gre满分作文重点：Critical Thinking名师解析gre满分作文重点：Critical Thinking.以下是一篇ETS提供 的6分ISSUE作文，个人认为，其平实、毫无模板痕迹的语言多少能帮助 备考的同学进一步理解考试的重点 Critical Thinking. 题目： Too much time, money, and energy are spent developing new and more elaborate technology. Society should instead focus on maximizing t
2、he use of existing technology for the immediate benefit of its citizens. I must say that I reject this statement. While it is true that we need to support society as much as possible with current technology, that does not in any way mean that we should stop progressing simply because our current tec
3、hnology cannot handle all the problems we have brought to it. Does that mean that we should simply accept the status quo and make do? No, I dont think so. To do so would be tantamount to adopting a fatalistic approach; I think most people would reject that.Technology has helped, and it has hurt. Wit
4、hout it, we would never have our standard of living, nor quality of nutrition, expectation of a long and productive life span, and the unshakable belief that our lives can be made even better. But it has also brought us universal pollution, weapons so powerful as to be capable of rendering us extinc
5、t, and the consequent fear for our survival as species and as a planet. Technology is indeed a double-edged sword. And yet, I still have to argue in its favor, because without it, we have no hope. Some might argue that we would be better off without technology. They might say that a return to a less
6、 technologically driven approach to life would have the benefits of reducing stress and allowing us to live simpler, happier lives, like those of our forebears. Such an idea is seductive, so much so that muchof art and all of nostalgia are devoted to it. But upon closer inspection, one realizes that
7、 such a move would only return us to a life of different kinds of stress, one of false simplicity, one fraught with danger. It would be a life without antibiotics where a minor cut could prove deadly. It would be a life where childbirth is the main killer of women, and where an emergency is dealt wi
8、th in terms of hours and days instead of minutes and hours; a life where there are no phones or cars or planes or central heating, no proven drug therapies to treat mental illness, no computers. Would this world really make people happy? What we already have, we have. And since the only way to move
9、is forward, instead of allowing ourselves to be paralyzed by fear and worry, we need to learn how to clean up the pollution we have caused, and how to deal with a world that feeds on weapons and mass destruction. Doing these things means having to move away from technology into a more difficult real
10、m, that of diplomacy and compromise: to move from the bully stance of “I am bigger and better and I have more toys and so I win” to a place where everyone wins.Technology is the thing that will allow people to do that. But, advanced as it is, it is still in its infancy. We have to allow it to grow u
11、p and mature in order to reap the real rewards that it can bring. And there are even greater rewards ahead of us than what the world has already experienced. When technology is pushed to the outer edge, that is where serendipitous discoveries can occur. This has been seen throughout technological ad
12、vancement, but the easiest example is probably the space program which made us think, really hard, about how to do things in a different environment. It gave us telecommunications, new fabrics and international cooperation. Paramedical devices, so that people can be treated even as they are being tr
13、ansported to the hosptal, are a direct development of that technology.None of this would have happened in the time frame that it did if we had not pushed for technological advancement. If we had decided to “focus on maximizing the use of existing technology” instead of foolishly reaching for the sta
14、rs, we would not have made those discoveries which now are the bedrock of the 21st century. 分析： 字数：651 语言：平实的语句完全没有网络流行模板的痕迹，也是许多过了6 级的考生通过练习可以达到的水平。 I must say that I reject this statement. Does that mean that we should simply accept the status quo and make do? No, I dont think so. Technology has h
15、elped, and it has hurt. Technology is indeed a double-edged sword. And yet, I still have to argue in its favor, because without it, we have no hope. 当然，这并不意味，在GRE作文考试中，平实的语言比润色后的语 言有更多的优势。从这篇作文中，我们可以得到以下两条重要信息：1、 通过记忆大量模板使语言“全副武装”、“气势汹汹”并非高 分作文的必要条件，这种方式的弊端在课堂上我们已阐述过。 2、 在陈述idea的过程中，体现出critical thin
16、king才是成功的关键。我们在课堂上对critical thinking这一概念做 过多次详细的解释，现在请大家一起来体会这一概念在文中的运用。 第一段： (表明立场)I must say that I reject this statement. (让步)While it is true that we need to support society as much as possible with current technology, (折回自己立场)that does not in any way mean that we should stop progressing simply because our current technology cannot handle all the problems we have brought to it. 第二段：(概述科技的两面性)Technology has helped, and it has hurt. (具体讨论科技的贡献)Without it, we would never have our standar
