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1、 2004-20092004-2009 高考英语满分作文及名师评析高考英语满分作文及名师评析20092009 高考英语满分作文高考英语满分作文【全国卷全国卷 I I 海南、宁夏海南、宁夏】 【试题回放试题回放】假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训假定你是李华，正在英国接受英语培训，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东，住在一户英国人家里。今天你的房东 Mrs.Mrs. WilsonWilson 不在不在家，你准备外出，请给家，你准备外出，请给 Mrs.Mrs. WilsonWilson 写一留言条，内容包写一留言条，内容包括：括：1.1.外出购物外出购物2.2.替房东还书替房东还书3.Tracy3.
2、Tracy 来电话留言：来电话留言：1)1)咖啡屋咖啡屋(Bolton(Bolton Coffee)Coffee)见面见面取消取消2)2)此事已告知此事已告知 SusanSusan3)3) 尽快回电尽快回电注意：注意：1.1. 词数词数 100100 左右左右; ;2.2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。Mrs.Mrs. Wilson,Wilson,ImIm goinggoing outout shopping,shopping, andand wontwont bebe backback untuntilil aboutabout 5:005:00 pm.pm
3、. I I havehave takentaken withwith meme thethe twotwo bookbooks s youyou askedasked meme toto returnreturn toto thethe CityCity Library.Library. AtAt ababoutout 1 1 oclockoclock thisthis afternoon,afternoon, TracyTracy called,called, sayingsaying thatthat sheshe couldntcouldnt meetmeet youyou atat B
4、oltonBolton CoffeeCoffee tomorrtomorrowow morningmorning asas sheshe hashas somethingsomething importantimportant toto attendattend to.to. SheShe feltfelt veryvery sorrysorry aboutabout that,that, butbut saidsaid thatthat y youou couldcould setset somesome otherother timetime forfor thethe meeting.m
5、eeting. SheShe w wantedanted youyou toto callcall herher backback asas soonsoon asas youyou areare home.home. SheShe hashas alreadyalready toldtold SusanSusan aboutabout thisthis change.change.Yours,Yours,LiLi HuaHua 名师点评名师点评 本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，本文属于提纲式要点作文，是学生比较熟悉的题材，体现了英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。行文人体现了
6、英语学习应该注意实用性，生活型的原则。行文人称、时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通称、时态运用恰当、准确，各个要点间逻辑连贯，行文通顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的顺。提纲类书面表达不是简单的逐条翻译，而是将所给的几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语几个要点合理的组成比较通顺的语句，因此要仔细组织语言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，言，合理安排结构。在语言方面，要特别注意简洁明了，开头要开门见山。开头要开门见山。【北京卷北京卷】【试题回放试题回放】情景作文情景作文假设你是红星中学高三一班的学生李华，为响应绿化假设你是红星中学高三一班的
7、学生李华，为响应绿化祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四祖国的号召，你班四月十二日去郊区植树，请根据以下四幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志幅图的先后顺序，介绍植树活动的全过程，给某英文杂志的的“绿色行动绿色行动”专栏写一篇以专栏写一篇以“Green“Green ActionAction inin OurOur ClaClass”ss”为题的英文稿件。为题的英文稿件。注意：词数不少于注意：词数不少于 6060提示词：郊区提示词：郊区 suburbssuburbsAprilApril 1212 isis memorablememorable becausebecau
8、se ourour classclass hadhad a a m meaningfuleaningful experienceexperience onon thatthat day.day. InIn thethe morning,morning, w we e bicycledbicycled toto thethe suburbssuburbs toto plantplant trees,trees, talkingtalking a andnd laughinglaughing allall thethe way.way. UponUpon arrival,arrival, wewe
9、 beganbegan toto workwork immediately.immediately. SomeSome werewere diggingdigging holes.holes. SomeSome werwere e carryingcarrying andand plantingplanting youngyoung trees.trees. OthersOthers werewere wawateringtering . . AfterAfter gettinggetting thethe workwork done,done, wewe putput upup a a b
10、boardoard remindingreminding peoplepeople toto protectprotect thethe trees.trees. BeforeBefore leavingleaving wewe tooktook somesome photosphotos toto recordrecord ourour greengreen actaction.ion. SeeingSeeing thethe lineslines ofof trees,trees, wewe allall hadhad a a sensesense ofof achievement.ach
11、ievement. WeWe feelfeel itsits ourour dutyduty toto protectprotect a andnd beautifybeautify ourour environment.environment.【名师点评名师点评】本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立本文是设计巧妙的提纲要点式作文，与环保结合，立意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词意较好。文章思路清晰，要点连贯，在语言的表达上选词新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。新颖，同时运用了分词短语作状语等较好的句式表达。【北京卷北京卷】【试题回放试题回放】开放作文开
12、放作文请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于请根据下面提示，写一篇短文，词数不少于 5050InIn youryour spokenspoken EnglishEnglish class,class, youryour teacherteacher showshows s youyou thethe followingfollowing picture.picture. YouYou areare askedasked toto descrdescribeibe thethe picturepicture andand explainexplain howhow youyou understa
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