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1、1中考作文真题精讲从 2004-2009 年的北京卷写作来看，所有作文无一例外是提示作文。它们都统一要求学生根据汉语意思和英语提示词语写出意思连贯，符合逻辑的短文。这种文章大致规定了文章的思想和内容，所以学生们写作重点应该集中在英语表达上，所有学生纠结的地方是：写不出正确的英文句子。而大多数资料都说 08 年的写作难度加大，是由于 08 年这道题要求学生写作夹叙夹议的文章，但是从 04 年开始，其实北京卷的题目都在要求夹叙夹议的文章，因为每道题都要求学生表达自己的想法和理由。 下面是对历年作文做一个总结四、书面表达（共四、书面表达（共 1212 分）（分）（20042004 年）年）根据中文大
2、意，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于根据中文大意，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于 5050 词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。作为一名中学生，你学习的课程一定很多，但同时学校里又有丰富多彩的课外活动，例如：有的同学参作为一名中学生，你学习的课程一定很多，但同时学校里又有丰富多彩的课外活动，例如：有的同学参加英语角的活动；有的同学喜欢球类、跑步等体育活动；有的同学喜欢音乐、舞蹈、美术；还有的同学加英语角的活动；有的同学喜欢球类、跑步等体育活动；有的同学喜欢音乐、舞蹈、美术；还有的同学参加电脑小组、摄影小组、集邮小组等。你最喜欢哪一项课外活动？活动中你都做些什么？说
3、说你的想参加电脑小组、摄影小组、集邮小组等。你最喜欢哪一项课外活动？活动中你都做些什么？说说你的想法和理由。法和理由。提示词语：提示词语：I,I, a a middlemiddle schoolschool student,student, learn,learn, manymany subjects,subjects, afterafter class,class, taketake partpart in,in, actiactivity,vity, bebe interestedinterested in,in, growgrow up,up, important,important,
4、bebe sure.sure.注意：不要写出自己真实的姓名和所在学校。注意：不要写出自己真实的姓名和所在学校。这道题要求学生描述课外活动，写作思路和方向已经由引导式的中文和英文单词给出，由“I, a middle school student”和中文提示中的“作为一名中学生”要提示学生应做适当的自我介绍。由“learn, many subjects, after class, take part in, activity, be interested in,”和“你学习的课程一定很多，但同时学校里又有丰富多彩的课外活动，例如：有的同学参加英语角的活动；有的同学喜欢球类、跑步等体育活动；有的同学
5、喜欢音乐、舞蹈、美术；还有的同学参加电脑小组、摄影小组、集邮小组等”提示学生可以先谈自己的学业很重，接着再引出丰富多彩的课外活动。而题目中要求的“你最喜欢哪一项课外活动？活动中你都做些什么？说说你的想法和理由。”要求学生使用一些表示喜好的句型和短语，并给出你的想法和理由（议论部分）。这道题学生的习作显示出来的共同问题是：仅仅用最简单的句型很生硬的把提示词连词成句，在句子和句子之间并没有使用有效的连接词；在表达自己的喜好时，绝大多数学生齐刷刷的用“I like XXX because it is important”的句型。学生们没有意识或者说有意识也没有能力写出更加复杂更加不那么大众化的句型。
6、写作思路：写作思路：One possible version:I am a middle school student. I learn many subjects at school. After class, my classmates and I often take part in different school activities. Im interested in computer science and I often go to our school computer group. I learn to get useful things from the Internet
7、. I think it is important to learn to use computers because they are used everywhere in our modern life. I want to work for our country with computers when I grow up.2解析：I, a middle school student, learn, many subjects, after class, take part in, activity,这些词语是和中文提示中的“作为一名中学生，你学习的课程一定很多，但同时学校里又有丰富多彩
8、的课外活动”相一致的。我们在写句子的时候应该把所用词汇建立在所给词汇之上，再给出几个闪光词汇，并且运用较为高端的句型，比如说定语从句、加入同位语成分等。I, a middle school student who learn many subjects at school, often take part in a variety of activities with my classmates after school.而接下来所提示的词汇 be interested in, grow up, important, be sure 已经开始涉及到中文提示中的“你最喜欢哪一项课外活动？活动中你
9、都做些什么？说说你的想法和理由”如果仅仅想拿一个安全的分数，同学们可以直接过渡到这样的表达，但是高分选手一定注意到了，这样的安排方式是完全没有涉及到中文提示中的“例如：有的同学参加英语角的活动；有的同学喜欢球类、跑步等体育活动；有的同学喜欢音乐、舞蹈、美术；还有的同学参加电脑小组、摄影小组、集邮小组等。”，所以，如果能够运用好高端词汇和句型处理这个部分，一定能成为你作文的亮点，在这里我们一样可以以举例子的方式表达：For example, some students join in English club to exchange ideas about English learning; o
10、ther students enjoy playing sports in order to relaxing themselves after a hard-working day.But my favourite area is computer science, in other words, I am interested in the knowledge of surfing the Internet. So I often go to our school computer group . In my opinion , it is important for us to lear
11、n how to use computers because they are very useful and used everywhere in the twenty- first century. I am sure I can work effectively with the help of computer when I grow up.全文：I, a middle school student who learn many subjects at school, often take part in a variety of activities with my classmat
12、es after school. For example, some students join in English club to exchange ideas about English learning; other students enjoy playing sports in order to relaxing themselves after a hard-working day. But my favorite area is computer science, in other words, I am interested in the knowledge of surfi
13、ng the Internet. So I often go to our school computer group. In my opinion, it is important for us to learn how to use computers because they are very useful and used everywhere in the twenty- first century. I am sure I can work effectively with the help of computer when I grow up.四、书面表达（共四、书面表达（共 1
14、212 分）分）(2005(2005 年年) )根据中文大意，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于 50 词的短文。所给英文提示词语供选用。假设你叫王明，昨天收到了笔友 David 的 e-mail，得知他不久要到北京来学习中文。他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封 e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。（信的开头和结尾已给出，其字数不计入所完成的短文内。）提示词语：Chinese, be, useful, many foreigners, learn, now, difficult, different from, it is importa
15、nt, listen, talk, read, writeDear David, Im glad youll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. _Hope to see you soon in Beijing.3Yours,Wang MingDear David,Im glad youll come to Beijing to learn Chinese. Chinese, which many foreigners are learning now, is very useful. Its somewhat difficult for you because
16、 its quite different from English. I suggest you regard learning Chinese words by heart bear in mind as many as possible as your most important thing at the beginning. Its also important to do some reading and writing. You can watch TV and listen to the radio to practice your listening skills. Try your best to talk with Chinese people. You can learn Chinese not only from books but also from warm-hearted people around you. If you have any questions, please ask me. I
