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1、2015 年高考英语书面表达评分标准及各档次作文示例年高考英语书面表达评分标准及各档次作文示例 2015 年高考英语全国 I 卷 写作阅卷评分标准及各档次作文示例写作阅卷评分标准及各档次作文示例 领会高考阅卷要求，有效指导学生高考写作备考【作文题】假定你是李华，你校英文报“外国文化”栏目拟刊登美国节日风俗和中学生生 活的短文。请给美国朋友彼得写信约稿，要点如下： 1.栏目介绍; 2. 稿件内容; 3. 稿件长度：约 400 词;4. 交稿日期：6 月 28 日前。注意： 1. 词数 100 左右; 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯; 3. 开头语已为你 写好。 Dear Peter, Id
2、 like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper._ _ _ _ 2015 年普通高考评卷英语作文评分标准年普通高考评卷英语作文评分标准 评分总则：评分总则：1、本题总分为 25 分，按 5 个档次给分。2、评分时，先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定是否达到及格线（15 分） ，然后确定其所 属的具体档次，以该档次的要求来衡量，最后给分。其所属档次，然后以该档次的要求来 衡量，确定或调整档次，最后给分。3、词数少于 80 和多于 120 的，从总分中减去 2 分。4、评分时应注意的主要内容为：内容要点、应用
3、词汇和语法结构的丰富性和准确性及上 下文的连贯性。5、若缺少要点，分数降一档处理。6、拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面。评分时应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。 英、美拼写及词汇用法均可接受。7、书写较差以至于影响交际，将其分数降低一个档次。 评分细则：评分细则：优秀（22-25）：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容充实；语法结构多样，词汇丰富，行 文流畅，显示出较强的语言运用能力，允许有个别语言错误，但不影响意思表达。良好（18-21）：紧扣主题，覆盖所有要点，内容较充实，行文较流畅，语言有少量错 误，但基本不影响意思表达。一般（15-17）：紧扣主题，基本覆盖所有要点，语言错误已影响了部分意思
4、的表达， 但多数句子基本正确；基本达到预期写作目的。较差（11-14）：要点不全，内容不完整，行文不够连贯；语言错误较多，半数句子基 本正确。差（6-10）：内容混乱，或主要内容偏离主题，尚能够写出少数与内容相关的可读句。极差（0-5）：只能写出与内容相关的词语，没有有效信息；抄写其他文章，或只是写 出与作文无关的内容。 高考命题组提供的参考范文：高考命题组提供的参考范文： Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The “Foreign Cultures” se
5、ction in our newspaper is very popular among us students. It carries articles written by foreign friends about the cultures of their home countries. Would you please write something about the culture in your part of the United States? And we would especially welcome articles about how Americans spen
6、d their holidays and festivals, and the life of American high school students. You can write anything relevant so long as its interesting and informative.400 words would be fine. Could we have your article before June 28? Im looking forward to hearing from you. （95words） Yours,Li Hua【点评】该参考范文语言简练，表达
7、准确，但从高考考场作文考虑应提示学生词数再增 加一些，句式可再丰富一些，这样才更有利于得高分。 各档次打分参考范文示例：各档次打分参考范文示例：1.阅卷组确定的 24 分作文范例 Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. Recently a refreshing program has been established in our schools English newspaper which is named “The Foreign Culture”. Im
8、 inclined to invite you to write an article. The importance concerning this issue is listed as follows.This program is aiming to introduce the festivals and habits in America, especially including the life of students in high school. Consequently, I intend to inquest you to write some matters. Such
9、as what the individuals tend to do when significant events are forthcoming. Additionally, its universally acknowledged that American students have extremely active thoughts. Considering that how they study in school is what we indeed intend to attain.Whats more, it must be beared in mind that the ar
10、ticles are supposed to be around 400 words. Meanwhile, I anticipate you can finish it before 28th, June.Im looking forward to your conclusive reply. (140 words)2. 阅卷组确定的 22 分作文范例 Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. It will be put on the part of Forei
11、gn Culture, which aims to introduce many other countries culture. This article needs to be concerned with America festival custom and middle school students life. As you are American student, its certain that you can teach us a large amount of knowledge about it. As is known to all, only if we learn
12、 American Culture well, can we truly understand the country. Therefore, Id appreciate it if you write article.There are some requirements below. The essay is around 400 words. Besides, it has to be sent before June, the 28th. If you have other questions, please write to me as soon as possible.(112 w
13、ords) 3. 阅卷组确定的 18 分作文范例 Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. We have an area named “Foreign Culture”. Its used to introduce Americas customs and students daily life. Could you write an essay for me. Initially please write some traditional festivals t
14、o enlarge our horizons. Some interesting things in your school life is also fine. Moreover, please write more than 400 words. So we can edidate is better. Eventually, the deadline is 6,28 because our work must be finished in these days. Dont be late please？Here are my words. Thanks for attention. Lo
15、oking forward to your reply at your earliest convenience.(92 words) 4. 阅卷组确定的 15 分作文范例 Dear Peter, Id like to ask you to write an article for our schools English newspaper. The English newspaper have a “foreign culture” program. If your article is written well, it will be select in newspaper. The article is about American festivals and customs, besides inclouded media school students life. There is no doubt that you can make it. Because you is familiar with them. In opinion, you can also increase students
