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5、的描写：黝黑瘦弱矮小、头发像一团乱草堆、穿着不合身的衣裤和 过时的凉鞋。由此，作者得出的结论是她是个“乡巴佬” 。有语言的 描写：h d u d，Shall l help u t get ur luggage fr thegrund flr?，虽然言 语不多，但读者能感受到这是一个热心善良的女孩。还有行动的描 写：整理完自己的床铺后，帮作者搬行李，表现出她勤劳淳朴的一 面。因此，作者最终产生了要和她交朋友的想法。本文字数不多， 情节简单，但作者成功地塑造了室友的形象：身材矮小，但有着高 大的形象；衣着过时，但有一颗美丽的心灵，与作者相成了强烈的 对比。作者对语言的运用自如，有扎实的语言功底。文章读来没有 晦涩生硬之感。
