《一个文明社会的指数》由会员分享，可在线阅读，更多相关《一个文明社会的指数（3页珍藏版）》请在金锄头文库上搜索。
1、一个文明社会的指数 Index f a ivilized Sietne f the greatest sialists said that the status f en in a siet is a prett reliable index f a ivilized siet If it is true, then the present status f en (hih sees equal ith ens thugh in fat ens status are uh ler than en s in an fields), in pint f vie, shuld ae us pnder
2、 abut hether ur siet is ivilized at allTraditinal idelg is s deepl rted in peple s inds that it is rather hard t be uprted Tent r thirt ears ag,it as believed that a an ust either get arried ung r ris being a spinster Thse h did nt get arried ere thught t be inferir and abnral Frtunatel, tdas en hav
3、e nuerus ptins pen t the besides earl arriage Atuall, a single an is n lnger led dn upn b sietin ivilized regin, t sa the least Hever, in thse baard areas, things dnt g as e expet I as a laringl shed b last inter vaatins experiene I ent t Huizhu, a sall tn next t untain Huang, ith friends I still re
4、eber the arra f erial arhas inside the tn A lal tld us that the ere all in er f thse s alled virtuus en, hse husbands died earl r left the tn, never ing ba and the staed unarried fr the rest f their lives In fat, I as shed at the aintenane f these eaningless gateas, hih serves as a sbl f despise n e
5、n H an the lals regard the as glrius en?Anther iprtant fatr that hapers the develpent f ens status is en s unterpart en en s resistane t ens equalit is partl aused b their aareness that hat the ale des is n lnger indispensable and en a be superir in se fields Atuall, the have prved t be brilliant in
6、 the fiere petitins tie and again rever, ith the rapid develpent f tehnlg, fe tass invlve uh phsial strength Therefre, en an d re r than en setiesAs a atter f fat, the siet itself als las a heav burden and unequal standards n en Althugh rearable prgress has been ade in ahieving better sial status an
7、d sharing re equal rights fr en in the past deades, their rles in their failies reain basiall unhanged The duble burden f ring inside and utside he renders the n pssibilit t ae full use f their talents and hinders the fr taing the leadership e shuld adit that en are favrable fr upatins suh as servie
8、s, hih are paid less than ale bs and have less pprtunit t be prted t tp anageent psitins en ften drp ut at ritial pints in their areers fr the sae f their failies and hildren The deade fr tent five t thirt five has prved t be vital in ahieving suess r seuring a prising pst, hih is als the ears hen e
9、n are liel t have hildren Thus, the are left far behind en in the petitins fr fae and perIn dern siet, e d see en pers, suh as ad a Thather, Hillar lintn, and u i, the vie Preier f hina h plaed an iprtant rle in these ritial das against SARS But h have the dran peple s attentin? ust beause the are e
10、n and feale leaders are t rare t be seenTaing int aunt all the relevant fatrs, e a safel nlude that e nt ae prgress in the ahieveent f en s status and their equal pprtunities if peple s traditinal ideas, ens attitude, siets burden reain unhanged The piture isnt quite rs Equalit ith en ntinues t be t
11、he gal f dern ivilized siet简 评文明社会发展到今天，女性的地位是否彻底地 改观了?如果女性的地位是一个社会发展水平的标志，那么我们的社 会正处在哪一个阶段?文章首尾呼应，最后一段总结扣题，是文章的 可取之处。开篇引用名人名言导入文章中心句(thesis stateent)，看似 提出质疑，实际观点明确。而结尾综述总结论证，再次明确自己的 立场，指出“ e nt ae prgress in the ahieveent f ens status and their equal pprtuts if peples traditinal ideas，en s attitude，siets burden reain unhanged Equalit ith en ntinues t be the gal fdern ivilized siet ”文章条理清晰，从传统观念的束缚、男性群体 对女权运动的反作用和女性的双重社会责任带给她们的困惑这三个 方面充分论证了女性的不平等地位。文章的不足之处在于，第三段 关于男性在女权运动中的作用论述不够深入。通常在面对一个相对 较难阐述的问题时，可以借用比喻或恰当的例证，使论述更容易理 解，更有说服力。
