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1、翻译 1 ：（4 分） 原句： 不管你相信不相信，善于倾听并采纳别人的意见是明智的。 一. 评分标准： Believe it or not / Whether you believe it or not, it is advisable to listen to (others) (readily / willingly) / be a good listener and take/adopt/accept/follow their/ others advice/ suggestion(s) /idea(s) /opinions /viewpoint(s). 或可以： Believe it o
2、r not, being ready/willing to listen to others and adopt their advice is advisable. 或可以： Whether you believe it or not, listening to (others) and adopting their opinion(s) (readily / willingly) are /is advisable. 注意：“采纳”用 receive , “善于”用 be good at 都扣 0.5 分, 原句“善于”意为“乐于” ，漏掉 it 扣 0.5 分 二. 典型错误： 1. 不
3、理解advisable 的意思，把它误认为“倾听” ，而把句子中的“明智的”用“sensible, wise”表示。 2. “不管你相信不相信”：翻译成： No matter whether you believe it or not, 或 Whatever you believe it or not, 3. 句型不熟练, 很多同学漏掉 itWhether you believe or not, / Believe or not 4. 中文“善于”使很多同学句子出现偏差，原本正确的句子又改错。 本题的得分率 2.6 分左右。 1 分 1 分 1 分 1 分 1 分2. 能否坚持自己所做的事情是
4、一个人取得成功的重要因素之一。 （persevere ）Whether one can persevere in what he is doing is one of the important factors of his success. 1) Whether one can persevere in-1 Whether to persevere in 也对 Whether 用 if 扣半分 介词 in 漏掉或用错都扣半分 用 it 做形式主语扣半分 多一个连词 that 扣一分 语序错扣一分 2) what he is doing-1 what he doessomething he i
5、s doing /does the thing that he is doing/ does 都算对 whatever he is doing/ does 除以上两种时态外，has been doing 也算对。其他时态都扣一分 the things what he is doing 或 what he do 都扣一分 3) one of the important factors-1 among the important factors/elements one/an important factor/element 都算对 factor 用错或该用复数而不用都扣半分 important
6、写成 main, major 也扣半分 4) of his success-1to （his）successleading to/contributing to successthat lead to success of (his) achieving success 都算对of his achievementsof being successfulfor him to achieve success/succeedto achieve success /to be successful/ to succeed/ that makes him achieve success/ to achi
7、eving success /of getting success 都扣半分 of whether he can achieve success 扣半分 to achieve a/the success 全扣 that a person can succeed/ achieve success 全扣 另外前后人称一致不扣分，若有矛盾扣半分3. 在线预定出租车虽然很时尚，但许多相关的问题尚待解决。 （as ） Fashionalbe Popular In as 1 分 Stylish Up-to-date fashon 注：as 倒装语序错误扣 0.5 分。写成 although, 把 as 放
8、到后半句中， 扣 1 分。 booking a taxi online reseving a taxi online making a resevation for a taxi onle is 1 分 online booking of a taxi 注： 缺冠词扣 0.5 分， 漏写”is “扣 0.5 分 many related/revelant/concerning problems many problems related to/connected with/associated with/linked to/about/regarding/concerning it 1 分 注
9、： 很多学生”relative” 扣 0.5 分，多写个”but”扣 0.5 分， 漏写 “it”扣 0.5. remain to be are to be solved/dealt with/resolved/ handled/ settled/coped with 1 分 need to be are left to be are wainting to be there are many relevant problems to be 注： 既写了 there are 有直接加 remian 扣 0.5 ， 动词单复数写错扣 0.5. 写成”should be “扣 0.5. 4在北京的
10、地铁上吃东西、抽烟或躺在座位上的人可能会被处以 50-500 元的罚款。 The man who/ The person who/ The one who Those who/ People who/ The people who 1 分 eat, smoke or lie on the seat(s)/ chair(s) are eating, smoking or lying on the seat(s)/chair(s) 1.5 分（每个动作 0.5 分，or 写成 and 扣 0.5 ；lie 拼写错误较严重，60% 以上考生写成 lay,介词写成 in 扣 0.5 ； 与主语单复数不
11、一致扣 0.5 ，不重复扣分；不少考生定语从句 who 后直接加分词，扣 1 分；时态用过去时扣 1 分） on/ in the subway/ metro/ underground in/ of Beijing on/ in the Beijing subway/metro/underground 0.5 分 （“地铁”用复数，扣 0.5； 介词用 at， 扣 0.5； 单词拼写错误，扣 0.5 ；这一 定语如果置于句末成为状语，扣 0.5） can/ may/could/might/be likely to be fined may/might/be likely to pay a fin
12、e/be asked to pay a fine 1.5 分 “可能”0.5 分 “处以罚款”1 分 50 to 500 yuan between 50 to/ and 500 yuan from 50 to 500 yuan 0.5 分 （多了 money 一词，扣 0.5 ；没有 fine 这一名词，用 ranging from 50 to 500yuan， 扣 0.5 分） 此外，用 People eating, smoking or lying on the seats . It is possible/likely for people who to be fined People will probably be fined等表达只要意思完整正确均得分
