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1、文化火锅既美味又营养（2010年） Whats subtly conveyed in the above picture is that all kinds of cultures are mixed in one pot, homogenizing(同化 assimilating）into a whole part. Delightedly, While at the same time, cultural globalization is both tasteful and nutritious. Cultural globalization has been the talk of th
2、e dynamic world ever since the 21st-century among nearly all the countries, which brings about great benefits. For the most part, it has been favorable, to say the least. There is no doubt that it is culture that make us a whole society. (如果下一句使用it开头该使用什么连接词？ 或者怎么把后面的那句改写成what开头)it should be observe
3、d, of course, that such a vibrant (？令人称赞的)phenomenon is not entirely a coincidence. Indeed, I cant think of gigantic people who havent been assimilated by culture. Take Da Shan as an example. To be a Canadian, he 修改：has a large stock of information of Chinese culture , Chinese Kungfu, Lao Shes works
4、 and so forth. It is multi-culture that makes him so smart.The trend, called cultural globalization, which we believe is still in its infancy, will no doubt go further worldwide. China Youth Daily editor Li Lei notes that the trend will not only enhance our own eyesight to the external world, but al
5、so improve native culture. As Chen Le, a 37-year-old sociologist puts it “It 修改： brings coordination programs which are needed a package of deal _(如何用解决问题这句话改写 There has to be coordination programs. What is needed is a package deal.)” A national campaign to study adj. culture has began in China, and
6、 a happy, health and harmonious society may not far behind. （224字）第一段描述图画，没有区别，三者可以用一个模板： 1. What is subtly featured in the above drawing is that are doing, -ing . 在用 adv.描述图画的另一性质。 2. Illustrated in the above cartoon is/are 3. What can be seen from the image is +名词、名词词组，who/which Symbolically, vivi
7、dly, Present, portray, depict, convey, illustrate, Picture, cartoon, image, illustration(卡通画); photo, photograph, picture, image, illustration(照片) Surprisingly, amazingly, obviously, clearly, apparently, 你帮我看看还有没有别的形容词，副词，然后找出一个最好的，只记住那一个， 不然串了。 用这些就行 例如：08年作文第一段： The scene depicted in the above car
8、toon, I feel should catch most viewers attention. What is subtly portrayed in the drawing is that two disabled men are running quickly together, supporting each other. Amazingly, each of them only has one leg. 第一段内容太少，怎么补水？而且第一句话累赘，一般不写。 第一段可以这样开头：Nobody could have failed to notice the fact that has
9、 been a great problem with which we are confronted. 第一类：正面描述： 主题名词has been the talk of the adj. world ever since the sudden emergence/appearance of the in +时间地点，which brings about .For the most part ,主题名词 has been favorable, to say the least. It is 主题名词 that .(强调句型，说明这件事物出现的重要性).It should be observe
10、d, of course, that such a/an adj. is not entirely a coincidence. Indeed similar happenings can be easily found in our daily life. And it should be illustrated in terms of one of my form colleagues/acquaintances.或者是这样 Indeed, I cant think of a single person I have seen who hasnt been ly ed through/by
11、(这句话来源于 I cant think of a single research I have done which a board has not instructed me to look at sitting CEOs first).或者是这样：Adj. parallels are now available in nearly all works of life, and a case point goes to one of my acquaintances who .(你选一个最好的，或者三个例子再掺杂以下)。用：主题名词has been the talk of the adj.
12、 world ever since the sudden emergence/appearance of the in +时间 地点，which brings about .For the most part ,主题名词 has been favorable, to say the least. It is 主题名词 that . 第二段反面写： 主题名词has been the talk of the adj. world ever since the sudden emergence/appearance of the in +时间地点，which brings about .For th
13、e most part , 主题名词 has been miserable/wasteful, to say the least/worst. 1：There are reasons accounting for this happing. 然后再列举出现象发生的原 因. 2：或者指出现象的严重性。可以分条列举：Initially, furthermore, finally.或者 to begin with, moreover, above all. 我想把这句并进去，不知道写在什么地方，你看看：To be sure, 主题名词 has performs an important role i
14、n our daily life, but it is not necessary/erroneous for us to 修改： To be sure, . has been performing an important role in our daily life, but it is not necessary/erroneous for us to There are several reasons accounting for this happing. Initially, furthermore, finally.或者 to begin with, moreover, abov
15、e all. 第三段正面描述： The trend, termed 主题名词, which we believe is still in its infancy/which need to be praised, will no doubt go further/spread/affect worldwide. China Youth Daily editor Li Lei notes that the trend will improve only when there are comprehensive programs. As Chen Le, a 37-year-old sociologist, puts it “There has to be coordination programs. What is needed is a package deal.”（这个是原 句出处，不知道该怎么改写用在好的地方）. 修改：Recently a national campaign to study adj. cu
