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1、阅卷老师告诉你作文如何拿高分【评阅标准与细则】高考英语书面表达满分 25 分，在电脑上阅卷，实行“二评三评四仲裁”制，即每份试卷随机由两位老师改，超过 4 分的差值，由第三个老师改，如第三个老师与其他两个老师的差值仍超过 4 分，则由第四个老师做出最后仲裁。在具体的评阅操作中，有五个评分切入点，然后根据内容、语言和组织结构等方面判定分数：（1）3 分 条理不清，思维紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。（2）8 分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。（3）13 分 基本切题。有些地方思想表达不清楚，文字勉强连贯。语言错误相当多，其中有些是严重错误。（
2、4）18 分 切题。思想表达清楚，文字连贯，但有些语言错误，甚至严重错误。（5）23 分 切题。思想表达清楚，语言表达能力强，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误。高考评卷过程非常公正公平，评卷标准操作性也很强。同时，2014 年的评分原则明确规定要避免趋中倾向，该给高分的给高分，包括满分；该给低分给低分，包括零分。一名阅卷人员在评阅的全部试卷中不应只给中间的几种分数，这样才能将好的作文凸显出来，在分数上拉开差距。以下高考作文题为例，分析高考评卷标准，以便能更好地指导大家高考备考复习。【高考试题重现】假定你是星光中学的高中毕业生李华，母校将为高一新生举办主题为“What to learn i
3、n senior high school？”的英语沙龙活动，特邀请你结合自身经历谈谈自己的体会。请根据以下提示准备一份英语发言稿。1.学会学习：方法，习惯等；2.学会做人：真诚，友善；3.学会其他：考生自拟。注意：1.词数 120 左右；2.发言稿开头和结尾已给出，不须抄在答题卡上，不计入总词数。Good morning， everyone！ It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school._Thank you！通过审题，考生应该明确这篇文章的文体是演讲
4、稿，文章内容要包含以下三个方面：1.学会学习； 2.学会做人； 3.学会其他。【考生作文展评】五类文（3 分）Good morning， everyone！ It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on learn in senior high school.Im LiHua， Im xingguang high student. I think， we should can learn， learn study. We should learn as a people， too. Learn cooperation， c
5、an make friends to us. to anyone better and anyone make friends.It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on learn in senior high school.点评：此文条理不清，思维紊乱，语言支离破碎，内容空洞，不知所云。除第一段和第三段摘抄原题，通篇文章找不到一个完整的句子。同时，字数也明显不足。四类文（8 分）What to learn in senior high school？This senior aims is talk about stu
6、dy way and study make people. As my opinions， I think not study way， study reading， but study make people. A can study people， he know many very good study way， and have many good habits. A can make studies people， could study sinctrely and warm-heart. On the other hand， if you can good good study a
7、nd good good make people， we can very like you！ Besues I think will is a perfect people. So， Im looking forward to you be better！ I like our school！点评：这篇作文除了 I like our school 是完整句，其他句子都不完整，语言错误相当严重。文中虽有一些内容，但意思表达不清楚，内容不完整（缺少第三个要点内容），连贯性差。文章没有层次，一段到底。三类文（13 分）In order to have a rich senior high scho
8、ols life， and enrich our hirozongs. I have some suggestions to share with you.As I just mentioned， In order to have a life of high school. You should have good command of study. And we must gasp some learning skills and hard work. The learning skills is studing ways and have a good studing hobby. In
9、 our high school life， friends is necessary to our life， so we must learning for our friends. In other ways， we should ， have a good command of hobby. For example， singing and painting， and we should reading some benefits book. Because the is good for our future.All in all， I belive had a bright fut
10、ure is waiting for us， because we hard work.点评：该篇作文文字勉强连贯，也包含了所给要点，基本切题。但有些地方意思表达不清楚，如 so we must learning for our friends.这句话令人费解。语言错误随处可见，只有画线句子无错。二类文（18 分）Good morning， everyone！ It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.Firstly， You should lea
11、rn how to study. Study to every students need skills. So we can practice it by ourselves. And we also need to form the habits of study. It is important for us. Secondly， We should learn to get along well with teachers or students. During the progress， we should be honest to treat them and friendly.
12、Finally， I think our health is important to study. So we should do exercise every day.These are my opinion to you. We should become hard-working people. I believe you can do better in study and become more popular in school.点评：该文章包含了所给三个要点，框架结构完整，表达清楚，文字连贯（使用了 firstly， secondly，finally，so 等连接词），语法结构
13、和词汇的应用基本正确，但语言错误较多。如：（1）第二段第一行 You 和第三行的 We 要改为小写。（2 ）Study to every students need skills.应改为 Every student needs skills in studying. （3）we should be honest to treat them and friendly. 应改为 we should be honest and friendly to them. （4） And we also need to form the habits/habit of study. （5） These are
14、 my opinion/opinions to you.（以上斜线后的黑体字为正确答案）同时，文章中也有一些高级词汇和高级句型。高级词汇有 form the habit of、be important for、 get along well with、 do exercise、 do better in 等。高级句型有（1）I think our health is important to study.（宾语从句）（2 ） I believe you can do better in study and become more popular in school.（宾语从句加并列句）一类文（
15、23 分）Good morning， everyone！ It is my honor to be here to share with you my opinions on what to learn in senior high school.Im Li Hua， from Xing Guang Middle School. I think that the most important thing for us is that we must learn how to study. We should study hard in school， good habits should be
16、 developed， too.Then， importance must be attached to it that we should be friendly to others. After all， all friendship is that important for us all. Never can we live without friends.Last but not least， it is no denying the fact that we should respect our teachers. Its our teachers that give us knowledge. They are worth being respected by us.Only in this way can
