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1、小学英语作文辅导 (精选多篇)第一篇：英语作文辅导奖题目：my best friend扶沟县秋实高级中学三3 班陈军宇辅导老师：王倩楠my best friendli yan, my best friend, is my classmate. she has big eyes. her long hair is often plained. sweet smile is often on her face, makes her more lively.li yan is very clever. she is good at her school subjects. she has wonth
2、e school scholarship twice, i always take her as my model in study. she tells me that we should make good use of time.li yan is kind-hearted and is always ready to helping others. any student in my class who has trouble in study likes asking her for help. she doesnt like others to praise her, becaus
3、e she thinks what she did is ordinary.i feel proud to have such a friend.评语：本文第一段第二行中 that 改为 which, 因为在此用 which 引导非限制性定语从句。第二段第一行中 has 改为 had, 因为两次获得奖学金应该用过去完成时态。第三段中 helping 改为 help, 因为之前的 to 为动词不定式后应用动词原形。第三段第二行中 so 改为 but, 因为联系上下文句意在此应表转折。本文简述我的一位最好的朋友李燕，从她的外貌，学习和人际交往方面展开描述。李燕不但长的漂亮，而且学习优秀，两次获得奖
4、学金，是我学习的典范。另外她心地善良，非常乐于助人，为人谦虚谨慎。本文语句结构精确且用词精炼优美，主题突出，不失一篇经典之作。第二篇：2014 英语中考作文辅导2014 英语中考作文辅导1、手机利与弊recently,short messages become more and more popular with both the young and the old.people accept the convenient way of communication and some even cannot live without them.as to the easons why so ma
5、ny people are in favour of the short messages,in my opinion,therere three points.first, it can save time if you want to inform your friends of something in one or two words by sending a short message.by comparison with letters or email,short messages are really more quick for others to receive you a
6、s the mobile phones are always with them.second,short messages cost less than making a phone call.third,people who are not very familiar with each other can chat by short messages more easily,through which more and more people can know of others and become friends. however,nothing that is perfect ex
7、ists in the world.short messages also have some disadvantages with them.some people cheat or fool others by telling them that they have won some prizes through short messages.also,taking advantage of peoples ignorance,some websites charge a good deal of expenses form short messages.above all,short m
8、essage is product of the hitech nowadays.it will serve us very well if we make proper and full use of it.2、关于电动车a lot of “family of electric vehicles students” have no knowledge of the relevant transport training, do not look at traffic signs on the road marking, like the electric car when the motor
9、cycle o(好 ：)pened, often in disregard of the risk into the fast lane, or speeding along in the slow . as a result, the road can often be seenchaos, reverse, cut-away line of electric vehicles, the bad behavior of the traffic awareness and timely, if not corrected, would have an adverse impact on chi
10、ldren. at the same time, each value of electric vehicles as a result of two or three thousand dollars, the driver is a student, easily become the target of criminals and crime, easy to bring the personal safety of the students potential. not long ago, a student in a city electric car ride through mo
11、untain tunnels tung oil, were taken away from electric cars3、关于低碳we have only one earth,its our duty to protect our enviroment.now there is a new lifestyle called low carbow ,have you ever heard of it ? what does it mean? it means low energy and no waste.as a student,what can we do for it? its easy,
12、you can walk or ride to school instead of driving to school . in order to save paper , you can write on both sides of paper, before we left the classroom, we should turn off lights and the computer .do you have any other good ideas? please tell me, we should also call on the people around us to do s
13、omething for low carbon living. only in this way will the earth he a good place to live on. if we dont do anything,do remember ,the last drop of water on the earth may be a tear-drop of us.4、玉树地震1） on april 12th, a big earthquake happened in yushu, qinhai. many people lost their family and their hom
14、es. all the chinese people feel quite sad.a lot of people volunteer to help them. some people raise money for them, some people buy something for them, some people go there to comfort the sad children. thousands of soldiers help them to save their relatives and rebuild their homes even foreign frien
15、ds also give them a hand.im deeply moved by these people. soill use my pocket money to buy somefood and school things for the children there. i think all of us should try our best to help them to get out of the trouble together.2）学生会地震后的倡议书dear students ，after the terrible earthquake, there are lots
16、 of children out of school. some of them are even homeless.their schools and houses have destroyed. they can just live in the open air. they dont have enough school things or clothes .as we all know, every kid has the right to go to school, but now they are in trouble. as a chinese, we should help them as possible as we can. we can raise some money and things for them. and we can also write to them to encourage them. i hope they will return to scho
