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1、1,Lecture 5,CET-4 写作,2012年5月10日,Way to success,2,CET-4 写作,分值比例 评分原则 评分标准 写作时间安排 写作学习方法,Way to success,3,四级写作分值比例,四级总分710分，作文占15%，下面是作文标准分的换算方式： 分数 标准分 分数 标准分 分数 标准分 15 106.5 10 81 5 58.5 14 100.5 9 76.5 4 55.5 13 94.5 8 72 3 52.5 12 90 7 67.5 2 49.5 11 85.5 6 63 1 46.5 0 43.5,Way to success,4,评分原则,1
2、、检查考生是否达到大学英语教学大纲规定的四级教学要求。2、采用总体评分（Global Scoring)方法 阅卷人员就总的印象给出奖励分（reward scores),而不是按语言点的错误数目扣分。3、 从内容和语言两方面对作文进行综合判断。作文应表达题目所规定的内容。评分要考虑文章是否切题，是否清楚而合适地表达思想，语言错误是否造成理解障碍。,Way to success,5,评分标准,1. 评分标准分为五个等级：2分、5分、8分、11分和14分。各有标准样卷一至二份。 2. 阅卷人员根据阅卷标准，对照样卷评分，若认为与某一分数（如8分）相似，即定为该分数（即8分）；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数
3、，则可加1分（即9分）或减1分（即7分），但不得加或减0.5分。,Way to success,6,评分原则和评分标准,对各等级的具体解释为：2分：条理不清，思路紊乱；语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多为严重错误。5分：基本切题；表达思想不够清楚，文字连贯性差；有较多的严重语言错误。8分：基本切题；有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。11分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。14分：切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好，基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。注：白卷，作文与题目毫不相关，或只有几个孤立的词而无法表达思想，0分。字数不足应
4、酌情扣分。,Way to success,7,各分值范文,2009年6月英语四级作文 Free admission to museums,越来越多的博物馆现在免费向公众开放,目的是有人认为这样做会带来一些问题在我看来,Way to success,8,2分 一塌糊涂,条理不清，思想紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。 Nowdays, Social appeared more more free Admissions to museums. its in order to people wasted money. In adition, rich in peoples l
5、ife and increase more knowldeges But some people thought free Adimssions to museums have brought much problems. In hand, a plenty of people visited,Way to success,9,5分糊里糊涂,基本切题，表达思想不清楚，连贯性差，有较多严重语言错误。 In order to enrich the culture of people, more and more musuems were provided free admissions. Some
6、body thought it would take some problems like that. The first, because of free admissions of Museums were attracted a large numbers of people who interested in all around the world. And those who take part in effected the traffic crowed around the museums, even though affected people who live in nex
7、t to the museum life,Way to success,10,8分马马虎虎,基本切题。 有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，有一些是严重错误。 There is an interesting and instractive picture which goes like this: More and more museums are free for people. They want more people go to museums. But some people argue that it make some trouble for free for
8、 people. The reason is the economy of the museums would be worse than before. Worst of all, it may take a mess for more people come to the museums.,Way to success,11,11分清清楚楚,切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误 Now more and more museums are free without charge to the public. Does that make any sence? Free admiss
9、ion to musuems helps us save money, but it also encourages us to go to museums to learn something else and get more knowledge. This contributes to improve the living level of the public. It can certainly let us know more about our country and the world, which has a good effect on our development. Ev
10、ery coin has two sides. It can also bring some problems. For example,Way to success,12,14分漂漂亮亮,切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺、连贯，基本上无语言错误。,Nowadays, more and more museums are open to the public for free. Free admissions to museums will motivate peoples interests in history, arts and science. In this way, museums ca
11、n provide people with easier access to knowledge, which is of vital importance for the whole nation.,Way to success,13,However, some people hold that free admissions to museums can bring about many problems. Since anybody can enter a museum without paying, the museum can be overcrowded and it will b
12、e a difficult job for museums to maintain their collections. Besides, museums will face financial problems since they cant make profits from the admission fee. Due to the decrease in profits, museums have less motivation to up-date their collections and out-of-date museums cant avoid the fate to clo
13、se up in the long run.,Way to success,14,In my opinion, free admissions to museums are good for the public, but on the other hand they may pose problems to the museum management. Governments should provide help to museums and guide them to serve the public better.,Way to success,15,写作时间安排,9：10 考试正式开
14、始 8：509：00 试音时间 9：009：10 播放考场指令，发放作文考卷 9：10 开始作文考试 9：35 发放含有快速阅读的试题册（但9：40才允许开始做） 9：409：55 做快速阅读 9：5510：00 收答题卡一（即作文和快速阅读） 9：5510：00重新戴上耳机，试音寻台，准备听力考试 10：00开始听力考试，电台开始放音 ，听力结束后完成剩余考项。 11：20全部考试结束。,Way to success,16,写作时间安排,30分钟完成写作 1. 3 分钟审题 2. 25分钟写作 3. 2分钟检查 拼写 标点 语法,Way to success,17,写作学习方法,一、提高实力
15、 背诵 默写 中译英 写作,Way to success,18,2001-2011年历年四级作文题目,2001年1月四级作文 How to Succeed in a Job Interview? 议论文：阐述面试在求职过程中的作用及注 意事项 2001年6月四级作文 A letter to a Schoolmate 书信：给同窗好友写信邀请他参加度假活动。,Way to success,19,2001-2011年历年四级作文题目,2002年1月四级作文 书信：就本校食堂卫生状况给校长写一封抱怨 信 2002年6月四级作文 Student Use of Computers 图表：根据图表阐述大学生使用计算机的情况并解释原因。,
