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1、作文写作技巧及训练,议论文,正反观点对比,Teaching aims:,At the end of this class, the students will:,1. Master the skills of write a argumentativewriting.2. Learn how to make a perfect writing by using some beautiful sentences,假如你事实李华，你班同学最近开展了一场讨论，主题是：高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼，请根据下面所提供的信息，写一篇短文，介绍讨论的情况，并发表自己的观点,1.审 题,文 体：时 态：内容要点
2、：,议论文,一般现在时,1.应该每天进行体育锻炼2.做运动，但时间不要过3.锻炼能增强质减少疾病4.锻炼能使大脑休息5.锻炼浪费时间;使人疲劳6.锻炼以后很兴奋，较长时间不能学习 7.锻炼中可能受伤8个人观点,文章结构,正反观点对比类的文章,提出问题,不同观点对比,说明自己观点,文章结构,高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼. 对这个问题有两种态度. (2) 观点一: 支持(3)观点二: 反对(4)我的观点: ,提出问题,不同观点对比,说明自己观点,实 战 演 练,例：作为一个中学生, 你肯定经历过多次考试, 体验过成功, 也遭遇过失败. 请你根据提示内容,简要概述中学生普遍存在的对考试失败的两种态度,
3、 并结合自身实际, 说明你的观点.态度一: 当考试结果不尽人意时, 情绪低落, 丧失信心, 不再继续努力.态度二: 当考试失败时, 分析找出失败的原因, 鼓励自己, 增强自信, 避免再犯同样的错。你的观点: 失败乃成功之母, ,审题,体裁:时态:人称:要点:,议论文,现在时,第一人称,(1) 我们中学生经历过多次考试, 体验过成功, 也遭遇过失败. (2) 态度一: 当考试结果不尽人意时, 情绪低落, 丧失信心, 不再继续努力.(3)态度二: 当考试失败时, 分析找出失败的原因, 鼓励自己, 增强自信, 避免再犯同样的错。(4)我的观点: 失败乃成功之母, ,文章结构,正反观点对比类的文章,提
4、出问题,不同观点对比,说明自己观点,文章结构,我们中学生经历过多次考试, 体验过成功, 也遭遇过失败. 对考试失败大致有两种态度. (2) 态度一: 当考试结果不尽人意时, 情绪低落, 丧失信心, 不再继续努力.(3)态度二: 当考试失败时, 分析找出失败的原因, 鼓励自己, 增强自信, 避免再犯同样的错。(4)我的观点: 失败乃成功之母, ,提出问题,不同观点对比,说明自己观点,如 何 写？ 揣测阅卷老师的心理,漂漂亮亮（21-25）规规矩矩（16-20）一般一般（11-15）马马虎虎（6-10）一塌糊涂（0-5）,5档,1.卷面（书写、字数）,（2）3段,（1）4段,2.段落结构,介绍主题
5、,正方观点,反方观点,自己观点,反方观点,介绍主题与正方观点,自己观点,3.内容,（1）首段、尾段；段首、段尾,（3）语言运用是否连贯得体，连接词使用是否恰当,（2）要点是否齐全,（4）有无加分句型（所谓的亮点句子）,回顾自己作品、总结得与失,得：1、结构把握比较到位,2、要点基本齐全,3、连接词使用有体现,优 势 继 续 保 持,失：1、书写,2、首段、尾段,3、连接词使用过于固化,4、基本功不扎实，语言运用不够地道,共 同 寻 找 对 策,5、缺乏亮点句型,回 归 考 题,1.审 题,文 体：时 态：内容要点：,议论文,一般现在时,1.应该每天进行体育锻炼2.做运动，但时间不要过3.锻炼能
6、增强质减少疾病4.锻炼能使大脑休息5.锻炼浪费时间;使人疲劳6.锻炼以后很兴奋，较长时间不能学习 7.锻炼中可能受伤8个人观点,文章结构,正反观点对比类的文章,提出问题,不同观点对比,说明自己观点,文章结构,高三学生要不要参加体育锻炼. 对这个问题有两种态度. (2) 态度一: 支持(3)态度二: 反对(4)我的观点: ,提出问题,不同观点对比,说明自己观点,2.作文结构,1.have had a discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises. As we know, every coi
7、n has two coins./Different students have different ideas .2.55%of the students think.such as(举例).（原因）.3.On the other hand,45% of the students believe.(原因）.4.In my opinion, I prefer to,3.内容中要用的关键词语体育锻炼做早操增强体质减少疾病休息学习有效果浪费时间投入学习受伤,take exercisesdo morning exercisesbuild up the bodyreduce the diseaseha
8、ve a reststudy more effectivelya waste of time pay attention to studybe hurt,Recently , we have had a discussion about whether students of Senior 3 should take physical exercises. As we know, every coin has two sides. 55%of the students think they should take all kinds of exercises every day ,such a
9、s doing morning exercises, playing table tennis and playing basketball, but not spend too much time on them . As a proverb says ,“all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. ” Firstly, exercise builds up their body and reduce lots of diseases. Secondly, sports let them have a good rest so that their
10、 study will be more effective. On the contrary, 45% of the students believe taking exercise is a waste of time and tiring. Besides, after taking exercise, they are too excited for a long time to pay attention to their lessons. In addition, its possible to be hurt in sports.In my opinion, I prefer to
11、 take proper exercises in my spare time. As a student, although the study is very important, nothing is more important than having a healthy body. Therefore, it is necessary for us to take proper exercises in my spare time,知 识 积 累,介绍讨论的主题(开头句)：,我们举行了一场讨论，讨论内容是学生是否可以 We had a discussion about whether
12、 students should be allowed to 我们已经作了一个调查，调查内容是学生是否可以 Weve had a survey on whether students should be allowed to 我写信是要告诉你我们的一场讨论，讨论内容是否可以 Im writing to tell you about a discussion we have had about whether students should be allowed to,过渡句,Opinions are divided on this issue. Opinions are mainly divi
13、ded into two groups.Different people, however, have different opinions on this matter. Different people, however, think quite differently on this matter.,在这个问题上大家意见有分歧。,主要有两种不同意见。,然而，在这件事上不同的人有不同的看法。,介绍正方观点：,Sixty percent of the students are for the idea. Sixty percent of the students think it neces
14、sary toSome people think that according to them, all of us should.Some believe thatSome people are in favor of the opinion that ,进一步介绍正方观点,Whats more, we can as well as Besides, its , which ,介绍反方观点,However, of the students thinkOn the contrary, of the students thinkHowever, others have different opi
15、nions.However，others have just the opposite opinion. They think thatOthers argue that In their opinion,进一步介绍反方观点,Whats worseWhats moreIn addition, First, Second, Third, ,本人观点：As far as I am concerned, . (In my opinion, .; Its my opinion that) For one reason,. For another reason In a word,.Only throughcan we have a bright future.,常见模板1,_ had a discussion about whether_. Opinions are divided on this issue. _of the students think _ should _. _. Whats more, _. On the contrary, _ of the students think _ shouldnt _. Whats worse, _. As far as I am concerned,.,
