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1、翻译 1 ：（4 分）原句： 不管你相信不相信，善于倾听并采纳别人的意见是明智的。一. 评分标准： Believe it or not / Whether you believe it or not, it is advisable to listen to (others) (readily / willingly) / be a good listenerand take/adopt/accept/follow their/ others advice/ suggestion(s) /idea(s) /opinions /viewpoint(s).或可以：Believe it or not
2、, being ready/willing to listen to others and adopt their advice is advisable. 或可以：Whether you believe it or not, listening to (others) and adopting their opinion(s) (readily / willingly) are /is advisable.注意：“采纳”用 receive , “善于”用 be good at 都扣 0.5 分, 原句“善于”意为“乐于” ，漏掉 it 扣 0.5 分二. 典型错误：1. 不理解 advisa
3、ble 的意思，把它误认为 “倾听” ，而把句子中的 “明智的”用“sensible, wise”表示。2. “不管你相信不相信”：翻译成：No matter whether you believe it or not, 或 Whatever you believe it or not, 3. 句型不熟练, 很多同学漏掉 itWhether you believe or not, / Believe or not4. 中文“善于”使很多同学句子出现偏差，原本正确的句子又改错。本题的得分率 2.6 分左右。1 分 1 分1 分1 分分2. 能否坚持自己所做的事情是一个人取得成功的重要因素之一。
4、（persevere ）Whether one can persevere in what he is doing is one of the important factors of his success.1) Whether one can persevere in-1Whether to persevere in 也对Whether 用 if 扣半分介词 in 漏掉或用错都扣半分用 it 做形式主语扣半分多一个连词 that 扣一分语序错扣一分2) what he is doing-1what he doessomething he is doing /doesthe thing th
5、at he is doing/ does 都算对whatever he is doing/ does除以上两种时态外，has been doing 也算对。其他时态都扣一分the things what he is doing 或 what he do 都扣一分3) one of the important factors-1among the important factors/elementsone/an important factor/element 都算对factor 用错或该用复数而不用都扣半分important 写成 main, major 也扣半分4) of his succe
6、ss-1to （his） successleading to/contributing to successthat lead to success of (his) achieving success 都算对of his achievementsof being successfulfor him to achieve success/succeedto achieve success /to be successful/ to succeed/ that makes him achieve success/ to achieving success /of getting success
7、都扣半分of whether he can achieve success 扣半分to achieve a/the success 全扣that a person can succeed/ achieve success 全扣另外前后人称一致不扣分，若有矛盾扣半分3. 在线预定出租车虽然很时尚，但许多相关的问题尚待解决。 （as ）FashionalbePopularIn as 1 分StylishUp-to-datefashon注：as 倒装语序错误扣 0.5 分。写成 although, 把 as 放到后半句中， 扣 1 分。booking a taxi online reseving a
8、 taxi onlinemaking a resevation for a taxi onle is 1 分online booking of a taxi注： 缺冠词扣 0.5 分， 漏写”is “扣 0.5 分many related/revelant/concerning problemsmany problems related to/connected with/associated with/linked to/about/regarding/concerning it 1 分注： 很多学生”relative” 扣 0.5 分，多写个”but”扣 0.5 分， 漏写 “it”扣 0
9、.5.remain to beare to be solved/dealt with/resolved/ handled/ settled/coped with 1 分need to beare left to beare wainting to bethere are many relevant problems to be注： 既写了 there are 有直接加 remian 扣 0.5， 动词单复数写错扣 0.5. 写成”should be “扣 0.5. 4在北京的地铁上吃东西、抽烟或躺在座位上的人可能会被处以 50-500 元的罚款。The man who/ The person
10、who/ The one who Those who/ People who/ The people who1 分eat, smoke or lie on the seat(s)/ chair(s)are eating, smoking or lying on the seat(s)/chair(s)1.5 分（每个动作 0.5 分，or 写成 and 扣 0.5；lie 拼写错误较严重，60% 以上考生写成lay,介词写成 in 扣 0.5； 与主语单复数不一致扣 0.5，不重复扣分；不少考生定语从句who 后直接加分词，扣 1 分；时态用过去时扣 1 分） on/ in the subwa
11、y/ metro/ underground in/ of Beijingon/ in the Beijing subway/metro/underground0.5 分 （“地铁”用复数，扣 0.5； 介词用 at， 扣 0.5； 单词拼写错误，扣 0.5；这一定语如果置于句末成为状语，扣 0.5）can/ may/could/might/be likely to be finedmay/might/be likely to pay a fine/be asked to pay a fine1.5 分 “可能”0.5 分 “处以罚款”1 分50 to 500 yuanbetween 50 to/ and 500 yuanfrom 50 to 500 yuan0.5 分 （多了 money 一词，扣 0.5；没有 fine 这一名词，用 ranging from 50 to 500yuan， 扣 0.5 分）此外，用 People eating, smoking or lying on the seats .It is possible/likely for people who to be fined People will probably be fined等表达只要意思完整正确均得分
