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1、2013届中考英语书面表达总复习教案根据中文和英文提示，写一封意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的回信。信的开头和结尾已给出，其词数不计入所完成的回信内。请不要写出你的校名和姓名。75. 成长中每个人都要面对烦恼，并解决问题。假设你叫刘明，是美国中学生艾丽的朋友，你收到了她的电子邮件，请给她回复，回答她的问题，提出你的建议，并就此事谈谈你的看法。Hi! Liu Ming,Im so sad. Angela is a close friend of mine. This morning she wanted to borrow some money from me. If I lend her t
2、he money, Im afraid she wont pay me back. I dont know what to do. Do you have the same problem? I need your help.Im looking forward to hearing from you soon.Yours,AliceHi! Alice,Im glad to hear from. _I hope what I said can help you.Yours,Liu Ming【解题要点】1. 回答她的问题2. 提出建议3. 对于此事谈谈你的看法来信内容简要说明：Alice表示自己
3、的好友Angela问自己借钱，但自己不知是否该借给她，担心对方可能不能归还。问刘明是否遇到同样的问题?请刘明给自己一些建议，期待回信。【解题思路】依旧牢记结构、要点、逻辑、语法、亮点五大要素，审题一定要仔细，看准题目中的要点为：回答她的问题;提出建议;对于此事谈谈你的看法。1. 结构、要点文章第一部分，首先要做的就是在来信中找问题，很明显，只有一个问句 Do you have the same problem? ，所以作文中应该开门见山：I have the same problem. / I have never met things like this. 而且，来信的第一句话为 Im so
4、 sad.， 所以第一部分内容可以表示安慰 Dont worry 或者表示理解对方的感受 I can understand you.文章第二部分，根据第二个要点，提出建议。可能涉及到如下几种建议，如：If its not a lot of money, you can lend it to her.(如果钱不多的话，可以借给她)If she wants to borrow a lot of money from you, youd better suggest her to ask her parents for help. (如果她想要借很多钱的话，你最好建议她去问她的父母寻求帮助)If y
5、ou decide to help her, then trust her, because she is your close friend.(如果你决定把钱借给她的话，就要信任她，因为她是你的好朋友。)文章第三部分，根据第三个要点，谈谈自己的感受，其实，也就是回答why，即：为什么要给出如上建议的原因。如：Friendship is more important than money, if your close friend needs help, you are supposed to give him / her a hand and trust him / her. (友谊和信任比
6、金钱更重要，如果你的好朋友需要帮助，你应该帮助他/她，并且给予信任。)We students dont have jobs to earn money but depend on our parents, when we need some money, its always a better choice to ask our parents for help instead of turn to our friends. Meanwhile, we should be honest to our parents. (我们学生没有工作，不挣钱，需要依赖我们的父母。当我们需要用钱的时候，问父母
7、要总比问同学借要好。同时，我们应该对父母要保持诚实)2. 逻辑如果考生能够找全题目要点，并且按照要点所给顺序写下来，结构清晰，那么逻辑应该是通顺的。因为全文基本是按照如下思路：现身说法，对于对方所遇到的问题表示理解 - 提出建议 - 说明感受，即说明所提建议的原因。其中，可以使用大量的逻辑连词和状语从句表示因果、条件、转折等逻辑关系。3. 语法、亮点根据题目要求，回信文体形式大体为说明文，议论参半，所以下笔前首先确定文章时态大体为一般现在时态。由于文章话题属于生活化细节问题，所以文章内容一般不涉及难度过大的词或句子，只要句式灵活多变，用词准确、丰富，逻辑通顺，语法完全正确，多用词组，向批卷老师
8、呈现出扎实的语法功底和丰富的词汇量，也就是文章的亮点所在。One possible version:Hi! Alice,Im glad to hear from you.Yes, I sometimes have the same problem.I think if she really needs the money, youd better lend it to her. You dont need to worry too much. Shell probably pay you back when she has money. If you dont lend her the mon
9、ey, Im afraid you may lose the friend.I think everyone may have trouble in life and we should help each other. So when my friends need money, I will try my best to help them. Maybe Ill get it back, or maybe I wont.I hope what I said can help you.Yours, Liu Ming 【2011上海】IX Writing(作文) 共18分106. Write
10、at least 60 words about the topic “Im member of _.”(以”我是的一员”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文,标点符合不占格子”)提示:你可以作为任意兴趣小组或者社团的人员,或者作为家庭,班级,社区额的一员,写出你的经历,感受等.Use the following points as a reference.Are you glad to be a member of ?What do you do in it?How do you feel as such a member?【写作思路】一、审题本文要求写一篇介绍自己作为某兴趣小组或某社团成员的文章，
11、要求学生写出自己的经历以及感受等。二、列举写作要点1. have been a member of singing and dancing club for +时间;2. Im an actor in the this club.3. Though I am very tired, I like to sing and dance every day.三、列出关键短语和句型be a member of , an actor, singing and dacing, feel very happy,【范文】A Possible Version：Im a Member of the Singing
12、 and Dancing ClubHello, everyone! Im very glad to be a member of the Singing and Dancing Club. I have been in this club for 2 years. Im an actor in the club. I like singing and dancing very much. I sing and dance with my classmates on weekends. Though I am very tired, I like to sing and dance every
13、day. It makes me feel very happy.(2011桂林)C. 书面表达(共15分)91. 今年是桂林市创建全国文明城市关键的一年。“桂林是我家，创城靠大家”!作为中学生，我们应积极参与。请根据以下提示，写一篇80词左右的短文(开头已给出,不计字数)。要点：星沙英语网 (1) 尊敬老师，对人礼貌;(2) 帮助他人，友善待人;(3) 遵守交规，过马路走斑马线，不闯红灯;(4) 保护环境，不乱扔垃圾，不踩草地等;(5) 补充两句个人观点。参考词汇：respect(尊敬); be polite to; obey(遵守); traffic rules; zebra crossi
14、ng(斑马线)要求：(1)内容包括所提供的信息及要点，可适当发挥，但不要逐条翻译;(2)不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息。One possible version:Guilin is now making its effort to become a national civilized city. As students, what should we do?We must respect our teachers and be polite to others. We should also help those who are in need and be friendly to the
15、 people around us. Besides, we must obey the traffic rules. When crossing the streets, we should walk on the zebra crossing. And we mustnt go across the street when the traffic lights are red. Whats more, we should protect our environment. For example, We mustnt step on the grass and climb trees. Lit
