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1、优选例题1.【2020天津卷】假设你是晨光中学高三学生李津。你校于6月8日举办了成人礼活动，你的英国朋友Chris很想了解该活动。你于当晚给Chris回一封电子邮件，介绍关情况，内容包括：（1）成人礼活动内容（成长点滴回顾、观看校友抗疫事边录像）；（2）对活动的感受；（3）对自己未来的展望。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头已给出，不计入总词数。参考词汇：成人礼 the coming-of age ceremony 新冠脑炎 COVID-F9Dear Chris,Im so glad to hear from you. Yours,Li Jin
2、【范文】Dear Chris,I am so glad to hear from you. The coming-of-age ceremony was held in our school on June 8th this month. During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced. After that, we all watched the v
3、ideo of alumnus fighting against the epidemic.Through the activity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined. When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them. In the future, I will be a good doctor to heal the wounded a
4、nd rescue the dying, devoting myself to my work.Best wishes！Yours,Li Jin【解析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一封信。第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，写作内容。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态为一般现在时，一般过去时和一般将来时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段：成人礼活动内容（成长点滴回顾，观看校友抗疫事迹录像等）。第二段：对活动的感受；对自己未来的展望。第三段：表达期望。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语。如congratulate s
5、b on sth.，be faced with，heal the wounded and rescue the dying，devote oneself to doing sth.。第四步：确定较为高级的句型。如that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语（During the coming-of-age ceremony, the headmaster congratulated us on stepping into the adult, reviewing the growth period that we had experienced.），that引导的表语从句（Through the a
6、ctivity, what I felt is that I am able to shoulder the responsibility and make us stronger and more determined.），时间状语从句的省略句（When faced with the difficulties and failures, I must overcome them.）。第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接，如After that，besides，however。第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【名师点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，
7、层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式，如that引导的定语从句和现在分词作状语，that引导的表语从句，时间状语从句的省略句等高级句式的应用提升了写作的档次，整个短文显示出了作者高水平的英语表达能力。2.【2019天津卷】假设你是晨光中学的李津，英国友好学校将派教师来你校参加为期一周的暑期交流活动。活动期间，英方教师Chris将做一个有关西方艺术的讲座，现就讲座内容征求你校学生的意见。请根据以下提示给Chris写一封电子邮件：（1）你喜欢的讲座话题（从音乐、美术、舞蹈中任选其一）；（2）选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容；（3）希望从中有何收获。注意：（1）词数不少于100；（2）可适当加入
8、细节，使内容充实、行文连贯；（3）开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Chris,Im Li Jim, a student at Chenguang High School. Thank you for your time.Yours,Li Jin【范文】Dear Chris，Im Li Jin, a student at Chenguang High School. As far as I am concerned, a lecture about western art will be given in the coming interchange activity in summe
9、r vacation. Im writing to give some suggestions about the topic of the lecture.As a music lover, Im greatly fond of classic music, therefore I would appreciate it if you could talk about something about western classical music such as the origin and developing progress of it. In addition, some repre
10、sentative figures and their masterpieces are also expected to be introduced.I believe this lecture will enrich my knowledge about western classical music and develop students interest in western art. Last but not least, I sincerely hope that you will take my suggestions into serious account and hope
11、 you a wonderful trip to our school.Thank you for your time.Yours,Li Jin【解析】本篇书面表达要求考生写一封电子邮件，为半开放式作文。可分为三段来写：第一段：话题+论点（得知什么消息+写电子邮件什么意图）；第二段：具体内容（介绍你喜欢的讲座话题，选择该话题的原因及关于该话题你感兴趣的内容等）；第三段：总结和希望（希望从中有何收获等）。注意一般以第一人称为主，时态为一般现在时和一般将来时为主。【亮点说明】本文篇首句说明写信目的，篇中句介绍详情、提出具体建议，篇尾句提出希望采纳建议，并祝福。文中采用了不少高级词汇和句式。1. A
12、s far as I am concerned：在我看来2. Im greatly fond of：我很喜欢3. I would appreciate it if.（条件状语从句）4. In addition：此外5.representative figures ：代表性人物6. Last but not least：最后但并非并不重要的一点是7. I sincerely hope that （宾语从句）模拟优练1.假定你是李华，想邀请外教Henry一起参观中国剪纸（paper-cutting）艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：1.展览时间、地点；2.展览内容。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。
