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1、高三新题型读后续写不同主题分析-夫妻相处板块一-例文（夫妻买房） 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Before our wedding, my fiance (未婚夫) and I were very excited about shopping for our first house. So, we took look at several houses, yet as our funds were limited, none of the houses in our price range seemed satisfactory.One agent recomm
2、ended a house in particular. Although her description of the house sounded very wonderful, the price was beyond our range, so we declined. However, she kept urging us to have a look at least.We finally agreed and went to take a look. It was lovely at first sight. It was small but charming, overlooki
3、ng a quiet beautiful lake. Walking through the rooms and talking with the owners, a kind and hospitable elderly couple, we felt the warmth and happiness of the marriage within that house. It was exactly the house we wanted! Perfect as it was, the price remained much too high for us. But every day, w
4、e could sit by the lake, looking at the house and dreaming of what it would be like to live there.Days later, we made an offer, which was far below the asking price. As the price was so low, we were afraid that they would laugh it off. Surprisingly, they didnt laugh at us. They renewed their offer i
5、nstead. It was also much more than we could actually afford, but far less than the original asking price.The next day, we got a disappointing message that another buyer offered a much higher price. Even so, we made up our minds to talk with the owners directly. We made our final offer, which was sti
6、ll thousands of dollars less than the other buyers bid. We knew it, yet we decided to have a try. Nobody knew if we could get it.注意：1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。Paragraph 1:We went to the owners home, only to find the other buyer visiting the owners too._Paragraph 2:The owner looked at u
7、s and said, I decide to sell my house to you! _【答案】We went to the owners home, only to find the other buyer visiting the owners too. He said theprice he offered was much higher than ours, he begged theowners to sell it to him, then the owner asked the buyer, why do you want this house? The buyer sai
8、d Because itis near the city. I want to buy it for investment. I can rentit to earn money. the owner thought for a while andthen looked at him and said. Im sorry, sir. I cant sell myhouse to you, because I am looking for someone who trulyloves my house, not just for money.The owner looked at us and
9、said, I decide to sell my house to you! Then he explained: Hed seen us sitting bythe lake all those times; he knew how much we loved theplace and that wed appreciate the years of work they hadput into their home; he realized he would take a loss byselling it to us. but it was worthwhile; we were the
10、 peoplethey wanted to live there. He told us to consider thedifference in the price an early wedding present. Thatshow we found our home and how I learned that whenpeople are kind, they are not strangers, only friends wehavent yet met.【解析】【分析】这是一篇读后续写。本篇主要讲述了作者和丈夫去购买新婚用的房子。他们看上了一套房子，但中介告诉他们有人比他们的出价更
11、高。抱着试一试的态度，他们决定和房子的主人见上一面。【详解】续写分为两部分。第一部分的开头是：我们去了房东家里，却发现另一个买家也在。所以可以接着写：他说自己的出价更高，并要求房东把房子卖给他。然后房东问他买房的原因，他说是因为想把房子当作投资。房东思考了一下说，不能把房子卖给他，因为他们要找的是爱房子的人，而不是把它当作投资，用来挣钱的人。第二部分的开头是：然后房东看着我们说：“我决定把房子卖给你。”所以可以接着写，房东说：他看见我们最近常常坐在湖边，知道我们非常爱这套房子，也相信我们会欣赏他们在这套房子中投入的精力。所以他决定低价把房子卖给我们。至于那些不够的钱就当作是提前给我们的结婚礼物
12、。我们就这样找到了喜爱的房子，也明白了一些道理。写作时应注意续写内容要符合逻辑，人称的转换和时态。【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了一些主从复合句，例如：I cant sell myhouse to you, because I am looking for someone who trulyloves my house, not just for money.中who引导定语从句；Thatshow we found our home and how I learned that whenpeople are kind
13、, they are not strangers, only friends wehavent yet met.中how引导表语从句，that引导宾语从句。版块二-读后续写精彩词句集锦 环境描写Bright sunlightA bright light streamed through the window, flooding the opening and spreading in a wide circle on the ceiling.明媚的阳光一道明亮的光线流过窗户，淹没了窗口，并在天花板上呈现一个光圈。The rain like adeluge(n.洪水；暴雨；泛滥）The moon
14、 was overcast. The sky writhed with clouds. All at once thunder and lightning began. In a flash of light the fields were illuminated(照亮；说明）as far as the horizon.The stalks of wheat（小麦杆）bowed and the rainstruck（strike过去式：击打）like a deluge. Before Yasha(人名）could collect his thoughts the sheets of water began toflail（打）thewagon（铁路货车）like ahailstorm（冰雹）. The tarpaulin（防水帆布）tore（tear过去式：撕碎/撕破）loose from the frame. The monkey choked off a terrified scream. In less than a minute the highway was mired（使.陷入泥泞）.倾盆大雨月亮看不见了。天空里乌云滚滚。一眨眼，传来了霹雳和闪电。再闪电的照耀下，田野一下子明亮起来，直到地平线。小麦杆全弯下去；雨像洪水似的倒下来。雅夏还来不及集中思想，
