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1、高三新题型读后续写不同主题分析-学会道歉和感恩板块一-例文（家长因为自己的错误道歉）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。It was a cool evening in spring. I was just finishing the dinner dishes when the phone rang. It was unusual because our landline seldom rang. Nearly everyone we knew contacted us on our cell phones.“This is Janet Rhodes.”
2、 said a familiar voice that I struggled to place. That name seemed familiar, too. I knew a lot of people, having lived on two coasts and in most major cities in California for the past thirty years.“I am calling because I need to apologize to you,” Janet stated. Thats when I suddenly realized who sh
3、e was.“That day when I came into your classroom and chewed you out for disciplining my daughter, I was way out of line. I know now that you were doing what was best for her. You were right.”Twenty years earlier, it was only my second year of teaching. Janets daughter, Stephanie, had acted out toward
4、 some of the other girls in the classroom, and I had made her stay in from breaks between classes. I was kind and fair when I punished her. The truth is that I really liked Stephanie, but she clearly didnt like being disciplined. She told her mother, and Janet felt the need to defend her child.After
5、 school, she flew into my classroom and accused me of everything from being unfair to playing favorites to not caring about my students. She was yelling so loudly that every teacher in the building heard her accusations, including my principal.Her words shocked me because none of her criticisms was
6、true. I managed to keep from crying while she stood in front of me, but as soon as she left the room, I broke down. I cried all evening on and off through that sleepless night. I had once felt such joy teaching my kids, but now I felt like I was under a microscope in my classroom. For the next few w
7、eeks, her words caused me to second-guess everything I did with my students. I doubted my ability and even my own heart. Despite how her mother had treated me, I knew I would discipline Stephanie again if she acted out. It was the right thing to do.注意：1. 续写词数应为150左右；2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。And now two
8、decades later, the angry mother was apologizing to me._“Can you find it in your heart to forgive me?” Janet asked finally._【答案】And now, two decades later, the angry mother was a pologizing to me. The hurtful thing had become ancient history to me, though her accusations affected me too deeply for mu
9、ch too long. Ive now learned to process criticisms much more quickly, accepting whats true, dismissing whats not, and moving on with my mission in life. So, in essence, her apology wasnt necessary for my wellbeing because I had done the work of restoration on my own. I was grateful for that. On the
10、other hand, how much courage this lady had to make this call! It moved me.“Can you find it in your heart to forgive me?” Janet asked finally. I responded that she was a hero to me. After all these years, she could have just forgotten about that. But she went to such effort to make things right. I wa
11、s both blessed and impressed. We spent the rest of our short conversation about Stephanie before we hung up. As I reflect on that evening, I am still in awe at Janets growth, courage, and determination to apologize for the hurt she caused so many years ago. Her apology truly was an unexpected blessi
12、ng.【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读文章可知，作者在一个凉爽的晚上接到一通电话，让作者回忆起20年前，作者作为老师教训学生，遭到学生家长训斥的一件事，让作者记忆深刻并且影响很深的一件事，这位家长20年后打来电话向作者道歉。【详解】续写第一段开头为：二十年后的今天，那个愤怒的母亲正在向我道歉。后面应该写虽然这件事对作者影响深刻，但是二十年后这位母亲能鼓足勇气打电话道歉，让作者非常感动。续写第二段开头为：“你能从心底里原谅我吗?”珍妮特终于问道。后面应该写作者把自己对这位母亲的钦佩说出来，描述一些关于电话聊天内容，最后挂断电话后，作者陷入深深的思考中，并且再次赞扬这位母亲的勇敢。
13、文章主题部分选用的是一般过去时，续写部分也用一般过去时，并且描述现在事实的时候，也用了一般现在时，【点睛】通篇时态把握准确；所给关键词使用的恰当并且高级，显示出较高的英语能力；文章中还使用大量的复合句，为文章增加色彩和高级感，如Ive now learned to process criticisms much more quickly, accepting whats true, dismissing whats not, and moving on with my mission in life.(我现在学会了更快地处理批评，接受真实的，无视不真实的，继续完成我的人生使命。) 这里的宾语从
14、句的运用，显示高级的英语水平，精准掌握了从句使用的要领；续写部分构思巧妙，衔接自然，思路清晰自然，表达完整，为一篇优秀的作品。版块二-读后续写精彩词句集锦 板块三-能力提升（现学现用）阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。续写的词数应为150左右。Jenny was the only child in her home. She had a quarrel with her mother that afternoon and she ran out of the house angrily. She couldnt help weeping sorrowfully when she thought of the scolding from her mother. Having wandered aimlessly in the street for hours she felt a little hungry and wished for something to eat, but it was not possibl
