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1、托福写作话题解析及高分范文 作者： 日期：2 7月1日托福写作话题解析及高分范文！先奉上7月1日托福独立写作真题Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Competition between friends usually negatively impacts friendships. Use specific details and examples to support your opinion.朋友类朋友类！这是我们预测里面的话题类别，所以吧，我们的预测有参考性吧看这里，这是我们北美考试帮对7月1日考试的预测截图：上次说
2、过不仅给预测，而且还给解析甚至范文，马上实现自己的诺言哈，今天解析和范文就来啦呜啦呜啦呜啦（掌声在哪里嘿嘿）解析：就体裁而言是同意不同意（准没准？准没准？）；就话题而言是朋友类。不过这个朋友类呢，有点难度，是说朋友之间的竞争是否影响友谊。竞争这个话题本身就不太好写，何况还牵涉到朋友之间的竞争，所以就更不好写了。大家可以想自己思考思考，你是同意呢还是不同意呢？如果同意，你的理由是什么？如果不同意，你的理由又是什么？可以从朋友的范畴上去思考，什么是朋友？诚实，互相帮助.那竞争如何去破坏友谊的哪些呢？所以这里就可以用分类的方法去构思了。我同意，竞争损害了朋友之间的诚实和互相帮助，而且更严重的是竞争会
3、让朋友互相诋毁。所以这篇文章的构思就有了。 废话不多说，直接上范文（刚写的，新鲜出炉我似乎看了热气哈哈）范文：From ancient time to modern days, friendship has played a key role in our daily life. However, it is unavoidable for friends to compete for a stuff in such an increasing interactive and connecting world, such as for a school or for a job. As far
4、 as I am concerned, honestly, competition does have a negative influence on friendships among involvers, which will be illustrated in three aspects.To begin with, competition will teach friends to conceal something from each other. Owing to the fact that nearly all of them desire to achieve the goal
5、, competitors will lie to others more or less to lower others vigilance or to confuse rivals. To be more specific,in the process of preparing for a test, test takers , who are friends and competitors, will not tell opponents which material is significant and which stage they are in; in the pursuit o
6、f an advanced position, opponents, to a large extent, will engage in something under the rose, such as treating the boss or bribing voters. A good case in this point is that before taking college entrance examination, one of my friends always did not tell me the books she had read and learned. Due t
7、o competition, friends are not honest any more like before.In addition, lending friends a hand cannot be expected in competition. As an old saying said, a friend in need is a friend indeed.Competition, however, will hinder companion do others a favor on the ground that helping friends is to set obst
8、acles or increase difficulties for themselves. That is to say, it is more hazardous for them to reach the target. Plenty of evidence in our life has proved it. Two boys chasing the same girl definitely do not give advice to each other; two competitive tenders will drive the price higher rather than
9、lower for auction goods; two actresses for a role are unlikely to help the other illustrate the feelings of the role. In short, competition makes friends hesitate to assist each other.What was worse, some opponents even do some harmful things to defame friends. These behaviors include publicizing fr
10、iends physical disadvantages, previous relationship and family condition and criticizing friends dressing style, economic condition and eating habits. To illustrate,in order to win the position of president, Obamas group claimed Hillary was too old and uglified her photos. Without any doubt, these b
11、ehaviors break the friendship to some extent.From what have been discussed above, I am extremely convinced that competition between friends will damage friendship and even make them to become enemy not only because competition gives birth to lies, but also friends are unlikely to aid each other as well as it is possible for them to implement some defaming behaviors.看了范文，可以再好好复习里面的词语和句型表达。天道在线课堂http:/ 更多精彩等你来！6 / 6
