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1、北京市石景山2016-2020年三年高考一模英语试题汇编-书面表达专题2020届北京市石景山区高三一模英语试题第一节（15分）51.假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim写了一封信，告诉你他开发了一个App，这个软件可以用来共享衣服，想要征集大家的看法。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 你的态度;2. 理由。注意：1词数不少于50；2开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。Dear Jim,_Yours,Li Hua【答案】Dear Jim,I am very glad to know that you have come up with the novel idea. Personally
2、 speaking, I am willing to share my clothes on your app as it feels like I am emotionally connecting someone in my clothes. In turn, I also can try others new clothes. We can wear different types of clothes without actually spending any money. Anyway, sharing clothes is a creative way to make full u
3、se of them and benefits others as well as myself.Yours,Li Hua【解析】【分析】本篇书面表达是应用文，要求写一封书信。【详解】第1步：根据提示可知，本文要求写一封回信：假如你是红星中学高三学生李华，你的美国朋友Jim写了一封信，告诉你他开发了一个App，这个软件可以用来共享衣服，想要征集大家的看法。请你给Jim回信，内容包括：1. 你的态度；2. 理由。时态应为一般现在时。第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如； share（共享），novel（新奇的），emotionally（感情上），connect（联系）， spend（花费）
4、，benefit（使受益）及creative（创造性的）等。第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持卷面的整洁美观。【点睛】范文语言地道，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级词汇和句式，高级词汇有come up with（想出），personally speaking（就我个人而言），be willing to do(愿意做)，make full use of（充分利用），as well as（也、和）以及in turn（反过来），而且还使用了状语从句“Personall
5、y speaking, I am willing to share my clothes on your app as it feels like I am emotionally connecting someone in my clothes.”，宾语从句“I am very glad to know that you have come up with the novel idea.”，非谓语动词“We can wear different types of clothes without actually spending any money.”及“Anyway, sharing cl
6、othes is a creative way to make full use of them and benefits others as well as myself.”，全文没有语法错误，上下句转换自然流畅。2019年北京市石景山区高三一模英语试题第一节 （15 分）51.假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。北京冬奥组委会正在招募志愿者，其职责为接待各国运动员及宣传中国文化，组委会要求志愿者能够熟练运用英语，请你用英文写一封 申请信。内容包括：1. 申请原因2. 你的优势3. 相关经历注意：1. 词数不少于 502. 开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数Dear Sir/Madame,I have
7、learned that volunteers for Beijing Winter Olympic Games are needed._Yours sincerely,Li Hua【答案】Dear Sir/Madame,I have learned that volunteers for Beijing Winter Olympic Games are needed. Im writingto apply for this position.As a Beijinger, I think it is a privilege and duty for me to offer the best
8、voluntary service to our foreign guests and meanwhile promote Chinese culture.I believe Im qualified for the job. I have a good command of English and Im confident in giving players guidance and help as required. Whats more, I have an extensive knowledge of winter sports, which will prove helpful in
9、 communicating with players. In addition, I have been involved in several international exchange programs, and enjoyed spreading our culture to foreigners.I would appreciate it if you could offer me the opportunity. Thank you for your time and consideration.Yours sincerely,Li Hua【解析】【分析】这是一篇应用文，要求写一
10、封信。【详解】第一步：审题。审题的目的是获取重要信息。通过审题我们可以确定几个方面的信息。第一，1. 申请原因2. 你的优势3. 相关经历。第二，人称为第一人称。第三，时态以一般现在时为主，兼用现在完成时和一般将来时。第二步：布局段落，确定主要段落，次要段落，段落数量。这篇写作段落数量为三段。第一段，说明申请什么职位。第二段，申请原因；你的优势；相关经历。第三段，表示感谢。第三步：确定关键词汇和短语: offer, opportunity, volunteers for Beijing Winter Olympic Games， apply for， Beijinger， privilege
11、and duty, the best voluntary service, promote Chinese culture, be qualified for, have a good command of, be confident in ,have an extensive knowledge of ,communicate with, be involved in ,international exchange programs,第四步：确定较为高级的句子:that引导的宾语从句I have learned that volunteers for Beijing Winter Olymp
12、ic Games are needed. which引导的非限制性定语从句Whats more, I have an extensive knowledge of winter sports, which will prove helpful in communicating with players.it作形式主语，真正的主语为动词不定式As a Beijinger, I think it is a privilege and duty for me to offer the best voluntary service to our foreign guests and meanwhile promote Chinese culture.第五步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连接词进行过渡衔接:As a Beijinger，Whats more，In addition.第六步：注意书写，保持卷面整洁，避免划线，乱擦。【点睛】文章思路清晰，语言规范，段落整齐，语篇连贯，层次清晰。使用了较为高级的句式:如that引导的宾语从句I have learned that volunte
