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1、第 1 页 共 6 页今昔对比类作文训练在“今昔对比”的对比类写作中，一定要把握时态的运用，时态通常是一般现在时和一般过去时。写作格式：提出主题句对过去情况的描述对现在情况的描述总结句。当然，也可以对今、昔进行逐条对比。今昔对比类作文常用句型：.Our (school/hometown), as all may know, is not what it used to be.In the past, I wished that our (school/hometown) could be more brilliant,there would be a . But now, everything
2、 has changed. My wish comes true. Moreover, In addition, what makes (the school/hometown) more lovely is that If you were here, you would be amazed by the beauty of our (school/campus/hometown)1. 开头常用句型(1) Great changes have taken place. Great changes have taken place in my hometown in the last five
3、 year.Quite a few changes have taken place in my school since you left China.Over the past twenty years or so, great changes have taken place in our life.(2) Things have begun to improve since（自从以来，事情有了好转/改善）Things have begun to improve since schools were called on to reduce learning load.2. 对比常用句型:
4、 (1)used to, but now 过去常，但是现在(2) in the past, but now 在过去，但是现在 (3) once, but now 曾经.，但是现在(4) Things are different now. 情况已大不同了(5) But now, everything has changed. 但是现在全变了今昔对比类作文训练 11.联合国教科文组织某考察团正在我国某乡村参观考察。假定你是接待人员,请根据下列提示以发言稿的形式简要介绍这个村的情况：第 2 页 共 6 页1)大小：近 100 户人家，约 500 口人。2)变化：过去很穷，78 年后变化很大。人们生活
5、比以前好多了。现已旧貌换新颜。3)教育：原来的学校很小，现已经过改建。新建的教学楼有 4 层，是村里最美的建筑物。村所有学龄儿童在此免费就读。注意：1）要点齐全，前后连贯。2）词数：100-120 之间。Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school!今昔对比类作文训练 2假设你是李明， 你的美国朋友杰克听说你校正在开展研究性学习，来信询问有关情况，请你写一封信，谈一谈开展研究性学习前后，你的学习情况的变化。注意：1 用书信格式。2 词数：100 左右3 生词：研究性学习 exploring study ，上网 surf the internet。过去 现
6、在课堂 老师讲解知识点，学生听讲，记笔记。老师提出问题，学生互相讨论或学生自己提出问题自己讨论解决。完成大量的作业。 丰富多彩的课外活动，如读自己感兴趣的书籍， 去图书馆或上网查资料。今昔对比类作文训练 3假设你是李华，你的澳大利亚朋友 Dick 听说中国的中小学正在减轻学生的学习负担，来信询问有关情况。请你根据下表提供的信息，写一封回信，谈一谈减负给你的学习和生活带来的变化。周末活动（减负前） 周末活动（减负后）白天：上课、做作业 白天：参观博物馆、学习电脑、绘画晚上：做作业 晚上：看新闻、读书、看报就寝时间：11：30 就寝时间：10：00注意：1、词数 100 左右；2、开头已为你写好。
7、生词：减轻学习负担-reduce learning load第 3 页 共 6 页Dear Dick,How nice to hear from you again._Best wishes,Li Hua今昔对比类作文训练 4请根据下面六幅图的提示和所提供的主题句，写一篇题为“Changes in Our Life” 的英文短文。词数 100 左右。 （2004 年北京市春季高考写作）今昔对比类作文训练 1范文学生作品 Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school! This village is very small. It has nearly 10
8、0 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. It has changed a lot since 1978 . People here are richer than before. Now it is taking on a new look. In the past, the school here was very small . Now it has been rebuilt. The newly built teaching building has 4 storeys . It is the most beau
9、tiful building in the village. All the school-age children can study here. They enjoy free education in it. Thank you.修改为 Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school ! This village is a small one with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed
10、 a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new lookIn the past, the school here was very small and most children couldnt afford to go to school. But now it has been rebuilt andthe newly built teaching building which ha
11、s 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasant time here! 第 4 页 共 6 页今昔对比类作文训练 1标准范文 Ladies and gentlemen,Welcome to our school ! This village is a small o
12、ne with/which has nearly 100 families and about 500 people. It used to be very poor. However, it has changed a lot since 1978 and has been developing very fast. People here live a much better life than before . Now it is taking on a new look.In the past, the school here was very small and most child
13、ren couldnt afford to go to school. But now it has been rebuilt and the newly built teaching building which has 4 storeys is the most beautiful one in the village. All the school-age children can study here. Whats more, they enjoy free education. May you enjoy your stay here / May you have a pleasan
14、t time here! Thank you.今昔对比类作文训练 2Dear Jack,How nice to hear from you again.Dear Jack,How nice to hear from you again. You want to know what is going on in our school. In short, things have been improving since the school began to carry out exploring study. In the past, the teachers always kept on e
15、xplaining the points in class. We students just listened and took notes. But now we often discuss and try to solve the problems raised by the teachers or ourselves.After class, we enjoyed different kinds of activities instead of doing endless homework. For example, we can read what we are interested in. We c
