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1、商务英语之自我介绍练习与讲解Selfintroduction 商务英语之自我介绍练习与讲解Self-introduction 原： I am Peter and I am _le, and I was born 1979. I graduated in Nan _g. And I am/my _jor is International Trading. As to my favorites, I love the sports for football game and basketball. When I am university, I hope to have a healthy bod
2、y. But for long time, I didnt play these games. As to my career schedule, now I am a SOHO, however, I hope to expand my business, for example, I want to attend the fair in Canton, if possible, I hope to attend the fare in Frankford. About my products range of business, there are Christ _s Lighting a
3、nd Steel and Toys, plush toys and so on. Ok, thank you. 修改： My name is Peter, _le. And I was born in 1979. I graduated from a university in Nan _g. My _jor was International Trading. As to my hobbies, I love sports. Like football and basketball. I believed that exercise can keep me healthy. However,
4、 I didnt keep it for a long time sin _ a lot of reasons. Regarding to my career，I tried several kinds of jobs after my graduation, and now I am a SOHO. Re _ntly, I planned to expand my business. For this purpose, I hope I can attend the fare in Canton and in Frankford, if possible. My product range
5、includes Christ _s Lighting, Steel and Plush Toys and so on. Thank you. 句句修改讲解： 1. I am Peter and I am _le, and I was born 1979. My name is Peter, _le. And I was born in 1979.be born in 出生于不都用I 开头说话，会显得更加自然。And的频率降低。 2. I graduated in Nan _g. I graduated from a university in Nan _g.graduated from 毕业
6、于从南京毕业在外国人开来有点奇怪，作为graduate的宾语用学校比较好。 3. And I am/my _jor is International Trading. My _jor was International Trading.降低and的频率。过去的专业，用was过去式。 4. As to my favorites, I love the sports for football game and basketball. When I am university, I hope to have a healthy body. But for long time, I didnt pla
7、y these games. As to my hobbies, I love sports. Like football and basketball. I believed that exercise can keep me healthy. However, I didnt keep it for a long time sin _ a lot of reasons. Favorite有爱好的意思，但是更偏向于指偏爱或者是记事本。爱好通常用hobby。 I love the sports for foot ball game and basketball, 中式英语。句型混乱。 When
8、 I am university中am要换成was过去式，When I was in university. 整句When I am university, I hope to have a healthy body. 中式英语。听着很奇怪。直接说我从前相信运动使人健康。下句同样的问题。 5. As to my career schedule, now I am a SOHO, however, I hope to expand my business, for example, I want to attend the fair in Canton, if possible, I hope
9、to attend the fare in Frankford. Regarding to my career，I tried several kinds of jobs after my graduation, and now I am a SOHO. Re _ntly, I planned to expand my business. For this purpose, I hope I can attend the fare in Canton and in Frankford, if possible. 关于的表达有很多，不要过于单一都用as to，要换换。职业生涯直接career。建议在现在工作之前加上之前的工作经历一带而过。使内容更充实一点。However是表示转折的，但是这个句子里不需要转折。Re _ntly最近。 Hope的用法注意不好直接hope to do。Hope后面加人称或者that从句。可以是 最近我计划扩展事业。 注意expand的读法。这里的p浊化为b的音。加上For this purpose作为前后衔接。Canton和Frankford展会合并主谓，更加简洁。 语调注意点： 1. 尽量少用口气次：嗯。 2. 注意 _语调：一句话中重要信息要着重突出。 3. 注意时态。 4. 积累词组，积累衔接词。注意中式英语的改善。 模板,内容仅供参考
