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1、厦门一中2020-2021学年高三上学期12月阶段性考试67. 阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。About a half-mile behind our Minnesota farm lay a pond. In summer, my brother Harry and I would run through a stand of oak trees to skip stones there. The pond wore a collar of black mud. It was not a place for swimming.In late summer, th
2、e pond would be covered by a green and bubbly scum（起泡的浮渣）. Sometimes a strong, unpleasant smell rose from it. We stayed away.When winter came, the pond was once again an inviting place. One day when ice covered it, Harry said to me, “Try walking across.”The ice looked solid. No water showed through
3、it, but I hesitated. “Go ahead.” Harry urged. “Try it. Youre lighter than I am. If the ice holds, we can run and slide carefully on it. Itll be fun.” I wanted to please Harry, and I thought about the fun of a long slide on the ice. I began to slide across the pond.In the middle of the pond, the ice
4、gave way with a sudden crack（裂缝）! I stretched out（伸展）my arms. The next thing I knew I was hanging on to the edge of a hole in the ice by arms outstretched on the ice. From my shoulders down I hung in icy water. I thought of the bottom of the pond. I knew it would be black and awful down there, full
5、of mud and maybe rotting creatures. I tried to climb out of the hole, but when I got a knee on the ice, it broke like window glass. Again and again I tried to get out. Again and again the ice broke into pieces. The hole widened. I was wearing a coat of heavy material. As it became completely wet, it
6、 dragged me down. I was tired of the struggle and rested with my arms stretched out on the ice.I looked at Harry on shore. He seemed rooted to the spot. “I cant get out!” I screamed when I caught some breath.注意：1. 所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2. 至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3. 续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好； 4. 续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的
7、关键词语。Paragraph1: Harry turned and ran from the pond. _Paragraph2:The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over. _【答案】He turned and ran from the pond. Staring at his familiar figure out of sight, I wondered: “Is he running for help, or is he running away and leaving me slidi
8、ng to the bottom? ” After what seemed to be centuries of waiting, I was on the edge of collapse. Suddenly, Harry came back with a branch, which was large, black, and v-shaped. He pushed the branch toward me. I grabbed it immediately and was eventually dragged out of the icy water by Harry. What a na
9、rrow escape! We stumbled home, with my clothes dripping water.The moment I crashed through the kitchen door, sobbing, mum rushed over. She helped me take off my coat, and gave me a quick bath, then passed me a cup of milk to warm me up. I tearfully complained to her about all that had happened and H
10、arry was blamed for getting me sibling into such a trouble. His head drooping, Harry murdered an apology to me. I was comforted and relieved, but in fact, the pond was still attractive to young Harry and me, especially when winter came again.【解析】【分析】这是一篇记叙文。文章叙述了作者小时候与哥哥去附近农场后面的池塘滑冰，冰面裂开，作者不小心掉进冰窟窿的
11、故事。【详解】本篇书面表达是读后续写。通过阅读所给文章可知，有一年冬天，作者由于小时候与哥哥哈利到农场后面的一个池塘玩耍，池塘表面结了冰，哥哥认为冰面足够坚固，能够撑得住作者的体重，所以鼓励作者从冰面上走过去。作者很想取悦哥哥，同时也非常想感受滑冰的快乐，于是就尝试着划过去。突然，冰裂开了，作者掉进了冰窟窿，双肩以下都泡在冰冷的水里！续写部分分为两段，第一段开头是：他转身从池塘里跑开了因此，下文应该续写哥哥跑走了以后，作者独自挣扎求生的心理过程。要详细叙述哥哥返回后，带着一个树杈把作者从冰窟窿里面拉出来的情景。第二段的开头是：当我哭着冲进厨房的门时，妈妈冲了过来因此，下文应该续写作者回到家后，
12、妈妈首先匆忙帮作者脱掉冰冷的外套，给他洗个热水澡以及喝一杯热牛奶；然后，作者缓过来以后，委屈的向妈妈叙述事情发生的经过，妈妈责备哥哥没有照顾好作者；文章最后，作者认为，尽管经此劫难，当冬天到来，那个池塘对哥哥和他依然是极大的诱惑。续写时要求使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语增加了写作难度，我们要熟悉所给划线词语，恰当的时候加以运用。最后还要注意所续写短文的词数应为150左右；续写完成后，用下划线标出所使用的关键词语。按要求完成写作任务。【点睛】本文描写详略得当，使用了高级词汇和高级句子。如：run away，leave sb. doing，take off等高级词汇；非限制性定语从句Harry came back with a branch, which was large, black, and v-shaped，after引导的时间状语从句，with my clothes dripping water复合结构等高级句式。河北省石家庄市2021届高中毕业班教学质量检测（一）47. 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一个完整的短文。I prided myself on being a good neighbo
