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1、英语中考作文点评21、以 “My Good Friends”为题，写一篇150字左右的描写文。参考词汇：特别外向的人：a typical extrovert 人品：personality 特别内向的人：a typical introvert 普通的衣服：plain clothes 节约地：frugallyMy Good FriendsTom and Jack are both my good friends although they are completely different from each other. 总起全文Tom is very short and rather fat.
2、He likes to be well-dressed特征描写生动. Every month, Tom spends all his money before his parents give him some more. Tom enjoys being with p漏了形容词eople. Hes extremely cheerful all the time and likes to tell jokes. He loves to go to parties, and is always surrounded by 使用被动语态people. He likes to dance and t
3、o listen to loud music. At every party he sings his favorite songs at the top of his voice. Tom is a typical extrovert.Jack is completely different from Tom in looks, personality,写出不同的特征，用了completely personality, and habits. Jack is tall and thin. He likes to wear plain clothes and live frugally. Ev
4、ery month he is able to save some money. Jack likes quietnes能正确运用Quiet的名词形式s and to stay alone. He seldom laughs; he is very serious. He loves reading, painting and traveling alone. He is a typical introvert.总评：1、语法准确无误； 2、采用对比性描写，写出不同的个性； 3、参考词汇都基本上用起来； 4、文中的几个副词、形容词用得很漂亮； 5、属于一类作文。2、日前，由教育部、国家体育总局
5、、共青团中央联合举办了“全国亿万青少年学生阳光体育运动”启动仪式，其影响巨大，意义深远。你在本校参与了此项活动，请你根据表格中所给信息写一篇英语短文。内容感想 学校师生收看了启动仪式； 开展了一小时的集体体育活动，如：跑步，做操，打篮球等 锻炼有利于强身健体； 运动使大脑休息，学习效果更好； 每天锻炼一小时，幸福生活一辈子注意：1. 词数80150个左右。2. 短文的开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。3. 短文须包括所有内容要点，但不要逐句翻译，可适当加入细节和适当发挥，使短文通顺、连贯。4. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名。参考词汇：the launching ceremony 启动仪式； buil
6、d up ones body strength 强身健体 more effective 效果更好“ Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine ” launched on April 29 , 2007 . The teachers and students in our school were organized to “Millions of young students nationwide sports sunshine” launched on April 29, 2007. The teachers and stude
7、nts in our school were organized to watch the launching ceremony together first , and then we went to the playground to have one-hour sports activities , such as running , doing exercises and playing basketball . I felt very good after having some sports. 正确使用分词形式。I think it is a good way to build u
8、p our body strength. Sports can also let brains have a rest so that our study will be more effective.有自己的看法 To do physical exercises and hour a day不定式作主语 will make us happy a whole life, so I will keep on doing it . I hope more and more people will join us in sports activities . 总评：1、该话题为热门话题； 2、内容不多但语法准确； 3、基本符合题意要求，信息覆盖基本到位； 4、有自己的独到的见解； 5、文章字数嫌少； 6、属于二类偏上的作文。2
