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1、.,1,You are sure to succeed with four “P”: 1) perspiration 2) passion 3) preparation 4) perseverance,.,2,议论文,.,3,评分标准:（一）内容和语言标准,1. 短文写作部分满分为15分。 2. 阅卷标准共分五等：14分、11分、8分、5分、及2分。 3.阅卷时根据五个方面的具体标准, 即内容切题、表达清楚、文字连贯、句式有变化和语言规范.阅卷人员根据阅卷标准, 对照参照卷评分,若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似，即定为该分数(即8分)；若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数，则可加一分(即9分)或减一分(即7
2、分),.,4,评分标准: 给分档的标准,14分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字通顺，连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误，仅有个别小错。 11分 切题。表达思想清楚，文字连贯，但有少量语言错误。 8分 基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚，文字勉强连贯；语言错误相当多，其中有一些是严重错误。 5分 基本切题。表达思想不清楚，连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。 2分 条理不清，思路紊乱，语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误，且多数为严重错误。,.,5,评分标准: （二）字数和段数要求,目前的四级考试写作要求至少120字.字数不足要酌情扣分,一般扣分标准如下 白卷, 作文与题目无关, 或仅有几个孤立的词而未表达思想,
3、判为0分. (2)非常优秀的作文可评满分. (3)对规定三段的作文, 只写一段者: 0-4分; 只写两段者: 0-9分. (4)题目中已给出的主题句、起始句、结束句, 均不得记入所写数字. (5)字数不足者酌情扣分:,.,6,作文的性价比,千疮百孔，令人发指 6分以下 Just so so 9 眼睛一亮，感觉不错 12 拍案叫绝 1415,.,7,小强版,Should we expect a reward when doing a good deed? Different people have different answers. Some say that there should be
4、a reward for a good deed. They think that if there is no reward, it will be difficult for people to do good deeds. For example, in order to help people in need, they often have to give some money to these people, and they will live a poor life themselves.,Only,.,8,老牛版,When asked about whether or not
5、 one should expect a reward when doing a good deed, different people hold different views. Some argue that there should be a reward for a good deed. They explain that without proper and proportionate reward, those who have done good deeds may sometimes find themselves in various dilemmas. For exampl
6、e, in order to help the needed, they often have to sacrifice a large part of their own income and live the rest of the days in poverty.,Only,.,9,作文存在的障碍和问题,.,10,The Study of English,There are various kinds of books. History books tell people about the history of human society. Scientific and technol
7、ogical books make people understand the unknown world and make the society progress. Books about art and literature help us enjoy nature and people.,a. 翻译式作文。 例:,.,11,The First Day I Came to College,I always remember the day I come to college. It was a sunny day and I was very excited. I have arrive
8、d at the college in the afternoon. Everything had seemed fresh to me. The campus was beautiful. The college was located at the foot of a Mountain and was surround with trees. To the east of it we can see a blue river. There are so many teaching buildings. It was here that I would study for four year
9、s. I thought that I must study hard in order to live up to the expectations of my parents and friends. It is true that there are many challenges, but I will prove myself a worthy college student.,b. 时态混杂。 例:,.,12,Computer,Nowadays computers are widely used in our society. We can see computers everyw
10、here. Many people use computers in schools and colleges. We also use computers in offices, libraries, banks and at home.,c. 没啥可写。 例:,.,13,Do you like travelling? Probably you will say “Yes, I like it very much!” Thats right.,Traveling,I think travelling is really good to everyone of us. Do you agree
11、 with me, my dear friend?,d. 套用中文模式。 例:,.,14,. As I was a little tired from the journey to the college, I went to bed early. At mid night, I suddenly woke up. I found that there was no gate in the college.,The First Day I Came to College,e. 主题模糊。 例:,.,15,(2) 作文与词语,Im a student of Hunan University. I
12、m studying in Tumu Department. I like my major very much.,要能正确和恰当地用词语表达意思，首先必须意识到英语词语和汉语词语并非是一一对应的。例如，汉语的“觉得”可用英语的feel、find、think等词语来表达，但具体怎么用，还须依句意而定：,.,16,1. 他一点儿也不觉得累。,2. 我觉得有必要先跟他商量。,3. 你觉得这个计划怎么样？,What do you think of the plan?,4. 他觉得有人在注视着他们。,He didnt feel tired at all.,I think we should consu
13、lt him first.,How do you like the plan?,He became aware that someone was watching him.,.,17,5. 他觉得有责任帮助同学。 He deems it his duty to help his fellow classmates.,6. 我觉得他不会同意。 I have a sense that he wont agree.,7. 你觉得这样做合算吗？ Do you find it pays?,.,18,9. 很多次我觉得自己是胜利者。 And for many times I figure that Im
14、the winner.,8. 我觉得我们会取胜。 I have a feeling that we will win.,.,19,只有通过反复实践，不断体会词语的含意和用法，掌握有关英语词语运用的一些基本要求，才能减少失误，并逐步提高表达能力。,.,20,金圣华桥畔译谈,记得有一次在电视上看到这么一幕 (外国电视剧) 情景，母亲头发凌乱，儿子见状，叫母亲梳理一下，屏幕上打出的中文是：“可否请你略理云鬓？”,词语的运用主要强凋“得体”。试借用一个英译汉例子来说明什么是得体：,.,21,词汇量与作文:,水浒传第二十三回“景阳冈武松打虎”中有这么一段描述：,武松在路上行了几日，来到阳谷县地面。此去离
15、县治还远。当日晌午时分，走得肚中饥渴，望见前面有个酒店，挑着一面招旗在门前，上头写着五个字道：“三碗不过冈。”,.,22,一个“挑”字，使酒店前挂的旗子活活有了生命。英语中也不乏简单词语用得很生动的例子。大学英语精读课本第二册有一篇题为“My First Job”的课文。主人公去一学校应聘，辗转半天终于找到了学校：,.,23,文中的struggle 和survive都是常用词，但用得非常生动，很值得学习。,The school was a red brick house with big windows. The front garden was a gravel square; four e
16、vergreen shrubs stood at each corner, where they struggled to survive the dust and fumes from a busy main road.,.,24,没 能 cant fail to/unable to/not be in a position to/,很 多 a lot of various/plentiful/numerous/countless/ abundant/quite a few,必 须 must be supposed to/be obliged to/have no alternative,希 望 hope feel like/would like/expect/be dying to/cant wait to,.,25,努 力 work hard hardworking/diligent/industrious /dedicated,得 到 get obtain/acquire/ achieve/ gain/win/earn,有 趣 intere
