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1、,专题复习 短文改错,返回目录,应试点睛,例1 2014辽宁卷 Were called several time about Cleos early morning barking.,解析 此句是名词的单、复数不一致错误。time由several修饰，故应用复数形式times。,常见错误(1)“不一致性”错误 主要包括：主、谓语不一致；时态不一致；语态不一致；名词的单、复数不一致；代词指代不一致；搭配不一致等。,返回目录,应试点睛,例2 2014新课标全国卷 We can lie on the grass for a rest, or sat by the lake listening to
2、music.,解析 此句是时态不一致错误。此句是or 连接的并列句，所以sat 应与lie保持一致，故sat应改为sit。,例3 2014四川卷 If its a false alarm and there is no fire, your teacher will lead us back to the classroom.,解析 此句是代词指代不一致错误。根据语境可知老师是领“你们”进教室，故将us改为you。,返回目录,应试点睛,常见错误(2)“行文逻辑”错误 这种错误主要是运用行文逻辑，考查连接手段。谨记两种句式：并列句(并列连词)，复合句(从属连词)；六种关系：转折关系，选择关系，层
3、递关系，并列关系，因果关系，同位关系；一种变化：语义的曲折变化(如：肯定与否定，方位与时空的转移等)。,返回目录,应试点睛,例4 2014浙江卷 A passenger realized he couldnt find his ticket but became quite upset.,解析 此句是行文逻辑错误。根据句意可知，前后分句之间是顺承关系，故将but改为and。,例5 2014新课标全国卷 weallowing tomatoes to selfseed where they please. As a result, the plants are growing somewhere.
4、,解析 此句是行文逻辑错误。根据前后语境可知，这种植物“到处”都种植而非“某处”，故将somewhere改为everywhere。,返回目录,应试点睛,常见错误(3)“平行结构”错误 平行结构是指两个或更多的词、词组或从句具有相似或相等的句法功能。在表达相互平行的概念时，要使用相同的语法结构，即动词与动词相配，形容词与形容词相配，分词与分词相配，不定式与不定式相配，短语与短语相配。平行结构经常借助于并列连词and，but，or或连词词组not onlybut also，notbut，eitheror，neithernor，as well as等来连接。,返回目录,应试点睛,例6 2014四川卷
5、 Dont panic or get out of line, and trying to remain quiet and calmly.,解析 此句是不平行错误。根据句法可知， trying在时态上应和panic和get保持一致，故应用动词原形try。calmly的形式应与前面的quiet保持一致，故将calmly改为calm。,返回目录,应试点睛,例7 On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and other workers, and
6、 buy plants and young trees.,解析 此句是状语的不平行错误。根据句法可知，buy应和to pay gardeners保持一致，故buy前应加to。,返回目录,应试点睛,常见错误(4)“词性、词形”错误 主要包括名词的单复数变化、代词的词形变化以及形容词和副词的词形变化。弄清词性与词性之间的相互修饰关系。比如：形容词修饰名词，副词修饰形容词、动词、分词等。,例8 2014新课标全国卷 The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste.,解析 此句是词性错误。taste 应该在词性上与small, juicy 保持一致，
7、作be动词的表语，用形容词，故将taste改为tasty。,返回目录,应试点睛,例9 2014浙江卷 No one in the carriage had previous spoken to or even noticed the ticketowner before.,解析 此句是词性错误。修饰过去分词应用副词词性，故将previous 改为previously。,返回目录,应试点睛,常见错误(5)“动词的变化”错误 主要包括时态的词形变化、被动语态的词形变化、非谓语动词的词形变化以及第三人称单数等。,例10 2014辽宁卷 It is difficult to understanding
8、 why she barks every minute shes outside.,解析 此句是非谓语动词错误。根据句式结构可知，本句需要动词不定式作主语，故understanding应改为understand。,返回目录,应试点睛,例11 2014陕西卷 One evening at sunset, we sat by the fire, have our barbecue.,解析 此句是非谓语动词错误。根据句式结构可知，have应是主句谓语的一个伴随动作，故用现在分词形式。,返回目录,应试点睛,常见错误(6)“特殊疑问词”“连词”和“引导词”错误 特别是which和that引导定语从句、抽
9、象名词后面常常跟that引导的同位语从句等。,例12 This is how I need to improve in the future.,解析 此句是引导词错误。根据句意“这是我将来所需要提高的地方”可知，how应改为what或where。,返回目录,应试点睛,例13 That is which other teachers say.,解析 此句是引导词错误。表示其他老师的说话内容要用what，what引导表语从句并作say的宾语。,返回目录,应试点睛,常见错误(7) “多词”错误 多词错误一般有如下几种类型：1)受母语思维的影响，出现汉语式结构，造成沉言；2)不明词义内涵，造成词义重叠
10、；3)介词多余；4)助动词、系动词多余；5)多冠词；6)定语从句中的成分重复；7)程度副词和频率副词，如 much，more，often等的多余；8)多余小品词to等。,返回目录,应试点睛,例14 2014新课标全国卷 There are all kinds of the flowers and trees around the classroom buildings.,解析 此句是冠词多余错误。根据语境可知，flowers and trees 均为“泛指”，故去掉flowers前的定冠词the,例15 2014新课标全国卷 Although we allow tomato plants to
11、 grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems.,解析 此句是连词多余错误。句中已有连词although 所以but为多余词汇，故可把but直接去掉或改为yet。,返回目录,应试点睛,常见错误(8)“缺词”错误 常见的缺词现象有：1)缺系动词；2) 缺介词；3) 缺冠词、物主代词等限定词；4) 在定语从句中缺关系代词或关系副词；5) 缺连接词； 6) 缺否定词； 7) 缺不定式符号to等。,例16 2014陕西卷 He wanted teac
12、h me about animals, insects and trees.,解析 此句是小品词to缺失错误。want是一个接不定式作宾语的动词，故teach前应加to。,返回目录,应试点睛,例17 2014浙江卷 Then everyone in the carriage began searching the ticket，which was eventually found under a seat several rows,解析 此句是介词缺失错误。search for意为“寻找”，根据句意“每个人开始寻找”可知，search后要加for 。,返回目录,应试点睛,三、 尊重解题步骤 1
13、. 通读全文，掌握大意 2. 整句理解，逐行分析 3. 复读全文，检查核对,专题二十九记叙文型 短文改错,真 题 典 例,新 题 预 测,返回目录,返回目录,专题二十九记叙文型短文改错,真 题 典 例,2014新课标全国卷 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号()，并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线()划掉。 修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2.只允许修改10处，多者(从
14、第11处起)不计分。,返回目录,专题二十九记叙文型短文改错,真 题 典 例,Nearly five years before, and with the help by our father, my sister and I planted some cherry tomatoes(圣女果) in our back garden. Since thenfor all these yearwe had been allowing tomatoes to selfseed where they please. As result, the plants are growing somewhere.
15、 The fruits are small in size, but juicy and taste. There are so much that we often share them with our neighbours. Although we allow tomato plants to grow in the same place year after year, but we have never had any disease or insect attack problems. We are growing wonderfully tomatoes at no cost!,
16、返回目录,专题二十九记叙文型短文改错,真 题 典 例,返回目录,课堂专练,I will share with you a true story happened a couple of days ago. One of my classmate bought a bag of snacks from a food store. A few roommates were then invited to enjoy snacks. Unluckily, all of them got poisoned and had stomachaches with our faces pale. They are quickly sent to a nearby hospital. Doctors examined them but gave them some medicine. They were out of danger soon before taking the medicine. This accident should make us to rea
