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1、.,大学英语B网络统考考前辅导写作与翻译,.,写 作 介 绍,考生应能在30分钟内写出长度不少于80词的常见应用文及一般的叙述文、说明文和议论文。考生应能用较正确的语法、词汇、拼写、标点进行表达；基本做到内容切题，结构严谨，条理清楚；根据不同的写作目的进行有针对性的写作。,.,第六部分：写作 （满分15分） 要求你在30分钟内，根据下面所给的题目用英语写出一篇不少于80词的短文。 My Plan for the May 1st Holiday,.,评分标准： 以考试大纲写作部分的有关要求为依据，一般从作文的内容和语言质量两个角度评定。内容包括是否切题，思想是否清楚，意义是否连贯；语言包括所采用
2、的句型以及词语是否准确，表达是否有误等。除以上两个标准外，还需注意所写文章的字数，要达到考试规定的字数要求。,.,作文评分标准： 大学英语B的作文考试评卷原则是在整体评阅的基础上给出印象分，此印象分以奖励给分，不是按错扣分。 评分按档次进行，即1-3分，4-6分，7-9分，10-12分，13-15分五个档次。各个档次的具体描述如下： 13-15分：扣题，语言流畅，用词丰富，篇章结构感强，语法正确，只有个别小错。,.,10-12分：扣题，语言通顺，用词较丰富，段与段之间有较好的过渡，语法基本正确，有些语病； 7-9分：基本扣题，语言基本正确，用词有一定变化，文中错误较多，有个别为严重错误； 4-
3、6分：语言基本功差，文章中中国式英语表达居多，用词贫乏，语法错误相当多，有多处严重错误。 1-3分：语言支离破碎，绝大部分句子无法理解，语言错误很多。,.,1. He likes all kinds of sports, but most of all, basketball. 2. He doesnt spend much time on his homework. 3. Can you absorb all the knowledge our teacher gave in the class? 4. Adam is slightly older than Tom. 5. His Engl
4、ish was adequate enough for the job, although he was not very fluent. 6. Her eyes were immediately filled with tears of gratitude.,.,7. All flights to New York today were delayed because of the bad weather. 8. The best way to lose weight is to avoid eating fatty foods. 9. I hope we will remain frien
5、ds forever. 10. You wont get the job unless youve got the experience. 11. This is a cruel practice which should be stopped immediately. 12. You cant leave the city now; all the roads are blocked by snow.,.,There + be 1) There are many things to be done. / There are many things that we can do. 2) The
6、re have been great changes here in recent years. 3) There are a variety of measures that we can take to protect our environment. 2. Not (Never) until / till We do not know the value of health until we lose it.,.,3. It is (for sb.) to do It is impossible (for you) to master a foreign language in a fe
7、w months. 4. It is true that, but It is true that the computer has changed our lives, but it has brought about many problems as well.,.,5. As As we all know, / As is known to us all, smoking is harmful not only to the smokers but also to the non-smokers. 6. As long as There will be nothing to regret
8、 as/so long as we have tried our best. 7. Now that Now that we have realized the importance of time, we should take fuller advantage of it.,.,注意事项: 1) 保证写作的时间。 2) 认真审题,仔细构思,草拟大纲。 3）注意文章的启、承、转、合。 4）尽量使用一些标准的句型和成语，避免生造硬套。 5）注意文章的总体布局和书写格式。 6）正确使用标点符号。 7）认真检查。 8）书写一定要认真。,.,网络统考英语命题作文包括：应用文及一般的叙述文、说明文和议
9、论文： 书信：公务信件跟私人信件 公务信件：单位与单位或单位与个人之间的书信来往，包括推荐信、谋职信、入学申请书、邀请信或询问、答复、反映意见等等信件； 私人信件：亲朋好友之间的通信； 英文信件一般由以下六部分组成：信头、信内地址、称呼、正文、结尾、签名。,.,信头：发信人的地址和日期，通常写在第一页的右上角，行首可以齐头写，也可进行缩进去写，行尾可用也可不用标点符号； 书写地址：由小到大；门牌号码、街道、城市、省(州)、邮编、国名，最后写发信日期 Eg. “ZhongShanRoad, Hong San District, Xuzhou, Jiangsu, 221053, China, Ma
10、y 12, 1999 学校地址：English Department, Shanxi Teachers University, Sian, Shan Xi, 710062, P.R.C., March 1, 1995,.,信内地址:写收信人的姓名和地址,写在写信日期下一行的左上角，格式与寄信人地址一样. 称呼：与左边线对齐，写在收信人姓名、地址下面1-2行处；英国人称呼后用逗号，美国人常用冒号； Eg. Dear Professor/ Prof. Smith:/Dear Dr. Stein:/Dear Ms. Santos: 对不认识的人要按性别称呼: Dear Sir:/Dear Madam
11、:/Dear ladies:,.,正文:正文是书信的主体，书信的选词造句要准确、严谨，语言规范、简洁。书信正文的开头往往要说明写信人的身份及写信的宗旨，然后提出写信人的情况、想法或要求，加以必要的解释或说明。,.,结尾:,公务信件: “Yours truly”, “Yours sincerely”, “Sincerely yours”, “Cordially yours”, “Yours cordially”,私人信件:“Yours sincere1y”, “Yours truly”, “Yours faithfully”,.,College of Mechanical Engineering
12、 University of Petroleum China Dongying, Shandong Peoples Republic of China Dec. 5, 2009 Chairman Department of Mechanical Engineering University of Arizona Tueson, Arizona 85721 U.S.A. Dear Sir,信头与称呼,.,I am a senior in the College of Mechanical Engineering of the University of Petroleum China. As a
13、n undergraduate, I specialize in fluid-dynamics and would like to continue studying it as a graduate student. Could you send me more information on your department and an application for admission? Although I will be receiving government support, I would still like to apply for financial aid. Could
14、you please send me this application form as well? Thank you very much. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Sincerely, Li Huaming,正 文,结尾与签名,.,如果给熟人写信，信头和信内地址可以免写，用词很随便，如： September 13, 1987 Dear Brother, I have so many things to tell you that I hardly know where to begin. Now the first thing I w
15、ant to tell you is that I have been so fortunate as to study in such a wonderful city and such a lovely college. In the first few days after I came here, there was so much to see and do and enjoy that I could not concentrate on anything but having fun and being happy.,.,Last Monday school began. My
16、teachers are kind and amiable. But I find that my lessons are much more difficult than they were in the middle school. However, I shall never dread them as I can work hard. Please take good care of Father and Mother and give my love to everybody at home. Your sister, Li Min,.,书信常用结构 January 12th, 2006 Dear: I am . I am sorry to occupy your precious time, but I really want to talk about . (I am most happy to receive your
