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1、中考书面表达突破,新乡市一中,一、题型特点: 书面表达是对学生的语言组织能力、行文表达能力、基础知识、语法、词汇等综合驾驭能力的考查。 中考书面表达贴近生活,贴近时代,给同学们一更多的表达空间。 作文题目由限制性题目到半开放性题目,提示性词语越来越少,而给同学们的空间越来越大: 06年 Non-smoking Day; 07年 “校园节约从我做起”; 到09年的“A Person I will never forget”, 10年_ is fun,二、考查形式(体裁): 中考英语考查形式多样:看图(表)写作、书信、通知、日记、记人物等。 体裁包括:记叙文、说明文和应用文;,三、中考评分标准:
2、作文一律按档给分,与错误个数无直接关系。,影响作文分数的因素: 1 题目要求、内容要点; 2 句子准确、通顺; 3 层次结构清晰; 4 拼写、语法等错误; 5 卷面整洁度;,2010年河南中考评分标准:,四、做题步骤: 1 审题:审清作文体裁(类型)时态、人称等细节; 2 列提纲(文章结构框架):分几段,以及每段大体内容; 3 写作:在提纲的基础上补充要点; 4 复查:2遍1遍看查拼写、语法、标点等问题;2遍不出声读查,靠语感检查语句是否通顺、连贯等; 5 誊抄:不允许做任何的更改。 *总之做到三审:体裁、时态、人称; 三思:词汇短语句式; 三查:要点、拼写和语法、连贯。,五、作文一般框架:
3、文章分3段: (1)综述:概括性强,最多2句话引入主题; (2)正文主要内容:层次性强,一定要有过渡型连接词。最多展开3个方面,每个方面最多2句话; (3)结尾:紧扣主题,2句话内结束,尽量升华。,满分作文标准:,第一档:(1513分) 完全符合题目要求,观点正确, 要点齐全,立意高。 句式多样,词汇丰富。语言准确,语意连贯,表达清楚,结构合理,具有逻辑性。 卷面书写干净, 整洁,无涂抹,字迹大小适中,疏密合适,书写美观。标 点,大小写正确。 最好能有一两个亮点句。 (主从,定从,表从,谚语),六、如何列提纲: 例1:利弊型作文Microblog的利与弊 Para1: (综述)with the
4、 development of internet more and more popular Para2: (利)First, convenient, anywhere, any time; Second, share with; Last, express views free, money-free Para3: (弊)However, one coin has two faces. On the one hand, a waste of timeaffect study; On the other hand, not safestolen, hurt feelings Para4: (个
5、人)As a student, make good use of it.,七、如何列提纲: 例2:计划安排型作文谈假期安排 Para1: (综述)graduate from, holiday is coming, plan for this holiday Para2: (正文)Firstly, study comes first. make preparations for the first senior year; Secondly, visit tourist attractions; Last but not least, do sports to build up my body.
6、 Para3: I am sure Ill have a meaningful holiday. (Im looking forward to the coming holiday.) (I cant wait to enjoy my summer vocation.),八、常见的作文类型模板:,1 书信,Dear ., Im glad to receive your letter - - - Best wishes! Yours, Lucy,a书信开头常用语,I am very glad to receive your letter (hear form you). Hello, Jane.
7、 Is everything going (on) well? /How is everything going (on)? Im writing to you for some advice on how to Im writing to ask if you can . How time flies! It has been months/years since we last met. Thank you for inviting me to .,b 书信结尾常用语,Best wishes (to/for you). Wish you good luck. (I am) looking
8、forward to hearing from you.,二、口头通知常见写作模板: 呼语及开场白部分: Ladies and gentlemen, May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. 正文部分: All the teachers and students are required to attend it. Please take your notebooks and make notes. Please listen carefully and well have a discussion i
9、n groups. Please come on time and dont be late. 结束语部分: Please come and join in it. Everybody is welcome to attend it. I hope youll have a nice time here. Thats all. Thank you.,八、常见的作文类型提纲模板:,2 图表、数字比例型,(提出讨论或调查的事实)Last week, our class had a class meeting on (how to) Here are the results. (表达出不同看法或观点
10、)Most students think While 20% of them choose to. Another 15 believe There are also some saying that (表达个人看法) As a student, I agree to,3 说明利弊型,Nowadays is becoming more and more popular. It has many advantages . First, 优点1 Besides, 优点2 However, every coin has two sides. It also brings us bad influen
11、ces. On the one hand, 缺点1 On the other hand, 缺点2 In my opinion,个人观点 ,4 不同观点型,We made a survey about whether we should 提出矛盾问题. Different people hold different ideas. Some believe 正方观点. First, 原因1 Besides, 原因2 While others dont agree. They think反方观点. On the one hand, 原因1 On the other hand, 原因2 As for
12、me,个人观点 ,5 解决问题型,Recently, the problem has been more and more serious. should do something to solve it. Firstly, 方法1 Secondly, 方法2 Finally, 方法3 I am sure if everyone can make a contribution to , the will become better and better.,九、常用过渡性词语 叙事文常用的句子间连接词: At first; at last; in the end then/next/after
13、that when/while/as soon as/not until at the same time; at times; once in a while; so that To ones surprise/joy Luckily/fortunately/unluckily/unfortunately in a word/in all,议论文常用连接词 表示并列:eitheror; neithernor; bothand; not onlybut also; 表示递进的:besides; whats more; whats worse; (moreover); 表示原因的:because
14、; for; because of; thanks to; (for the reason that); 表示结果的:so; as a result; sothat; therefore; 表示目的的:so that; in order that; (in order) to; for; 表示对比的:while; on the one hand + on the other hand; Each coin has two sides.; preferto; would rather dothan do;,议论文常用连接词 表示转折的:however; but; 表示举例的:for exampl
15、e; for instance; such as; like; that is to say 表示总结的:in all/short; in a word; in brief/ total; last but not least; last; 表示利弊的:be good/bad for sb.; be harmful to sb.; do harm to sb.; have great/much influence on sb.; sth. benefit sb.; sb benefit from sth.; affect; have an effect on sb.; 表示喜爱的:love/l
16、ike/enjoy; be fond of; be interested in; show great interest in; lose oneself in; put ones heart into; be good at; be poor at; be weak in;,议论文常用连接词 表达个人想法的:I think/believe; (as) for me; in my opinion/view; as a student; from the bottom of my heart; personally; 其他:in general; generally speaking; to be short; t