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1、名师整理，助你成功 【二轮专题练】（五）改错专项 假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共 有 10 处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。 增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（），并在其下面写出该加的词。 删除：把多余的词用斜线（）划掉。 修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。 注意： 1每处错误及其修改均仅限一词； 2只允许修改10 处，多者（从第11 处起）不计分。 A How does the disease present? Well, from what is known so far, there c
2、an be the number of symptoms range from mild to severe. There can be fever and respiratory symptoms such as cough and short of breath. In mor e severe case, there s been pneumonia (肺炎 ), kidney failure ( 肾衰竭 ), and death. The mortality rate ( 死亡率 ) was not known yet. How can we tell if someone is in
3、fected or not? The infection can be diagnosed (诊断 ) by a test calling PCR or Polymerase Chain Reaction (聚合酶链反应). This test identifies the virus basing on its genetic fingerprint. There is current no specific medication for the virus and treatment is supportive care. There s no vaccine (疫苗 ) to prote
4、ct the virus. Treatment and vaccines are in development. B Sticking to a vegan diet might sound difficult, especial with many popular dishes containing meat or other animal products. Yet in recent years, veganism has become one of the fastest-growing lifestyle trend in the world. According to Huff P
5、ost, more than 3 million people in the United States are vegans. In the UK, about 542,000 people choose veganism over the past decade. What is driving this growth in veganism? One reason may be that people want to protect the environment. Produce meat and dairy products is known to be stressful for
6、the environment. According to a 2013 study by the UN Food and Agriculture Organization, global meat manufacturing causes about 18 percent of the world s greenhouse gas emissions. This figure is 名师整理，助你成功 high than all the world s cars, trains and planes combined. According to BBC News, another reaso
7、n is why many of today s young people believe it s wrong to kill animals for food. For many people, veganism simply means eating no meat, cheese or eggs, and going animal-free also applies to fashion and manufacturing. For example, leather is used to make shoes and clothing. Every year more than a b
8、illion animals, from cows to snakes, killed to make leather products from their skins. Now, many brands are looking other materials. So, if you re interested in protecting animals and to saving the environment, you might want to give veganism a try. C When I was young, I didn t know what friendship.
9、 When I stayed with my friends, a warm feeling came out of the bottom from my heart. Now I have grown up and got many friend. And I have been tasted the pleasant feeling of friendship. When I am happy, they are also happy and shared the happiness with me. When I make progress, they will be very exci
10、ting. Instead, when I m in a di fficult situation, they will offer help to me. So friendship is never an one-way ticket. If we want to get them, we must treat others well at first. We should always be ready to help others, especially that they are in difficult situations. D I can t swim because I ha
11、ve a strong fear of water. Look back my childhood experiences, I think that three reasons might explain the fear. The first reason is that I was not allow to go near the water when I was a child, for my mother had a unreasonable fear of it. So, even as a child that I was taught to see the water as s
12、omething danger. Second, my eyes became bad when I was five. If I took off my glass in the water, I couldn t see anything, or this increased my fear. The worst part of my experience is that as a child I saw a neighbor drowning. After then I have been more frightened. E Get a good education is more i
13、mportant today than ever before. In Canada mostly children attend public schools. Public schools are mainly found by governments through tax income. Students in Canada taught in English and in French. The rest of Canadian children attend private 名师整理，助你成功 schools, that are supported mainly by fees p
14、aying by parents. In law, the children must attend the school from 5 to 16. There is several different levels in the Canadian education system. The first was called Elementary Schools, which include kindergartens through grade 7 or 8. F A few months after returning the US from Germany, I took part a
15、t a college course in French. Since I can speak German well in Germany, I thought that it might be interested to begin studying another language. In the first class, the teacher asked us to do a pronunciation exercise, in which he would say one word or two in French, and each student would do their
16、best to copy. When he got to me, he kept having me to say more words, and I finally asked him what. “ I find it great funs. It s the first time I ve heard an American speak French with a German accent, ” he explained it. G Dear Linda, I am very sorry to hear that you are bad ill in hospital. Are you getting better now? Please don t worry about my illness. All you should do now is to have good rest and follow the doctor s advices. A
