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1、2012高考英语湖南卷书面表达命题解读与满分作文Section C (25 marks) Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given belowin Chinese.在生活中, 你自已或他人曾有过物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历, 其间有烦恼、有惊喜、有感慨请就此写一篇英语短文. 主要内容包括:1) 丢失的物品;2) 物品失而复得的经过;3) 你的感想。注意:1. 词数不少于120个;2. 不能使用真实姓名和学校名称。通过对湖南高考英语书面表达多年的研究，笔者发现，最近几年湖南高考英语书面表
2、达是由大学教授主笔、中学教师参与的方式出炉，命题和大学英语四级考试的写作接轨。2012年湖南卷的英语作文正可谓是“情理之中，意料之外”。 “情理之中”是因为今年湖南卷英语作文又回归到主流的提纲式作文，相比于去年的图画式作文，今年考生更容易抓到题目的主旨；而且今年的作文题目与2009年湖南卷的作文（新老师的第一堂课）有异曲同工之妙，都是通过对一个事件的描述，然后发表自己的感想。湖南卷的题材都是以校园生活为中心比如：“我的老师”、“我的同窗”、 “ 我的偶像”“我的课堂”、“我的课外生活”等；要求考生写一篇120词左右的短文风格上更接近开放作文，给考生留有更大的自由发挥空间，让考生有话可说，有句可
3、写。“意料之外”是因为今年的作文不是以议论为主，而是以记叙为主体，这也是很多考生不太擅长的题型之一。 一篇优秀的文章一定要有严谨的结构，精彩的语言和丰富的内容三个部分，这样才能形成一个有机的整体。在高考写作课程上，老师就如何构思结构，升级语言和丰富内容三个方面做了细致入微的讲解，就是为了让每一位考生在高考中能轻松自如面对的“各种”高考作文题目。纵使高考作文题目的 “千变万化”，但是有一条不变的准绳“三段式作文法”，只要抓住了这条准绳，任何一道高考作文题目对于考生来说都是“A piece of cake”。如下是今年高考英语湖南卷作文的分析。 俗话说，“好的开始是成功的一半。” “三段式作文法”
4、中的第一段的质量直接关乎阅卷老师对该篇文章的第一印象。这篇作文可以采用“开门见山法”，直接通过“生活中，你自己或他人曾有物品不慎丢失而又找回的经历”这一常见现象引入文章话题。 如例文中，“Getting back what you have lost would be an unforgettable experience.” 然后，很自然地过渡到自己或他人也有类似的经历。如例文中，“Last Monday, I lost my expensive cellphone, on which my name was inscribed. Fortunately, it was returned.”
5、 清晰表达出了记叙文 “When, Who, What”三大基本要素。其中，在写作专项训练上，“物品的描述” 可作为一个重点专题进行详细的研读，包括如何介绍物品的外形，产地以及特点等。 第二段，可采用“时间记叙法”描述物品失而复得的经过。如果不按照时间顺序行文，阅卷老师很难在短时间内看到文章的思路，甚至不知所云。例文中 “That morning ” “On arriving at school” “ When the exam ended”等标志词句，都清晰明了地展现了“时间记叙法”的行文思路，也使文章读起来更加流畅。在写作专项训练中，可重点学习如何写“连环画作文”（北京卷必考题型）的，针对
6、“时间记叙法”，结合历年高考中的记叙文进行了大量的操练。 第三段，发表自己的感想，总结全文，升华主题。如例文中，“From this story”，自然过渡到第三段的感想。 “I am firmly convinced of the significance of honesty, which will contribute to building a warm and harmonious society.” 表达出自己通过“失而复得”的故事，体会到诚信对构建一个温馨和谐的社会有重要的作用。运用非限制性定语从句进行结尾能显示出较高的写作水平, 一定能受到阅卷老师们的青睐。一篇文章好比一幢大厦
7、，只有用严谨的结构做支撑，用丰富的内容做砖块，用精彩的语言做装饰，才能筑造出世界上最壮丽的建筑。 典型范文：One possible version: 01 Getting back what you have lost would be an unforgettable experience. Last Monday, I lost my expensive cellphone, on which my name was inscribed. Fortunately, it was returned. That morning, I rushed out of my house and ju
8、mped into a taxi, for I would be late for the final examination. On arriving at school, I headed to my classroom quickly, not noticing that I had left my cellphone on the back seat. When the exam ended, to my great surprise, I found the driver waiting at the school gate. He handed the phone over to
9、me, wearing a smile on his face. So touched was I that tears rolled down my cheeks. From this story, I am firmly convinced of the significance of honesty, which will contribute to building a warm and harmonious society. One possible version:02 One day I received an invitation from another school to
10、give a speech on how to learn English well, I was extremely happy and accepted it. I got ready for the speech , put the notes in my bag and went there by bus. While on the bus I discovered the notes and my ID card were missing. I was very worried, but I knew the bus wouldnt stop for me to look for t
11、he lost things at the moment. On seeing the documents at the bus station, a cleaner picked them up and found my phone number inside. She thought I must have been worried about it. So she called me, hurried to take a taxi, and sent them to me as soon as possible.Happy and surprised, I regained the lo
12、st items. Thanks to the cleaners kindness, my speech was so successful that everyone cheered for me. I was very grateful to the cleaner. From the experience, I have learned that honesty is the best policy. Only in this way will our society be more harmonious and hopeful.One possible version:03 Three
13、 years ago, just before my departure with my good friend Tommy, he got me a wonderful watch as my birthday gift, which I had ever since been treasuring all the time before unfortunately I got it lost. I used to go everywhere with company of my watch pet but the other day I could go nowhere for its s
14、ign. I was so upset and depressed that I lost any desire for doing things and I could not even recall where and how I lost it. What happened next on this morning, however, almost sent my spirits flying higher than sky. Guess what? It found its way back to my dormitory, lying on my bed with a note be
15、side it saying: Im sure its yours, so I brought it back from the library assistant. Jack. Ah, my dormmate Jack found it in the library. Can you imagine how excited I was at that moment? I must offer my thankfulness to Jack for his kindness. And I also need to reflect on my carelessness.【专题训练】假设你是图1中的站立者。现在，请你根据以下三幅画，以英语日记的形式叙述你上周六的一段经历，并谈谈自己的感受。注意：1.词数100左右，日记的格式已为你写好(不计入总词数)；2可根据漫画内容适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。SaturdayMarch 26,2011 Cloudy_参考范文：SaturdayMarch 26,2011
