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1、课程名称：应用文写作之建议信,复习内容：建议信基础写作,书面表达（满分25分) 假设你是李华，你的朋友Mike与父母一道来到中国。他发现自己所学的汉语根本就不够用。因此，他给你发来一封电子邮件，向你请教如何提高汉语听说能力。请给他回一封邮件。要点如下：1. 邮件已收到，理解他所遇到的问题。2. 提出如下建议：在课内课外要多说汉语，多注意电视节目主持人的发音等 3祝愿他学习取得进步。注意： 1.词数100左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。,一、欣赏与学习（见巩固练习 第一题）,Dear Mike, I am glad to receive your email asking for my
2、 advice on how to improve your Chinese and I understand your problem. Here is my advice for improving your Chinese. Firstly, it is important to speak Chinese more, both in and out of class. Try your best to communicate with your classmates in Chinese. I think the more you speak, the better your Chin
3、ese will be. Secondly, it should be a great idea to pay more attention to TV hosts when you are watching TV at home. Im sure you will make great progress sooner or later. In conclusion, I sincerely hope my suggestion will help you. Wish you every success with your studies. Yours Faithfully, Li Hua,A
4、 Letter of Advice,Raise the problem,Advice,Wishes,First person,Present tense,Letter,Dear Mike, I am glad to receive your email asking for my advice on how to improve your Chinese and I understand your problem. Here is my advice for improving your Chinese. Firstly, it is important to speak Chinese mo
5、re, both in and out of class. Try your best to communicate with your classmates in Chinese. I think the more you speak, the better your Chinese will be. Secondly, it should be a great idea to pay more attention to TV hosts when you are watching TV at home. Im sure you will make great progress sooner
6、 or later. In conclusion, I sincerely hope my suggestion will help you. Wish you every success with your studies. Yours Faithfully, Li Hua,A Letter of Advice,Useful expressions:,1. I am glad to receive your email asking for my advice on . 2. Here is my advice for 3. it is important to do sth. 4. the
7、 more , the better . 5. it should be a great idea to do sth. 6. Im sure you will make great progress. 7. I sincerely hope my suggestion will help you. 8. Firstly, .Secondly, . In conclusion,.,Learn to make sentences.（见巩固练习 第二题）,1. 我收到你的来信询问我关于学习压力的问题，我深感遗憾。 （I am sorry to.） _ 2. 劳逸结合很重要。（combinewith
8、） _ 3. 强烈建议你保持均衡的饮食习惯。（keep a balanced diet） _ 4. 适当的户外运动是一个好主意。（outdoor activities） _ 5. 你吃的健康食品越多，你的身体就会越好。 _,Do you know any other useful expressions?,I am sorry to receive your letter asking for my advice on pressure.,It is important to combine study with play.,I strongly advise you to keep a ba
9、lanced diet.,It should be a great idea to do proper outdoor activities.,The more healthy food you eat, the better health you will have., Useful Sentences,假设你是李华，你的笔友Tony写信告诉你他最近在学习中的一些困难。他感到学习压力大，正常生活也受到影响，如睡眠不足，身体也开始亮起了红灯。请你给他写一封信，给他提供帮助。 注意： 1.词数100左右 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文流畅。,Learn write a letter of adv
10、ice.（见巩固练习 第三题）,Raise the problem,Advice,Wishes,First person,Present tense,Letter,Para 1. Raise the problem 问题1：_ 问题2：_ Para 2. Advice on how to deal with pressure. 建议1：_ 建议2：_ 建议3：_ Para 3. Wishes _,have some sleeping problems,have a bad health,It is important to combine study with play.,I strongly
11、 advise you to keep a balanced diet.,It should be a great idea to do proper outdoor activities.,I sincerely hope my suggestion will help you.,别忘了连接词：Firstly, .Secondly, . In conclusion,.,参考范文： Dear Tony, I am sorry to receive your letter asking for my advice on study pressure. You have some sleeping
12、 problems and a bad health, which have a bad effect on your study. Here is my advice. Firstly, it is important to combine study with play. Secondly, I strongly advise you to keep a balanced diet. The more healthy food you eat, the better your health you will have. Finally, it should be a great idea to do proper outdoor activities. I am sure you will improve your problems if you accept my advice. In conclusion, I hope my suggestions will help you. Wish you every success with your study. Yours, Li Hua,Thank You !,Thank you !,
