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1、四级作文中的常见错误,5. 四级作文中的常见错误,5.1. 词层面 5.1.1. 用词搭配不恰当 However, the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle. In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it. Nowadays, the traffic in big city is getting more and more crowded. In recent one and two years,
2、people who take TOEFL have decreased. In the past few years, grain has decreased by nearly 20%.,5. 四级作文中的常见错误,5.1. 词层面 5.1.1. 用词搭配不恰当 1. However, the speed of a car is much faster than that of a bicycle. However, the speed of a car is much higher than that of a bicycle. 说明：speed 只能和high, good, top,
3、normal, fantastic, moderate, surprising 等搭配，不能与fast, quick, slow 搭配，但可以说A car is much faster in speed than a bicycle.,2. In the past the price of milk was so expensive that most families could not afford it. In the past the price of milk was so high that most families could not afford it. 说明：price只能
4、和high, low, inflated, moderate, minimum, original, reduced, reasonable等搭配，不能与expensive, cheap搭配，但可以说In the past, milk was so expensive that most families couldnt afford it.,3. Nowadays, the traffic in big city is getting more and more crowded. Nowadays, the traffic in big city is getting heavier and
5、 heavier.,.,4. In recent one and two years, people who take TOEFL have decreased. In recent one and two years, the number of people who take TOEFL test has decreased. 5. In the past few years, grain has decreased by nearly 20%. In the past few years, the consumption/amount of grain has decreased by
6、nearly 20%.,.,5.1.2. 修饰语不当 He neither speaks English nor Chinese. Without television, people cannot get information which comes from other parts of the world immediately. At the age of six, my father began to give me English lessons. Having carried out economic reforms in our country, peoples living
7、 standard has greatly improved. To improve ones writing skill, regular practice is essential.,.,5.1.2. 修饰语不当 He neither speaks English nor Chinese. He speaks neither English nor Chinese.,Without television, people cannot get information which comes from other parts of the world immediately. Without
8、television, people cannot immediately get information which comes from other parts of the world.,.,3. At the age of six, my father began to give me English lessons. When I was six years old, my father began to give me English lessons.,4. Having carried out economic reforms in our country, peoples li
9、ving standard has greatly improved. Our government having carried out economic reforms in our country, peoples living standard has greatly improved. Since economic reforms have been carried out in our country, peoples living standard has greatly improved.,5. To improve ones writing skill, regular pr
10、actice is essential. To improve ones writing skill, one must practice regularly.,5.1.3. 把形容词和介词误作动词,This term well very busy. This term well be very busy. The cave like a room very much. The cave looked very much like a room. I very like this novel. I like this novel very much.,5.1.4. 少用连词,I started
11、 to play table-tennis in middle school, still play it now. I started to play table-tennis in middle school, and I still play it now. TV becomes an important part in our daily life. Because we cannot live without it. TV becomes an important part in ourdaily life, because we cannot live without it.,.,
12、5.1.5. 指代不当 People have been fighting against the influences of TV commercials, but it often proves useless. People have been fighting against the influences of TV commercials, but this effort often proves useless. Television provides us with a vivid, colorful world, which enables us to enjoy life t
13、horoughly. By providing us with a vivid, colorful world, television enables us to enjoy life thoroughly.,.,5.1.6. 一致方面的错误 Study hard now so that we can cope with the change and challenge of the twenty-first century. Study hard now so that you can cope with the change and challenge of the twenty-firs
14、t century. One serious problem human beings are faced with are how to use our natural resources economically. One serious problem human beings are faced with is how to use our natural resources economically. Now fruit and vegetables can be seen everywhere when it is in season. Now fruit and vegetabl
15、es can be seen everywhere when they are in season.,.,5.1.7. 词的误用 With the industrious development, there is a great need for different kinds of energy. With the industrial development, there is a great need for different kinds of energy. TV commercials have a profound influence on our every day life
16、. TV commercials have a profound influence on our everyday life. First we should use our natural resources in an economic way. First we should use our natural resources in an economical way.,5.2. 句子层面5.2.1. 中国式英语,Have money can do many things. 有钱可以做好多事情。 There are many people do morning exercise in the park. 有很多人在公园里面晨练。 His joke made me laugh to death. I was quite amused by the joke he just told. Chinese people are devoting themselves to the physical exercise. Why? Because they think it is
