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1、 高中英语新高考-英语写作进阶指导与解读：比较写作法优秀学生目前最大问题是海量刷题，但英语是一门特殊的学科，不同于理科，刷题不能成为英语学习的全部。我跟学生说，我们这门课，一周就一次，不做题，只做两件事：一、美文对比写作学习二、外刊阅读思维探索今天我简要说说美文对比写作学习。教学目标是：写出思维深刻的地道的英语作文，洞悉英语完形的写作语言风格。提前做的工作：我把英语完形的话题分为19个话题，每个话题下精心挑选4-6篇经典文章，共100篇。教学步骤：第一步：探索几个问题以上周的第一个话题：Dream为例，问题：What is dream?Why should we have a dream?Ho
2、w can we realize the dream?第二步：小组讨论第三步：小组汇报和教师点评第四步：阅读美文，对照自己的思维和英语作者的思维的差距，以及语言赏析。第五步：二次加工作文，吸收美文的语言和思维优点对自己的作文进行优化。教学过程的点滴：我发现学生的思维还是很有局限的，体现在以下几个方面：1、逻辑弱一个学生回答第二个问题说：With a dream, we will have a purpose.那我就要问：dream和purpose到底有什么区别？在我看来，这等于没有回答问题，因为梦想和目标是类似概念，不能给读者一个清晰的概念。实际上我第一个问题就是培养学生下定义的意识，但是这里
3、面问题更多了。2、好抽象学生写出的东西往往带有汉语写作思维的烙印，譬如喜欢写抽象的东西，而英语喜欢具体划。譬如第三个问题。有学生回答：We should make a plan.然后说计划的好处。那我就要问：计划是否要具体点？我说我的计划是当一流的科学家，或者国家领导，这可以吗？有同学说：有了计划、勤奋、不放弃就可以实现梦想。其实这就是泛泛而谈了，没有深入。一个人光有这三条只是理想化的，因为你没有考虑人性的弱点，不是说勤奋就能勤奋，不是说不放弃就不放弃的。在我指出了以上的缺点时，学生开始进行思考，我由此让他们阅读美文，让他们在美文里找出答案。结果非常理想的。因为答案就是美文的佳句所在，这样不仅
4、找到了答案，而且进行了语言的赏析。譬如：Why should we have a dream?They give us a vision of a better future. They nourish our spirit; they represent possibility even when we are dragged down by reality. They keep us going.以第一篇为例，我们不难发现作者的语言何其老道：梦想会让我想象未来的美好；滋润心灵；当我们被现实拖垮的时候，梦想为我们带来希望等等再看问题：How can we realize the dream?
5、In order to make real steps toward fulfilling our ultimate, big, splashy dreams, we have to start with concrete objectives. These are our goals.Take pride in your accomplishments, as they are stepping stones to your dreams. Understand that you may make mistakes, but dont let them discourage you.Set
6、a small, achievable goal. Remember, inertia is a powerful force.可见，当我们说计划的时候，作者说的时要指定具体的小计划（small concrete objective), 还要时常鼓励自己（take pride in your accomplishments),并且克服惯性，例如惰性（inertia)。这样写，就能真正打动读者，因为说到读者心坎上了，而这些就是看到了人性深处的东西。总之，通过对比写作，能更深刻体会自己的思维和语言的不足，然后对作者的语言有更深入的体会。其实，这种方法就是我自己的英语学习方法，我也是借鉴富兰克林的方
7、法。富兰克林说他小时候由于条件的限制，每看到一篇杂文，先自己根据题目写，然后对照作者的。这是一个好方法，但前提是：1、美文要真正的好2、要学会审视自己的思维的不足附上周美文：话题一：Dream1 We Need Dreams 我们需要梦想We all want to believe that we are capable of great feats, of reaching our fullest potential. We need dreams. They give us a vision of a better future. They nourish our spirit; they
8、 represent possibility even when we are dragged down by reality. They keep us going. Most successful people are dreamers as well as ordinary people who are not afraid to think big and dare to be great. Dreamers are not content with being merely mediocre, because no one ever dreams of going halfway.我
9、们都希望我们能成就伟大的事业，充分发挥我们的潜能。我们需要梦想。梦想给我们一个更好未来的想象。梦想可以滋养我们的精神；当我们被现实拖垮的时候，梦想为我们带来希望。梦想让我们继续前进。大多数成功人士都是梦想家，同时也是普通人，只是他们敢于梦想敢于成就伟大事业。梦想者不满足于做平庸的普通人，因为从来没有人想过要半途而废。When we were little kids, we didnt dream of a life of struggle and frustration. We dreamed of doing something big and splashy, something sign
10、ificant. We dreamed big.当我们还是孩子的时候，我们没有想过我们的人生会充满斗争与挫折。我们都梦想过做一番大事业，做有意义的事情。我们的梦想很大。We know now that we have to put in the effort to reach our dreams, but the tough part is that most of us dont know where to start working. We might have every intention of becoming Vice President in five years or run
11、ning across the finish line in a marathon or completing the novel we started years ago. But often we have no idea how to translate these dreams into actions.我们知道我们必须努力实现我们的梦想，但是最困难的是，我们当中的大多数人并不知道从哪里开始。我们可能会打算在五年后成为副总统或者跑完马拉松全程或者完成我们多年以前开始写的小说。但是我们常常不知道怎样将这些梦想付诸行动。In order to make real steps toward
12、fulfilling our ultimate, big, splashy dreams, we have to start with concrete objectives. These are our goals.为了使我们的伟大炫目的终极梦想成为现实，我们必须从具体的事情做起。这就是我们的目标。capable kepbl adj. 有能力的；能干的；有的可能性feat fit n. 技艺；功绩；技艺表演full of adj. 充满的nourish nr v. 滋养；给营养；培育；怀有mediocre midiokr adj. 平庸的；平凡的halfway hfwe adv. 半路地；在
13、中间；折中地splashy spli adj. 大而显眼的；引人注目的ultimate ltmt adj. 根本的；极限的；最后的；终极的concrete kkrit adj. 具体的；实质性的；混凝土的objective bdektv n. 目标；目的2 Catch The Dream追随梦想Catch the star that holds your destiny, the one that forever twinkles within your heart. Take advantage of precious opportunities while they still spark
14、le before you. Always believe that your ultimate goal is attainable as long as you commit yourself to it.Though barriers may sometimes stand in the way of your dreams, remember that your destiny is hiding behind them. Accept the fact that not everyone is going to approve of the choices youve made, h
15、ave faith in your judgment, catch the star that twinkles in your heart, and it will lead you to your destinys path. Follow that pathway and uncover the sweet sunrises that await you.Take pride in your accomplishments, as they are stepping stones to your dreams. Understand that you may make mistakes, but dont let them discourage you. Value your capabilities and talents for they are what make you truly unique. The greatest gifts in life are not purchased, but acquired through hard work and determination.追随能够改变你命运的那颗星，
