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1、One weekend in July,Janeand her husband,Tom, had driven three hours to camp overnight by alakein the forest. Unfortunately, on the way an unpleasant subject came up and they started to quarrel. By the time they reached the lake, Jane was so angry that she said to Tom. “Im going to find a better spot
2、 for us to camp” andwalkedaway. With no path to follow, Jane just walked on for quite a long time. After she hadclimbedto a high place, she turned around, hoping to see the lake. To her surprise, she saw nothing but forest and, far beyond, a snowcapped mountain top. She suddenly realized that she wa
3、s lost. “Tom! ”she cried. “Help!” No reply. If only she had not left her mobile phone in that bag with Tom. Jane kept moving, but the farther she walked, the more confused she became. As night was beginning to fall, Jane was so tired that she had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Jane
4、wanted very much to be with Tom and her family. She wanted to hold him and tell him how much she loved him. Jane rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. She could hear water trickling (滴落）somewhereat a distance. Quickly she followed the sound toa stream.To her great joy, she also saw some berr
5、y bushes. She drank and ate a few berries. Never in her life had she tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Jane began to walk along the stream and hope it would lead her to the lake. As she picked her way carefully along the stream, Jane heard ahelicopter. Is that for me? Unfortunately, the
6、trees made it impossible for people to see her from above. A few minutes later, another helicopter flew overhead. Jane took off heryellow blouse, thinking that she should go to an open area and flag them if they came back again.,真题再现,Read for main idea and writing purpose （归纳文本大意，推断写作意图） Step1,续写部分要
7、在文本大意和写作意图上与所给短文保持一致。,如何归纳文本大意： 提取记叙文六要素：when, where, who, why, how, what 表达为：什么人/物 （什么时间/地点）做了什么事，最终结果如何。,如何推断写作意图： 本文的中心话题是什么？ 作者向读者传达了有关话题的什么情和理？或让读者有何种感受？,Outline the possible plots or events in each paragraph（构思续写情节，搭建结构支架） Step 2,主 题,Beginning,Ending,情节,续写原文,Para. 1,Para. 2,情节,情节,记叙文结构图如下，故事情节
8、发展围绕主题发展，包含开端，发展，高潮，尾声和结束部分。 围绕main idea 和writing purpose，先预测Ending , 根据Para. 1和Para. 2所给的开头，预测Para. 1结尾部分，即 最后按照时间顺序，以主要人物动作和心理线索设定续写情节,部分。,形容词,“with”的复合结构,非谓语动词,情感描写的表达,Writing based on the outline and using sentence patterns （运用用句型模板，落笔成文） Step 3,Step 1 Read for main idea and writing purpose,Main
9、 idea: writing purpose:,After quarreling with her husband Tom, Jane was lost in the forest for three days and finally survived .,To show readers how Jane survived in the forest,Step 2 Outline the possible plots or events in each paragraph( Para. 1),Jane lay down,What did Jane do ?,Jane lay down,desp
10、erate, exausted,afraid,memories with her husband crowed in,courageous,made a fire and found berries to eat,settled/hopeful,fell fast asleep,confident,How did Jane feel?,Step 2 Outline the possible plots or events in each paragraph( Para. 2),What did Jane/Tom do ?,How did Jane/Tom feel?,walked along
11、the stream,hopeful,arrived at the open area, prayed, waited,patient,heard Toms voice,surprized and joyful,met again (Toms reaction :hugged Jane tightly),surprized and joyful,Tip 1: Language database for describing feelings,positive feelings,His eyes danced with joy and sweetness.,his facebeamed and
12、his bright smile lit up the room.,A broad smile spreadover Lucys face.,Her eyes twinkled with excitement.,Tears of excitement/joy welled up in his eyes.,Iwas seized by a strong sense of horror and my palms were sweating. （恐惧）,I felt so scared thatmy throat tightened and my knees feltweak. （害怕）,As th
13、e result of an accident,Tonywas suddenly thrown intoa world of darkness and sank into hopelessness. (绝望）,with tears streaming down his face/cheeks,She sobbed, hiding her face in her hands.（悲伤）,She was choked by fear./ Fear slowly creeps upon her. （害怕）,Tip 1: Language database for discribing feelings
14、,negative feelings,But no more helicopters came and it was getting dark again. Desperate and extremely exhuased, Jane lay down near a stone, with tears streaming down her face. Suddenly ,the memories with her husband crowded in, which made her take the courage to cope with the terrible situation. Fe
15、eling a bit settled and hopeful, she managed to make a fire at once.After that, She hurried to find some berries to eat when there was still dim light. Soon Jane couldnt resist the nap and fell fast asleep.,One possible version for Para. 1,It was daybreak and Jane woke up. After eating some berries
16、and drinking water, she walked along the stream, hoping to find her husband soon. To her great joy, she finally arrived at an open area. Praying that the helicoper would come back again, Jane sat down waiting patiently.After what semmed a long time, she could hear a voice somewhere at a distance. With joy welling up inside her, She struggled to her feet and shouted,“Im here！” Seeing Jane, Tom was also wild with joy and rushed to hug h
