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1、1,新东方在线考研写作,天津新东方学校国内考试部 刘烁炀,2,考研作文总体介绍,小作文（应用文） 要求：100words， 满分10分，平均分5.56分， 考场建议时间：20分钟， 考试内容：投诉，建议，邀请，辞职，道歉，申请，推荐，求职，离职等内容， 目标得分：8分；,3,考研作文总体介绍,大作文 以图画题为主， 早年考过图表文章，提纲作文，背景作文以及开放式作文 要求：160200字， 满分20分， 平均分11分， 考场建议时间：40分钟； 目标得分：14分,4,A节应用文的评分侧重点,信息点的覆盖 内容的组织 语言的准确性 格式 语域的恰当 注：对语法结构和词汇多样性的要求将根据具体试题
2、做调整。允许在作文中使用提示语中出现的关键词，但使用提示语中出现过的词组或句子将被扣分,5,B节作文的评分重点,内容的完整性 文章的组织连贯性 语法结构和词汇的多样性 语言的准确性,6,解读评分原则（以大作文为例）,奖励分 （3分）基准分（17分） 哪个更好提高呢?,7,奖励分给分原则,书法笔迹 大字vs小字 笔的选择,8,奖励分给分原则,正确正规可读 非正规标记： manufacturing units guarantee to turn out products of good quality; commercial enterprises swear to provide genuine
3、 commodities and polite and enthusiastic services. Can you find anything new and substantial other than their obligations, duties and jobs in these so called promises? I guess your answer will be negative. As a matter of fact, their intention to make such commitments is nothing but to put on civiliz
4、ed outer clothing to please or deceive the public.,66,范文分析,I dare say that your society is suffering corruption and cheat which are causing damage to society both materially and morally. But the hen and her like should know that by dishonest words no one can survive the intense competition under mar
5、ket economy system. They should remember the old saying, “Honesty is the best policy”.,67,范文分析,Here is an interesting cartoon: With her head held high, maybe singing, a hen stands proudly in the cartoon of the picture with a notice in hand. It says: “Firstly, I promise that the eggs I lay are absolu
6、tely round without any square corners. Secondly, they all have shells and cores.” Its so ridiculous that we cant help laughing. But after that there must be something left.,68,范文分析,Recently, many promises have come up in many walks of life, especially the service departments. They promise you that t
7、hey will provide you with warm smile service and good products. At first you are moved nearly to thank them. But if you think twice, you may wonder if those should be their duties. It goes without saying that factories should produce goods of quality, department stores should serve customers politel
8、y, buses should arrive on time, and so forth, because all of these are their responsibilities. But why should they promise what are their due jobs? One reason may be that they want to correct their past mistakes under the planned economic system. Another is that they intend to improve their images a
9、nd please the customers.,69,范文分析,In my opinion, trying to be better is worth welcoming, but making empty promises is unacceptable. If factories, stores and administrations do their jobs well rather than talk nonsense, our society will be more prosperous.,70,范文分析,As is shown in the cartoon, the hen m
10、ade two pieces of promises. On the one hand, she said that her eggs would be sure to be round. On the other hand, she could ensure that her eggs must have egg crust, egg white and egg yellow. According to the words given in the picture, we know that making promises is very popular among different de
11、partments and organizations. But its clear that what they promise is nothing but their obligations or duties. This phenomenon is not a good thing to our society.,71,范文分析,There are at least two main reasons, I think, for this phenomenon. In the first place, some enterprises want to pursuit fashion, b
12、ut have not true promise to make, so they promised what they didnt need to say. Secondly, it is a normal phenomenon in the process of reform and open door to the world. Maybe there are some other reasons, but the mentioned above is commonly accepted.,72,范文分析,As far as I am concerned, I believe that
13、this phenomenon is not a good thing, but with the reform and open door policy being carried out, and with the development of our national economy, these problems will be solved step by step. I am sure my opinion is sound and well-grounded.,73,范文分析,这个问题迟早会得到解决(消失). It will only be a matter of time be
14、fore the problem becomes things of the past. 万能句式结尾 请注意在时间状语从句中的时态问题”主将从现”,74,范文分析,总结 段落安排合理 聪明的学生举例子 句式复杂多样 用词有效替换 语法错误较少 我们的目标？,75,考研写作题型深度剖析,Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should 1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) explain its intended meaning,
15、and then 3) support your view with an example/examples.,76,考研写作题型深度剖析,05.1 养老足球赛 Write an essay of 160-200words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should first describe the drawing, then interpret its meaning, and give your comment on it. 描述图画阐释寓意给出评论,77,考研写作题型深度剖析,04.1 终点又是新起点： Stud
16、y the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should: 1 describe the drawing; 2 interpret its meaning, and 3 support your view with examples. 描述图画阐释寓意举例论证（至少2个）,78,考研写作题型深度剖析,03.1 温室的花朵经不起风雨 Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay in which you should: 1 describe the set of drawings and interpret its meaning 2 point out its implications in our life 描述图画阐释寓意生活中的意义？,79,考研写作题型深度剖析,02.1美国女孩子穿中国传统服饰： Study the following drawing carefully and write an essay entitled
