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1、Writing英文写作实例讲解,1. Warming up,t,r,a,n,s,p,o,r,t,Play a board race in groups.,Which common one is not here?,Bike.,r ilway,metr,ruck,Mobike 摩拜单车,2. Leading in,Please watch the video and tell how to ride it in English!,scan (扫描) it & unlock it,park along the road & pay online,Please tell how to ride a
2、Mobike in English!,写作背景: 摩拜单车现打算进入桂林市。目前, 桂林市政府广泛征集民众意见,看 是否让摩拜单车入驻桂林。,Do you agree or not? And why?,agree,convenient,park in a mess,3. Brainstorming,disagree,写作任务: 作为一名桂林的中学生,你赞成摩拜单车进入桂林 吗?请完成政府的民意调查,给政府写一封信表达 自己是否赞成及其原因(原因不少于3个)。 (80词左右),How many paragraphs (段落) are needed? Whats each paragraph ab
3、out?,What are the points (要点) in the letter?,4. Organizing your ideas,Your writing,Para 1,Para 2,Para 3,Your opinion (agree or not agree),Your reasons,Your ending / hope,Rule 1+1: 1 topic sentence + 1 supportive sentence,Firstly, Secondly, Besides, . .,4. Organizing your ideas,Im writing to express
4、my opinion that ,Firstly, Secondly, Besides, ,Therefore, I hope that ,4. Organizing your ideas,Does your writing have three clear paragraphs? Are your reasons good enough?,5. Rewriting online同写,Type in the writing number: 850118,For reference供参考:,Expressions (表达),扫描二维码scan the QR code 路边停车park along
5、 the road 在线支付pay online 方便的convenient 保护环境protect the environment,Dear Sir / Madam, Im writing to express my opinion that _ _. Firstly, _ _ Secondly, _ _Besides, _ I hope that _ Best wishes, Yours, Mary,Structure (结构),coherent (连贯的) complete (完整的) correct (准确的) concise (简明的) choice of words (用词),5C
6、,6. Evaluating(共评): What makes a good writing?,6. Evaluating (共评),1)Scoring (打分) Who is the best scorer?,6. Evaluating (共评),1)Scoring (打分) Who is the best scorer? 2)Underlining (划词) Which expressions do you like?,6. Evaluating (共评),1)Scoring (打分) Who is the best scorer? 2)Underlining (划词) Which expr
7、essions do you like? 3)Polishing (润色) (四人一组,从结构和语言两方面讨论如何优化; 讨论时,一名代表在线修改完后提交。) Which team gets the highest score?,7. Reflecting,Tips on writing,a nice structure,Rule 1+1,5C,keep polishing,.,Polish your writing on pigai.org with the tips you learned and see your progress,8. Assignment,Lets Mobike. Lets Green. Wish you success in the high school entrance examination!,