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1、在篇章中扫除词汇障碍： Our monitor is so excellent that all of us envy him. He, full of confidence, often teaches us maths with a teaching stick on the platform. He, as well as our classmates, accompanied by our devoted teachers is determined to work together to fullfill our own dreams. Maybe in the near futur
2、e, well succeed and pay for all the fares without relying on our parents.,Read and guess the meaning of the blue part,Read for basic information,Who characters,Susan,Mark,driver,what,Susan was _.,Mark _her.,how did the story develop?,where,on the bus,blind,accompanied,How did the story develop?,Susa
3、ns characteristic(性格特点): frustrated & hopeless,Marks characteristic: full of love and patience.,Theme: Her husbands love is more powerful than sight.,Susan lost sight,Mark drove her to work,Mark accompanied her to take the bus,Susan took the bus,?,Think further：,If you were her husband, would you le
4、t Susan take the bus alone? If not, what would you do?,Mark also accompanied Susan secretly.,Tears of happiness poured down Susans cheeks.,Maybe this is the reason why the driver envied her.,Para 1,Para 2,If you were Susan, what would you think and what would you do ?,Conclusion：Key points,Para.1 1)
5、 The driver told Susan her husband accompanied her to go to work secretly. 2) Use some expressions to describe the scene in detail. Para.2 1) Susan thinks back the scene that his husband accompanies her and maybe hug or kiss her husband to express her thanks and love. 2) 升华主题： Her husbands love ligh
6、ts her darkness.,Analyze(分析) some essays,Please analyze the essays from the following aspects: 1. whether stick to the clue and the theme 2. whether the expressions are right, appropriatepruprieit(适当的) or advanced 3. whether have enough words,share your opinion and your score,17分,21分,Helpful express
7、ions Para.1 1. What impresses me most is that. 2. say sth clearly 3. make a remark upon/on sb/ think highly of 4. be overwhelmingly(巨大地) moved Para.2 1. It is +被强调部分+ that+ 其他 2. Nothing is more delightful than doing . 3. with tears welling up in her eyes 4.express ones heartfelt gratitude/thanks to
8、 sb,Challenge yourself - polish the writing,Curious, she asked the driver, “Why do you say that you envy me?” The driver made a positive remark on/thought highly of Mark and said clearly, “what impresses me most is that a gentleman in a military uniform accompanies you to get on and get off the bus
9、secretly. He makes sure you have entered your office building safely before walking away. You are such a lucky lady that I envy you.” Hearing his words, Susan was overwhelmingly moved.,Share my essay,Tears of happiness poured down Susans cheeks. She was full of happiness when thinking about her husb
10、ands company. For her, nothing is more delightful than having such a caring husband. When she returned home from work, Susan hugged her husband and expressed her heartfelt gratitude to him. From then on, she wouldnt be afraid of walking in the darkness.Thats because it is her husbands love that lit
11、her life and made her full of confidence.,What have you learned in this period?,When you are writing/continuing a story, 1. stick to the clue (线索) and the theme. 2. pay attention to the leading characters and their personal characteristic(性格特点) 3. Use some advanced expressions in a logical way to perfect your essay.,
