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1、评分细则1composition,Band :5个等级 B5 , score:15-13 effective Communication with Accuracies B4, Score:12-10 Good communication with a few inaccurancies B3, score:9-7 Passable communicaton with some inaccuracies B2,score:6-4 Problematic communication with frequent inaccuracies B1, score:3-0 Almost no commun
2、icaton,评分维度,总分：15分 1.思想与表达（7分） 思想内容：内容切题、内容充实、观点明确、论据支持论点、有独到见解 表达效果:表达清晰流畅，有说服力 篇章组织结构:每段有主题句，句间衔接自然，短剑过渡自然，第一部分提出观点，最后一部分得出结论，段落排列自然合理,2.语言运用能力（6分） 准确性：语法正确、句子结构正确、固定搭配正确、习语正确、用词准确 丰富性：词汇丰富、句子形式多样 得体性：语气恰当，语言地道 流利度：完成规定字数,3.写作规范（2分） 单词拼、写正确、标点符号正确、大小写正确、书写美观、卷面整洁,评分细则2Note-Writing便条评分细则.doc,题型特点,1
3、.作文题型特点（20052010作文真题） 2005， 题目： My Ideal of a university Arts Festival Situation: The students union of your university is planning to hold an arts festival next semester, and they are inviting students to contribyte their ideas and suggestions as to how it should be organized or what should be incl
4、uded. 文章类型及相关成分： 议论文:通过阐述所提建议和看法的优点来论述心中理想状态下的艺术节。 说明文：具体说明自身理想状态下的艺术节的各个环节及相关信息。,2006 topic :you shoud supply an approprate title for your composition Situation : recently a Beijing information company did a survey of student life among more than 700 students in Beijing, Guangazhou,Xian,Chengdu ,Sh
5、anghai, Wuhan, Najing,Shenyang. The results have shown that 67 percent of students think that saving money is a good habit while the rest believe that using tomorrows money today is better.what do you think ? 文章类型及相关成分： 议论文: 通过一定逻辑论证来证明自身对“省钱”这一话题的看法,2007 Topic: is it wise to make friends online? Si
6、tuation : nowadays the Internet has become part of peoples life , and millions of young people have made friends online. 文章类型： 议论文： 通过一定逻辑论证来表明自身对“网上交友”这一话题的看法。,2008 Topic : The Benefits of Volunteering Situation : December 5th is International Volunteers Day. Since 1985,when the United announced th
7、e special day,tens of millions of people around the world who have unteered to help those in need . China now has 4.5 million registered volunteers who have provided more than 4.5 billion hours of volunteer work. What can you gain from volunteering . 文章类型: 议论文：通过论证说明志愿者可以得到的回报，志愿者行为的可提倡性 说明文：具体说明志愿者
8、的内涵和外延 记叙文：通过描述自己或他人做志愿者的事例来说明志愿行为的好处,2009 Topic :will tourism bring harm to the enviroment? Situation : toueism is a booming business in China .However ,some people worry that too many tourists may bring harm to the enviroment , while others dont think so. What is your opnion. 文章类型 ： 议论文： 旅游业是否会给环境
9、带来危害 说明文：说明旅游业导致危害的实例,2010 Topic : should college students hire cleaners? Situation : it was recently reported in a newspaper that six students who shared a dorm at a local university hired a cleaner to do laundry and cleaning once a week . And each of them paid her 60 yuan a month. This has led to
10、a heated debates as to whether college students should hire cleaners. 文章类型; 议论文 ： 通过讨论两方面的利弊来论证大学生是否有必要雇佣清洁工。,便条写作题型特点,20052010 写作真题 2005 Situation : You have got two tickets to a concert given by a famous pop band /orchestra. Write a note to your friend , Hilda/Mike, describing briefly what it is a
11、nd inviting her/him to come with you . 便条关系：朋友 情景内容要点： ：邀请朋友一起欣赏音乐会 1.介绍音乐 2 发出邀请 交际功能： 邀请,2006,Situation； You have got to know that your classmate Michal, is organizing a weekend excursion for the class. And you are thinking of joining the trip . write him a note ,expressing your interest in the ex
12、cursion and ask for information on two details related to the excursion. 便条双方关系： 同学 要点： 询问同学有关出游事宜 1.表示感兴趣 2. 询问有关出游的具体信息 交际功能： 询问,2007,Situation: Your classmate, Jimmy,is head of the universitys swimming club. He has invited you to jion the club , but you like some other sports. Write him a note ,d
13、eclining and explain why. 便条双方关系：同学 情景要点; 婉拒同学发出参加游泳俱乐部的邀请。 1.表示拒绝 2 解释原因 交际功能：拒绝 解释原因,2008,Situation : Jane ,your classmate, is thinking of subscribing an english-language newspaper . And you would like to recommend one to her. Write a note, telling her which newspaper it is and describing two feat
14、ures of the paper. 便条双方关系： 同学 情景要点： 推荐给同学一份英文报纸 1.报纸名称 2. 报纸特征 交际功能：建议、推荐,2009,Situation : lily your roommate , is looking for a part-time job in the coming summer vacation . You saw an ad for a private English tutor for a shoolboy. Write her note , telling her what the job is and strongly recommend
15、ing it to her. 便条双方关系：室友 情景要点： 推荐给室友一份做家教的暑期兼职工作 交际功能：建议、推荐,2010,Situation : Your good friend ,John , is thinking of organizing an end-of-the term party. Write Him a note , telling him that you like this idea and offer to help him .you have to be specific about how you can help him. 便条双方关系： 朋友 情景要点：提出原为聚会出力： 1 赞同举办聚会的想法 2. 表明如何出力 交际功能： 建议,
