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1、第三部分要诀四 (2012 全国新课标 卷) 假定你是李华， 你班同学决定为小明举办生日聚会。请你写信邀请外教Susan参加， 要点 包括： 1时间：周五晚8 点至 9 点 2地点：学生俱乐部 3内容：生日歌、蛋糕、游戏等 4要求：备小礼物 注意： 1词数 100 左右； 2可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3结语已为你写好。 Dear Susan， _ _ _ _ Yours， Li Hua Hi Susan， Were throwing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday. Wed like to invite you to the party.
2、 (1)We want to give him a surprise, but please keep quiet about it. Well gather at the Students Club at 8 ： 00 p m. the Friday, after the evening classes. And it will last about an hour. We each will prepare a little present. When he come, well light the candles and sing “ Happy Birthday” together f
3、or him. (2)Then the cake will be cut and well sing songs and play games. Itll be nice to see how excited he will be. Im sure youll have a good time at the party, too. Yours， Li Hua 1错误聚焦 (1)but 前后两句话的意思没有转折关系，只是一种承接关系，故要将but 改为 _。 (2) 表 达 “ 在 星 期 几 ” 时 ， “ 星 期 ” 不 用 加 任 何 冠 词 或 指 示 词 ， 故 the 要 改 为 _
4、。 (3)在时间状语从句中，从句用一般现在时，主句用一般将来时，故come 要改为 _。 【答案】 (1)and(2)this(3)comes 2高分靓句 (1) 将 画 线 句 子 (1) 改 为 含 有 非 谓 语 动 词 的 句 子 ： Please keep quiet about it _. (2)将画线句子(2)改成主语是we，多个并列谓语动词的句子：Well cut the cake， _. 【答案】 (1)in order to/to give him surprise (2)sing songs and play games 参考范文 Hi Susan， Were throw
5、ing a surprise party for Xiaomings birthday. And I am writing to invite you to our party. Would you like to come and join us? We will be very glad if you can come. The party will start at 8 oclock on Friday, and will last for an hour. We will meet in the Students Club. Then we will have a birthday s
6、ong, cake for Xiaoming. We will play some games, too. The only requirement is preparing a small gift for Xiaoming. It will be very cold at night. Please wear more clothes. I am waiting for your reply. Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 假定你是学生会主席李华，学生会将举办迎新生联欢晚会，你希望外籍教师Tom 能参加， 于是你给他写一封邀请信。要点如下： 1晚会开始、结束时间以及举办地
7、点。 2表演内容。 3邀请对方参加的原因以及询问对方的意向。 注意： 1.词数 100 左右。 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。3.开头语和结束语已为你 写好。 _ _ _ _ _ 【答案】 One possible version： Dear Tom， How are you doing? Currently, in order to welcome the new students, an evening party will be held in our school. As the chairman of the Students Union, Im writing to invi
8、te you to join us. Here is a brief schedule. First, it will be held in the school meeting hall from 7： 00 to 9： 00 p. m. next Sunday. Additionally, there will be many wonderful performances presented by the teachers and students, such as singing, dancing, performing plays and so on. Everyone is long
9、ing for your coming, and it would be more cheerful if you could give a performance. I sincerely hope that you can accept our invitation and I have the confidence that we students would be extremely delighted to see you. Please let me know your decision if it is convenient for you. I am looking forward to your reply. Yours， Li Hua
