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1、四级作文范文赏析及点评,2011.12 Directions: Youre allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Nothing Succeeds Without a Strong Will by commenting on the humorous saying, Quitting smoking is the easiest thing in the world. Ive done it hundreds of time.Youd write at least 120 words but no more than 180 wo
2、rds.,There is an old saying: where there is a will, there is a way. It tells us that a strong will is the most essential quality that anyone who wants to achieve success. It can contribute a lot to ones success.,Although “All roads lead to Rome”, none of them is completely smooth. Our life is filled
3、 with obstacles which may make us feel so hopeless that we may choose to give up. At the crucial moment, strong will helps a lot. As a matter of fact, the ability to work through difficult situation and unfortunate events with strong will can make one stronger and more capable. In other words, if we
4、 want to realize lifes goal, we must keep forging ahead with strong consciousness.,From what has been discussed above, we can see that the establishment of tough determination is of great importance to everyone. With a strong will, including our knowledge, we will be able to deal with any situation
5、in our life. Whatever we do, as long as we stick to and do not give up easily, we will realize the goal at last.,2011.6 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the topic of Online Shopping. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below:
6、 1.现在网上购物已成为一种时尚 2.网上购物有很多好处，但也有不少问题 3.我的建议,Nowadays, can we find a person who has not experienced online shopping? Definitely not. Online shopping is coming into fashion in most of cities due to the rapid development of internet technology.,Online shopping is welcomed by most people due to various
7、reasons. From the perspective of consumer, it can save some time for people who dont have much spare time. Just click the mouse, they can get whatever they want while staying at home. For the retailers, it can cut some costs for those who dont have much circulating funds. They dont have to rent a ho
8、use and spend money on employees compared with the traditional trade mode. However, there are still some defects in online shopping. First, face to face deal makes online shopping less reliable and trustworthy. Second, people will lose the fun of bargain.,It is undeniable that shopping on the intern
9、et has become an irresistible trend in modern society. Its of great urgency that we need to regulate the relative laws in accordance with the rapid growth of online shopping. Only in this way can we enjoy the pleasure and convenience of online shopping without the concern of being treated.,HowShould
10、ParentsHelp StudentstoBeIndependent1、目前不少父母为孩子包办一切2、为了让孩子独立，父母应该,In our modern and contemporary society , whether parents should offer a helping hand to making their children independence has become a hot button . In other words , we cannot afford to lose sight of the trend that the kids independenc
11、e has become a social focus , which triggers wide concerns across the nation , especially the parents . This tide does exist in our society .,In our society , a sizable portion of parents , especially the young parents , spoil their kids from all aspects. Specifically speaking , they help their chil
12、dren pile and clear up their school bags , wash their clothes ,even socks . Besides, they also talk to their children “ If only you succeed in your study , please leave anything to me”. This prevalent tide sparks our deep thought.,From my viewpoint , in an effort to reverse and eliminate this unfavo
13、rable trend mentioned above , considering the seriousness of this headache , parents are supposed to teach their kids how to cope with a variety of complex situations. In addition, parents also should take every opportunity to equip themselves with advanced educative knowledge and keep pace with the
14、 times and communicate with other parents who enjoys a wealth of educative experiences. In a word, We all hope that these children have less reliance on their parents and become independent economically and mentally.,Nowadays, theres an increasing number of household in China that has an only one ch
15、ild. Most of parents love and care for children so much that children has less chances to deal with problems by themselves. Consequently, children get used to depending on their parents in everything and lack of ability to solve problems independently, which is bad for their growing.,There are some
16、effective ways for parents to help their children be independent. To start with, parents should give their children more chances to experience the world and life around them. Thus their children can enhance the capability to overcome the difficulties and handle problems independently. In addition, parents should offer enough assistance when their children need some instructions and advices. In this way, they depend on their parents in a right way and can solve problems independently when they f
